Date: Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:22:02 GMT From: Marian Cerny <jojo@matfyz.cz> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/103327: Typos in articles/vm-design Message-ID: <200609171422.k8HEM2Oe036044@www.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <200609171430.k8HEULqv024707@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 103327 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Typos in articles/vm-design >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Sep 17 14:30:20 GMT 2006 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marian Cerny >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: I have found two typos in Articles > Design elements of the FreeBSD VM system (vm-design). The first one is in section 2 VM Objects. There is one extra right parenthesis at the end of the sentence: "The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a “real” file)." The second one is in section 9 Bonus QA session by Allen Briggs, question 9.5. Finally, in the page coloring section, it might help to have a little more description of what you mean here. I did not quite follow it. In the sentence "If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0!" there is one extra word offset. >How-To-Repeat: Look at http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/vm-objects.html http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/allen-briggs-qa.html#Q9.5. >Fix: Change: The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a “real” file). To: The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a “real” file. And: If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0! To: If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0! >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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