From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 5 12:13:41 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A07CB1065673 for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 12:13:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from martin.johnson.uk@gmail.com) Received: from mail-wy0-f182.google.com (mail-wy0-f182.google.com [74.125.82.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 11A008FC17 for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 12:13:40 +0000 (UTC) Received: by wyf19 with SMTP id 19so11233401wyf.13 for ; Sun, 05 Dec 2010 04:13:39 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:sender:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=FrkXVMWGBla2KyHq317kzLCgcBinvhQzfJUyOWU8R3Y=; b=kszQB20MSXNG0t2fT+TEtwhofMtM4uVk/ittOLbfW0kpOWTTlRL2Qunw3BZP97QWu+ 78vFClKRtBr/2HFL2x2Wkg14T1jxFt7tuNVM/RjsVxU7PM/q6NC+bWgpLLECRGB/GwnC czmWLQlwu6Do/sODbwdE0h1Mj+Wo+Guredj1Y= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=sender:message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject :x-enigmail-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=M0WTo9ZbYB9Tb4D03EubQlud7BnW9IlUx+wjb1cxCIfJeN4KKQrKOM4pcwlqLbBCLB NdqLATFWL2Vkwyr/oDHzLbvAxpmeCORYIW2FDE42a5lvlfK2wMDmCG6MEFo4GyDjYVK5 Hhp1npXNuFAaVKLlLZY1fUn7F2kgpT5y0PJQM= Received: by 10.216.171.19 with SMTP id q19mr1407772wel.53.1291549690857; Sun, 05 Dec 2010 03:48:10 -0800 (PST) Received: from macbookpro.internal ([217.169.18.188]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id y80sm1801523weq.3.2010.12.05.03.48.10 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Sun, 05 Dec 2010 03:48:10 -0800 (PST) Sender: Martin Johnson Message-ID: <4CFB7BF9.3030700@martinshouse.com> Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2010 11:48:09 +0000 From: Martin Johnson User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; Intel Mac OS X 10.6; en-GB; rv:1.9.2.12) Gecko/20101027 Thunderbird/3.1.6 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Enigmail-Version: 1.1.1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: Subject: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/handbook/makeworld.html X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2010 12:13:41 -0000 Hello, I'd like to suggest two minor edits for that page. Firstly in the main text :- "mergemaster Now you can update the remaining configuration files, since you have a new world on disk." Suggest "mergemaster -F" (to suppress prompting about countless files where only the VCSID has changed since the last release, and the user hadn't changed that particular default config file). Secondly in the summary paragraph:- # adjkerntz -i # mount -a -t ufs # mergemaster -p # cd /usr/src # installworld # mergemaster # reboot The second mergemaster should be "mergemaster -F". The first one is probably best left as is, since older versions of mergemaster don't have -F. Kind regards, - Martin. From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 5 17:17:13 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 19B95106566B for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 17:17:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-iw0-f182.google.com (mail-iw0-f182.google.com [209.85.214.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E614E8FC0A for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 17:17:12 +0000 (UTC) Received: by iwn39 with SMTP id 39so13609521iwn.13 for ; Sun, 05 Dec 2010 09:17:12 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.231.10.200 with SMTP id q8mr4666594ibq.144.1291568108720; Sun, 05 Dec 2010 08:55:08 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.231.79.82 with HTTP; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 08:54:48 -0800 (PST) From: Eitan Adler Date: Sun, 5 Dec 2010 11:54:48 -0500 Message-ID: To: doc@freebsd.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Cc: Subject: [patch] add link to WantedPorts to handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2010 17:17:13 -0000 I think it would be useful to note the WantedPorts page from the handbook. Index: book.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.1087 diff -u -r1.1087 book.sgml --- book.sgml 30 Nov 2010 22:42:02 -0000 1.1087 +++ book.sgml 5 Dec 2010 16:42:54 -0000 @@ -86,6 +86,10 @@ typing :set tabstop=4 once the file has been loaded. + + Looking for something easy to start with? Take a look at the + list of requested ports and see if you work on one (or more). + [eitan@voodoo ...ooks/porters-handbook From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 5 19:53:42 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DC5EF1065672 for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 19:53:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from wonkity.com (wonkity.com [67.158.26.137]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9DCED8FC1B for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 19:53:42 +0000 (UTC) Received: from wonkity.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by wonkity.com (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oB5JdMtF019256; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 12:39:22 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from localhost (wblock@localhost) by wonkity.com (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) with ESMTP id oB5JdM6W019253; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 12:39:22 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Date: Sun, 5 Dec 2010 12:39:22 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block To: Eitan Adler In-Reply-To: Message-ID: References: User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (BSF 1167 2008-08-23) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.2.6 (wonkity.com [127.0.0.1]); Sun, 05 Dec 2010 12:39:22 -0700 (MST) Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [patch] add link to WantedPorts to handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2010 19:53:42 -0000 On Sun, 5 Dec 2010, Eitan Adler wrote: > I think it would be useful to note the WantedPorts page from the handbook. > > Index: book.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.1087 > diff -u -r1.1087 book.sgml > --- book.sgml 30 Nov 2010 22:42:02 -0000 1.1087 > +++ book.sgml 5 Dec 2010 16:42:54 -0000 > @@ -86,6 +86,10 @@ > typing :set tabstop=4 once the file has been > loaded. > > + > + Looking for something easy to start with? Take a look at the > + list of requested ports and see if you work on one (or more). > + > > > Missing a "can" in the last sentence: "... see if you can work on..." From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 5 19:54:01 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 719D0106566C for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 19:54:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-iw0-f182.google.com (mail-iw0-f182.google.com [209.85.214.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 45B3D8FC1F for ; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 19:54:01 +0000 (UTC) Received: by iwn39 with SMTP id 39so13741248iwn.13 for ; Sun, 05 Dec 2010 11:54:00 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.231.10.200 with SMTP id q8mr4840586ibq.144.1291578840612; Sun, 05 Dec 2010 11:54:00 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.231.79.82 with HTTP; Sun, 5 Dec 2010 11:53:40 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: References: From: Eitan Adler Date: Sun, 5 Dec 2010 14:53:40 -0500 Message-ID: To: Warren Block Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [patch] add link to WantedPorts to handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2010 19:54:01 -0000 Thanks - fixed and PR submitted. On Sun, Dec 5, 2010 at 2:39 PM, Warren Block wrote: > On Sun, 5 Dec 2010, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> I think it would be useful to note the WantedPorts page from the handboo= k. >> >> Index: book.sgml >> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D >> RCS file: >> /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v >> retrieving revision 1.1087 >> diff -u -r1.1087 book.sgml >> --- book.sgml =C2=A0 30 Nov 2010 22:42:02 -0000 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A01.10= 87 >> +++ book.sgml =C2=A0 5 Dec 2010 16:42:54 -0000 >> @@ -86,6 +86,10 @@ >> =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0typing :set tabstop=3D4 once the file has been >> =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0loaded. >> =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 >> + =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 >> + =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Looking for something easy to start with? T= ake a look at the >> + =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0list of >> requested ports and see if you work on one (or more). >> + =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 >> =C2=A0 =C2=A0 >> >> =C2=A0 =C2=A0 > > Missing a "can" in the last sentence: > > "... see if you can work on..." > --=20 Eitan Adler From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 6 02:28:22 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7E773106566B; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 02:28:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from linimon@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 547B68FC0A; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 02:28:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oB62SMJo094535; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 02:28:22 GMT (envelope-from linimon@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from linimon@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id oB62SMsD094531; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 02:28:22 GMT (envelope-from linimon) Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 02:28:22 GMT Message-Id: <201012060228.oB62SMsD094531@freefall.freebsd.org> To: linimon@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: linimon@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/152852: [patch] add link to WantedPorts to handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2010 02:28:22 -0000 Synopsis: [patch] add link to WantedPorts to handbook Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc Responsible-Changed-By: linimon Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Dec 6 02:28:05 UTC 2010 Responsible-Changed-Why: reclassify. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=152852 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 6 08:40:08 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 29F941065698 for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 08:40:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F259B8FC0C for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 08:40:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oB68e6fA011092 for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 08:40:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id oB68e6Ls011091; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 08:40:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 08:40:06 GMT Message-Id: <201012060840.oB68e6Ls011091@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Maxim Konovalov Cc: Subject: Re: docs/152805: [patch] ru/security/security.sgml: MFen 1.214 -> 1.216 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Maxim Konovalov List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2010 08:40:08 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/152805; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Maxim Konovalov To: pluknet Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/152805: [patch] ru/security/security.sgml: MFen 1.214 -> 1.216 Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 11:31:58 +0300 (MSK) Feel free to commit these patches yourself. -- Maxim Konovalov From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 6 11:06:07 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2BC2E1065670 for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 11:06:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 18B158FC1E for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 11:06:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oB6B67Nb067483 for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 11:06:07 GMT (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id oB6B66Iq067481 for freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 11:06:06 GMT (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 11:06:06 GMT Message-Id: <201012061106.oB6B66Iq067481@freefall.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: freefall.freebsd.org: gnats set sender to owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org using -f From: FreeBSD bugmaster To: FreeBSD doc list Cc: Subject: Current unassigned doc problem reports X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2010 11:06:07 -0000 (Note: an HTML version of this report is available at http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr-summary.cgi?category=doc .) The following is a listing of current problems submitted by FreeBSD users. These represent problem reports covering all versions including experimental development code and obsolete releases. S Tracker Resp. Description -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- o docs/152852 doc [patch] add link to WantedPorts to handbook o docs/152805 doc [patch] ru/security/security.sgml: MFen 1.214 -> 1.216 o docs/152103 doc man ipnat is out-dated o docs/151952 doc No example for scanning for SSIDs in ifconfig(8) man p o docs/151752 doc pw.conf(5) doesn't define format for file clearly o docs/151478 doc [patch] Russian porters-handbook: MFen 1.440 -> 1.1077 o docs/151367 doc [patch] Update for puc.4 man page o docs/151104 doc mksnap_ffs(8) should mention 20 snapshot limit on UFS o docs/150991 doc [patch] Install upgtfw using pkg_add as advised in upg o docs/150917 doc [patch] icmp.4, wrong description of icmplim and icmpl o docs/150877 doc ambiguity in newsyslog(8) man page about zfs with comp o docs/150736 doc [handbook] ipfw docs: rule number is optional, not man o docs/150365 doc [make.conf] [patch] remove BDECFLAGS from make.conf(5) o docs/150255 doc dtrace description should mention makeoptions DEBUG=-g o docs/150244 doc [patch] DRIVER_MODULE(9): MULTI_DRIVER_MODULE is only o docs/150219 doc zfs(8) manual page misses jail/unjail o docs/150124 doc Request for update of "building the kernel" section of o docs/149950 doc [patch] glob(3)'s reference to regex(3) is spelled inc o docs/149845 doc unify spelling of blocksize, block-size and block size o docs/149574 doc [patch] update mi_switch(9) man page o docs/149522 doc Russian network article: incorrect translation about n o docs/149106 doc xfs.5: non-working mount example o docs/149051 doc [request] No document for clang or clang++ o docs/149047 doc [patch] tcsh(1) bears no mention of brace expansion in o docs/148987 doc [patch] {MD[245]|SHA_|SHA1_|SHA256_}{End|File|FileChun o docs/148680 doc [sysctl][patch] Document some sys/kern sysctls o docs/148071 doc Failover mode between wired and wireless interfaces o docs/148037 doc bge(4) does not list all devices in if_bge.c / if_bger o docs/147995 doc elf.5 man page has has missing reference o docs/146958 doc bad link to "XaQti XMAC II datasheet" in sk(4) manual o docs/146521 doc [handbook] Update IPv6 system handbook section to ment o docs/146047 doc [kld] [patch] the kldstat(2) manual needs to be more p o docs/145719 doc [patch] 7.3 relnotes erroneously describes new getpage o docs/145699 doc hexdump(1) mutes all format qualifier output following o docs/145644 doc Add artical about creating manpage from scratch o docs/145069 doc Dialup firewalling with FreeBSD article out dated. o docs/145067 doc Remove all reference to floppy installs o docs/145066 doc Update for new uart dev names for serial port. o docs/144818 doc all mailinglist archives dated 19970101 contain traili o docs/144630 doc [patch] domainname(1) manpage contains old information o docs/144543 doc [handbook] IPFW doc change o docs/144537 doc Missing _mdconfig_list and _mdconfig2_list explanation o docs/144515 doc [handbook] Expand handbook Table of contents o docs/144488 doc share/examples/etc/make.conf: contains dangerous examp o docs/144408 doc [patch] update makefs(8) (remove device option) o docs/143850 doc procfs(5) manpage for status > controlling terminal is o docs/143472 doc gethostname(3) references undefined value: HOST_NAME_M o docs/143416 doc [handbook] IPFW handbook page issues o docs/143408 doc man filedesc(9) is missing o docs/142917 doc top(1) man page does not include information about VCS o docs/142437 doc [request] Errata Notices Index missing a docs/142341 doc jail(8): Jail escape when cwd is moved from the host s o docs/142168 doc [patch] ld(1): ldd(1) not mentioned in ld(1) manpage o docs/141032 doc misleading documentation for rtadvd.conf(5) raflags se s docs/140847 doc [request] add documentation on ECMP and new route args o docs/140495 doc [patch] /etc/rc.conf.d is not documented in rc.conf(5) o docs/140457 doc [patch] Grammar fix for isspace(3) o docs/140444 doc [patch] New Traditional Chinese translation of custom- o docs/140435 doc ls(1), section STANDARD: the -A is exception from POSI o docs/140375 doc [UPDATE] Updated zh_TW.Big5/articles/nanobsd o docs/140369 doc [patch] src/contrib/pf/man/pf.4 o docs/140075 doc release notes: missing word "NOT", which changes all t o docs/139336 doc [request] ZFS documentation suggestion o docs/139165 doc gssapi.3 man page out of sync with between crypto and o docs/139018 doc translation of submitting.sgml from docproj/submitting o docs/138887 doc manpage ports(7) incorrect o docs/138845 doc Exceeding kern.ipc.maxpipekva refers to tuning(7) whic o docs/138663 doc system(3) man page confuses users about "return value o docs/138485 doc bpf(4) and ip(4) man pages missing important corner ca o bin/137156 doc [patch] fix dump(8) cryptic output on reporting progre o docs/136712 doc [handbook] [patch] draft new section on gmirror per pa o docs/136666 doc [handbook] Configure serial port for remote kernel deb o docs/136035 doc ftpchroot(5) omits an important option p docs/136029 doc MALLOC_PRODUCTION knob should be mentioned somewhere, o docs/135516 doc [patch] pax(1) manual not mentioning chflags unawarene o docs/135475 doc [patch] jot(1) manpage and behaviour differ o docs/134222 doc installation failure of japanese docs o docs/134123 doc The RUNQUEUE(9) man page is out of date o docs/132884 doc [request] No manpage for SYSINIT and SYSUNINIT o docs/132839 doc [patch] Fix example script in ldap-auth article o docs/132718 doc [handbook] Information about adding a new mirror is ou o docs/132260 doc dhcpd(8) pid not stored in documented location o docs/132190 doc EPERM explanation for send(2), sendto(2), and sendmsg( o docs/132113 doc [handbook] Update handbook jails creation o docs/131918 doc [patch] Fixes for the BPF(4) man page o docs/131684 doc [patch] articles/linux-comparison: replace Addenda by o docs/131626 doc [patch] dump(8) "recommended" cache option confusing o docs/131625 doc [patch] Typos in ed(1) man page o docs/130364 doc Man page for top needs explanation of CPU states o docs/130238 doc nfs.lockd man page doesn't mention NFSLOCKD option or o docs/129671 doc New TCP chapter for Developer's Handbook (from rwatson o docs/129464 doc using packages system o docs/129095 doc ipfw(8): Can not check that packet originating/destine s docs/128356 doc [request] add Firefox plugin for FreeBSD manual pages o docs/127908 doc [patch] readdir(3) error documentation s docs/127844 doc Example code skeleton_capture_n.c in meteor(4) manpage o docs/126590 doc [patch] Write routine called forever in Sample Echo Ps o docs/126484 doc libc function res-zonscut2 is not documented o docs/125921 doc lpd(8) talks about blocks in minfree while it is KB in o docs/125751 doc man 3 pthread_getschedparam section ERRORS incomplete f docs/122052 doc minor update on handbook section 20.7.1 o docs/121952 doc Handbook chapter on Network Address Translation wrong o docs/121585 doc [handbook] Wrong multicast specification o docs/121565 doc dhcp-options(5) manpage incorrectly formatted omitting s docs/121541 doc [request] no man pages for wlan_scan_ap o docs/121312 doc RELNOTES_LANG breaks release if not en_US.ISO8859-1 o docs/121173 doc [patch] mq_getattr(2): mq_flags mistakenly described a s docs/120917 doc [request]: Man pages mising for thr_xxx syscalls o docs/120539 doc Inconsistent ipfw's man page o docs/120125 doc [patch] Installing FreeBSD 7.0 via serial console and o docs/120024 doc resolver(5) and hosts(5) need updated for IPv6 o docs/119545 doc books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting o docs/118902 doc [patch] wrong signatures in d2i_RSAPublicKey man pages o docs/118332 doc man page for top does not describe STATE column wait e o docs/118214 doc close(2) error returns incomplete o docs/118020 doc ipfilter(4): man pages query for man 4 ipfilter return o docs/117747 doc 'break' system call needs a man page o docs/116116 doc mktemp (3) re/move note o docs/116080 doc PREFIX is documented, but not the more important LOCAL o docs/115065 doc [patch] sync ps.1 with p_flag and keywords o docs/114371 doc [patch] [ip6] rtadvd.con(5) should show how to adverti o docs/114139 doc mbuf(9) has misleading comments on M_DONTWAIT and M_TR o docs/113194 doc [patch] [request] crontab.5: handling of day-in-month o docs/112804 doc groff(1) command should be called to explicitly use "p o docs/112682 doc Handbook GEOM_GPT explanation does not provide accurat o docs/111425 doc Missing chunks of text in historical manpages o docs/111265 doc [request] Clarify how to set common shell variables o docs/111147 doc hostapd.conf is not documented o docs/110999 doc carp(4) should document unsupported interface types o docs/110692 doc wi(4) man page doesn't say WPA is not supported o docs/110376 doc [patch] add some more explanations for the iwi/ipw fir o docs/110253 doc [patch] rtprio(1): remove processing starvation commen o docs/110062 doc [patch] mount_nfs(8) fails to mention a failure condit p docs/110061 doc [patch] tuning(7) missing reference to vfs.read_max o docs/109981 doc No manual entry for post-grohtml o docs/109977 doc No manual entry for ksu o docs/109973 doc No manual entry for c++filt o docs/109972 doc No manual entry for zless/bzless f docs/109226 doc [request] No manual entry for sntp o docs/109201 doc [request]: manual for callbootd a docs/108980 doc list of missing man pages o docs/106135 doc [request] articles/vinum needs to be updated o docs/105608 doc fdc(4) debugging description staled o docs/104879 doc Howto: Listen to IMA ADPCM .wav files on FreeBSD box o docs/102719 doc [patch] ng_bpf(4) example leads to unneeded promiscuos o docs/101464 doc sync ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/portbuild/article.html with o docs/100196 doc man login.conf does explain not "unlimited" o docs/99506 doc FreeBSD Handbook addition: IPv6 Server Settings o docs/98974 doc Missing tunables in loader(8) manpage o docs/98115 doc Missing parts after rendering handbook to RTF format o docs/96207 doc Comments of a sockaddr_un structure could confuse one o docs/94625 doc [patch] growfs man page -- document "panic: not enough o docs/92626 doc jail manpage should mention disabling some periodic sc o docs/91506 doc ndis(4) man page should be more specific about support o docs/91174 doc [REQUEST] Handbook: Addition of Oracle 9i installation o docs/91149 doc read(2) can return EINVAL for unaligned access to bloc o docs/88512 doc [patch] mount_ext2fs(8) man page has no details on lar o docs/87936 doc Handbook chapter on NIS/YP lacks good information on a o docs/87857 doc ifconfig(8) wireless options order matters o docs/86342 doc bikeshed entry of Handbook is wrong o docs/85128 doc [patch] loader.conf(5) autoboot_delay incompletly desc o docs/84956 doc [patch] intro(5) manpage doesn't mention API coverage o docs/84932 doc new document: printing with an Epson ALC-3000N on Free o docs/84670 doc [patch] tput(1) manpage missing ENVIRONMENT section wi o docs/84317 doc fdp-primer doesn't show class=USERNAME distinctively o docs/84271 doc [patch] compress(1) doesn't warn about nasty link hand o docs/83820 doc getino(3) manpage not installed o docs/81611 doc [patch] natd runs with -same_ports by default o docs/78480 doc Networked printer setup unnecessarily complex in handb o docs/61605 doc [request] Improve documentation for i386 disk geometry o docs/61301 doc [patch] Manpage patch for aue(4) to enable HomePNA fun o docs/59835 doc ipfw(8) man page does not warn about accepted but mean o docs/59477 doc Outdated Info Documents at http://docs.freebsd.org/inf o docs/59044 doc [patch] doc.docbook.mk does not properly handle a sour s docs/54752 doc bus_dma explained in ISA section in Handbook: should b o docs/53751 doc bus_dma(9) incorrectly documents BUS_DMA_ALLOCNOW o docs/53596 doc Updates to mt(1) manual page o docs/53271 doc bus_dma(9) fails to document alignment restrictions o docs/51480 doc Multiple undefined references in the FreeBSD manual pa o docs/50211 doc [patch] doc.docbook.mk: fix textfile creation o docs/48101 doc [patch] Add documentation on the fixit disk o docs/43823 doc [patch] update to environ(7) manpage o docs/41089 doc pax(1) -B option does not mention interaction with -z o docs/40423 doc Keyboard(4)'s definition of parameters to GETFKEY/SETF o docs/38982 doc [patch] developers-handbook/Jail fix o docs/38556 doc EPS file of beastie, as addition to existing examples s docs/35678 doc docproj Makefiles for web are broken for paths with sp s docs/33589 doc [patch] to doc.docbook.mk to post process .tex files. a docs/30008 doc [patch] French softupdates document should be translat o docs/27605 doc [patch] Cross-document references () o docs/26286 doc *printf(3) etc should gain format string warnings o docs/24786 doc missing FILES descriptions in sa(4) s docs/20028 doc ASCII docs should reflect tags in the sourc 193 problems total. From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 6 15:19:43 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9E6F31065697; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:19:43 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 74FF88FC15; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:19:43 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oB6FJhBj032462; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:19:43 GMT (envelope-from jhb@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from jhb@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id oB6FJhK3032458; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:19:43 GMT (envelope-from jhb) Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:19:43 GMT Message-Id: <201012061519.oB6FJhK3032458@freefall.freebsd.org> To: jhb@FreeBSD.org, jhb@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: jhb@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/132884: [request] No manpage for SYSINIT and SYSUNINIT X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2010 15:19:43 -0000 Synopsis: [request] No manpage for SYSINIT and SYSUNINIT State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: jhb State-Changed-When: Mon Dec 6 15:19:23 UTC 2010 State-Changed-Why: Manpage committed to HEAD. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=132884 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 6 15:20:15 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B8B8F106566B for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:20:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A642A8FC18 for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:20:15 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oB6FKFfm032595 for ; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:20:15 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id oB6FKFFj032593; Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:20:15 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:20:15 GMT Message-Id: <201012061520.oB6FKFFj032593@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) Cc: Subject: Re: docs/132884: commit references a PR X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: dfilter service List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2010 15:20:15 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/132884; it has been noted by GNATS. From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/132884: commit references a PR Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 15:19:08 +0000 (UTC) Author: jhb Date: Mon Dec 6 15:19:03 2010 New Revision: 216232 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/216232 Log: Add a manpage for SYSINIT() and SYSUNINIT(). PR: docs/132884 Submitted by: pluknet, hmp Added: head/share/man/man9/SYSINIT.9 (contents, props changed) Modified: head/share/man/man9/Makefile Modified: head/share/man/man9/Makefile ============================================================================== --- head/share/man/man9/Makefile Mon Dec 6 15:15:27 2010 (r216231) +++ head/share/man/man9/Makefile Mon Dec 6 15:19:03 2010 (r216232) @@ -244,6 +244,7 @@ MAN= accept_filter.9 \ sysctl.9 \ sysctl_add_oid.9 \ sysctl_ctx_init.9 \ + SYSINIT.9 \ taskqueue.9 \ thread_exit.9 \ time.9 \ @@ -1211,6 +1212,7 @@ MLINKS+=sysctl_ctx_init.9 sysctl_ctx_ent sysctl_ctx_init.9 sysctl_ctx_entry_del.9 \ sysctl_ctx_init.9 sysctl_ctx_entry_find.9 \ sysctl_ctx_init.9 sysctl_ctx_free.9 +MLINKS+=SYSINIT.9 SYSUNINIT.9 MLINKS+=taskqueue.9 TASK_INIT.9 \ taskqueue.9 taskqueue_cancel.9 \ taskqueue.9 taskqueue_create.9 \ Added: head/share/man/man9/SYSINIT.9 ============================================================================== --- /dev/null 00:00:00 1970 (empty, because file is newly added) +++ head/share/man/man9/SYSINIT.9 Mon Dec 6 15:19:03 2010 (r216232) @@ -0,0 +1,163 @@ +.\" Copyright (c) 2003 Hiten M. Pandya +.\" All rights reserved. +.\" +.\" Redistribution and use in source and binary forms, with or without +.\" modification, are permitted provided that the following conditions +.\" are met: +.\" 1. Redistributions of source code must retain the above copyright +.\" notice, this list of conditions and the following disclaimer. +.\" 2. Redistributions in binary form must reproduce the above copyright +.\" notice, this list of conditions and the following disclaimer in the +.\" documentation and/or other materials provided with the distribution. +.\" +.\" THIS SOFTWARE IS PROVIDED BY THE AUTHOR AND CONTRIBUTORS ``AS IS'' AND +.\" ANY EXPRESS OR IMPLIED WARRANTIES, INCLUDING, BUT NOT LIMITED TO, THE +.\" IMPLIED WARRANTIES OF MERCHANTABILITY AND FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE +.\" ARE DISCLAIMED. IN NO EVENT SHALL THE AUTHOR OR CONTRIBUTORS BE LIABLE +.\" FOR ANY DIRECT, INDIRECT, INCIDENTAL, SPECIAL, EXEMPLARY, OR CONSEQUENTIAL +.\" DAMAGES (INCLUDING, BUT NOT LIMITED TO, PROCUREMENT OF SUBSTITUTE GOODS +.\" OR SERVICES; LOSS OF USE, DATA, OR PROFITS; OR BUSINESS INTERRUPTION) +.\" HOWEVER CAUSED AND ON ANY THEORY OF LIABILITY, WHETHER IN CONTRACT, STRICT +.\" LIABILITY, OR TORT (INCLUDING NEGLIGENCE OR OTHERWISE) ARISING IN ANY WAY +.\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF +.\" SUCH DAMAGE. +.\" +.\" $FreeBSD$ +.\" +.Dd December 1, 2010 +.Dt SYSINIT 9 +.Os +.Sh NAME +.Nm SYSINIT , +.Nm SYSUNINIT +.Nd a framework for dynamic kernel initialization +.Sh SYNOPSIS +.In sys/param.h +.In sys/kernel.h +.Fn SYSINIT "uniquifier" "enum sysinit_sub_id subsystem" "enum sysinit_elem_order order" "sysinit_cfunc_t func" "const void *ident" +.Fn SYSUNINIT "uniquifier" "enum sysinit_sub_id subsystem" "enum sysinit_elem_order order" "sysinit_cfunc_t func" "const void *ident" +.Sh DESCRIPTION +.Nm +is a mechanism for scheduling the execution of initialization and teardown +routines. +This is similar to init and fini routines with the addition of explicit +ordering metadata. +It allows runtime ordering of subsystem initialization in the kernel as well +as kernel modules (KLDs). +.Pp +The +.Fn SYSINIT +macro creates a +.Vt struct sysinit +and stores it in a startup linker set. +The +.Vt struct sysinit +type as well as the subsystem identifier constants +.Pq Dv SI_SUB_* +and initialization ordering constants +.Pq Dv SI_ORDER_* +are defined in +.In sys/kernel.h : +.Bd -literal +struct sysinit { + enum sysinit_sub_id subsystem; /* subsystem identifier*/ + enum sysinit_elem_order order; /* init order within subsystem*/ + sysinit_cfunc_t func; /* function */ + const void *udata; /* multiplexer/argument */ +}; +.Ed +.Pp +The +.Fn SYSINIT +macro takes a +.Fa uniquifier +argument to identify the particular function dispatch data, +the +.Fa subsystem +type of startup interface, the subsystem element +.Fa order +of initialization within the subsystem, the +.Fa func +function to call, +and the data specified in +.Fa ident +argument to pass the function. +.Pp +The +.Fn SYSUNINIT +macro behaves similarly to the +.Fn SYSINIT +macro except that it adds the data to a shutdown linker set. +.Pp +The startup linker set for the kernel is scanned during boot to build a +sorted list of initialization routines. +The initialization routines are then executed in the sorted order. +The +.Fa subsystem +is used as the primary key and is sorted in ascending order. +The +.Fa order +is used as the secondary key and is sorted in ascending order. +The relative order of two routines that have the same +.Fa subsystem +and +.Fa order +is undefined. +.Pp +The startup linker sets for modules that are loaded together with the kernel +by the boot loader are scanned during the +.Dv SI_SUB_KLD +subsystem initialization. +These modules' initialization routines are sorted and merged into the kernel's +list of startup routines and are executed during boot along with the kernel's +initialization routines. +Note that this has the effect that any initialization routines in a kernel +module that are scheduled earlier than +.Dv SI_SUB_KLD +are not executed until after +.Dv SI_SUB_KLD +during boot. +.Pp +The startup linker set for a kernel module loaded at runtime via +.Xr kldload 2 +is scanned, sorted, and executed when the module is loaded. +.Pp +The shutdown linker set for a kernel module is scanned, sorted, and executed +when a kernel module is unloaded. +The teardown routines are sorted in the reverse order of the initialization +routines. +The teardown routines of the kernel and any loaded modules are +.Sy not +executed during shutdown. +.Sh EXAMPLES +This example shows the SYSINIT which displays the copyright notice during boot: +.Bd -literal -offset indent +static void +print_caddr_t(void *data) +{ + printf("%s", (char *)data); +} +SYSINIT(announce, SI_SUB_COPYRIGHT, SI_ORDER_FIRST, print_caddr_t, + copyright); +.Ed +.Sh SEE ALSO +.Xr kld 4 , +.Xr DECLARE_MODULE 9 , +.Xr DEV_MODULE 9 , +.Xr DRIVER_MODULE 9 , +.Xr MTX_SYSINIT 9 , +.Xr SYSCALL_MODULE 9 +.Sh HISTORY +The +.Nm +framework first appeared in +.Fx 2.2 . +.Sh AUTHORS +.An -nosplit +The +.Nm +framework was written by +.An Terrence Lambert Aq terry@FreeBSD.org . +.Pp +This manual page was written by +.An Hiten Pandya Aq hmp@FreeBSD.org . _______________________________________________ svn-src-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Dec 9 13:32:03 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 597D3106564A for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 13:32:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ryusuke@FreeBSD.org) Received: from castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (castle.jp.FreeBSD.org [IPv6:2001:218:422:1::15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BD2068FC23 for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 13:32:02 +0000 (UTC) Received: from localhost (localhost [::1]) by castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (8.11.6p2+3.4W/8.11.3) with ESMTP/inet6 id oB9DW2s78032 for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 22:32:02 +0900 (JST) (envelope-from ryusuke@FreeBSD.org) Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 22:31:54 +0900 (JST) Message-Id: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Ryusuke SUZUKI X-Mailer: Mew version 6.1 on Emacs 22.3 / Mule 5.0 (SAKAKI) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Multipart/Signed; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1; boundary="--Security_Multipart(Thu_Dec__9_22_31_54_2010_364)--" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: Subject: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 13:32:03 -0000 ----Security_Multipart(Thu_Dec__9_22_31_54_2010_364)-- Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Hello, "Resorces for Newvies" page, http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html >The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation >to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant >to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information >and the latest updates. "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..." Do you agree? I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days. How about the following patch? diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000 @@ -70,9 +70,8 @@ beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy this one.

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  • The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those - parts of the +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. + You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant to your needs, and explore the ppp page Regards, Ryusuke ----Security_Multipart(Thu_Dec__9_22_31_54_2010_364)-- Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAk0A2koACgkQG5rRvmPSlyQ+7QCg6egknV2JW7EZrCFItOjivAKH ZM4AoInHoFrCZ+tGf81V7dJqaAopDYrb =uBLn -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- ----Security_Multipart(Thu_Dec__9_22_31_54_2010_364)---- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Dec 9 14:33:01 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9364B106566C; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:33:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from linimon@lonesome.com) Received: from mail.soaustin.net (pancho.soaustin.net [76.74.250.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 76E258FC12; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:33:01 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail.soaustin.net (Postfix, from userid 502) id B025956026; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:33:00 +0000 (UTC) Date: Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:33:00 +0000 From: Mark Linimon To: Ryusuke SUZUKI Message-ID: <20101209143300.GA28241@lonesome.com> References: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.18 (2008-05-17) Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 14:33:01 -0000 On Thu, Dec 09, 2010 at 10:31:54PM +0900, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote: > "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..." > > Do you agree? To me, that sounds like that page is many years stale. mcl From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Dec 9 14:38:33 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E682106566C for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:38:33 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from glen.j.barber@gmail.com) Received: from mail-qy0-f170.google.com (mail-qy0-f170.google.com [209.85.216.170]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD51D8FC08 for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:38:32 +0000 (UTC) Received: by qyk10 with SMTP id 10so7623270qyk.15 for ; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 06:38:32 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:references:in-reply-to :x-enigmail-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=pSoyYZ94cGg1I5ao+ALmDQwFtKkC+PdiCXGCx6c4XpA=; b=SQwZGS8IWjPEqo8dmMcoEoKQOMqPtC7qxcGVQ8pyvMmO/DvxTaEDL54Oyn1S6r9jfr ZUauwBUQOO8f2tOEKMsfTE6kXe7jFmR9GiNRYUKfjc4rCdnmUNtc2Ic4hLqvucmCkiD+ dmnV2c5Nkv+OpvsK06ELBTxArnVLlPJZwBELM= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:references :in-reply-to:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; b=Jkvf9uZfEYsl9GWSptJ5JET6Ul8WCmVXRjOJ7mzrsFpDjcNr8uEkKM4bcwXoLAYxbH I9FaVZhNdFQHvhob/vl/y5BS/jk0FiXGhG6tQrTXjVQB/zTUgPtiWNjWY0P5/RjKQvZ5 4Ct5WUFAtmkD9R6S8iUmaRdaEAUCzdfXWji2Q= Received: by 10.224.67.140 with SMTP id r12mr6721347qai.37.1291903691500; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 06:08:11 -0800 (PST) Received: from schism.local (173-161-130-225-Philadelphia.hfc.comcastbusiness.net [173.161.130.225]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id y17sm1192459qci.33.2010.12.09.06.08.08 (version=SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Thu, 09 Dec 2010 06:08:09 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 09:08:08 -0500 From: Glen Barber User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; Intel Mac OS X 10.6; en-US; rv:1.9.2.12) Gecko/20101027 Thunderbird/3.1.6 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org References: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.1.1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 14:38:33 -0000 Hi Ryusuke, On 12/9/10 8:31 AM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote: > Hello, > > "Resorces for Newvies" page, > http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html > >> The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation >> to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant >> to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information >> and the latest updates. > > "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..." > > Do you agree? > > I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days. > > How about the following patch? > > diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml > --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 > +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000 > @@ -70,9 +70,8 @@ > beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy > this one.

    • > > -

  • The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is > - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those > - parts of the > +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. > + You might start with at least those parts of the I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed. Best regards, -- Glen Barber From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Dec 10 11:53:58 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B87C1065673; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:53:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pluknet@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 11F868FC1B; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:53:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id oBABrvlD016516; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:53:57 GMT (envelope-from pluknet@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from pluknet@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id oBABrv3e016497; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:53:57 GMT (envelope-from pluknet) Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:53:57 GMT Message-Id: <201012101153.oBABrv3e016497@freefall.freebsd.org> To: pluknet@gmail.com, pluknet@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: pluknet@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/152805: [patch] ru/security/security.sgml: MFen 1.214 -> 1.216 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:53:58 -0000 Synopsis: [patch] ru/security/security.sgml: MFen 1.214 -> 1.216 State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: pluknet State-Changed-When: Fri Dec 10 11:53:24 UTC 2010 State-Changed-Why: Committed. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=152805 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Dec 10 11:54:26 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6115A106564A; 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Fri, 10 Dec 2010 16:18:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ryusuke@FreeBSD.org) Received: from castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (castle.jp.FreeBSD.org [IPv6:2001:218:422:1::15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 81E218FC08 for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 16:18:41 +0000 (UTC) Received: from localhost (localhost [::1]) by castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (8.11.6p2+3.4W/8.11.3) with ESMTP/inet6 id oBAGIcs93708; Sat, 11 Dec 2010 01:18:38 +0900 (JST) (envelope-from ryusuke@FreeBSD.org) Date: Sat, 11 Dec 2010 01:18:33 +0900 (JST) Message-Id: <20101211.011833.193776160.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> To: glen.j.barber@gmail.com From: Ryusuke SUZUKI In-Reply-To: <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> References: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> X-Mailer: Mew version 6.1 on Emacs 22.3 / Mule 5.0 (SAKAKI) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Multipart/Signed; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1; boundary="--Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_01_18_33_2010_542)--" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 16:18:42 -0000 ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_01_18_33_2010_542)-- Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit ryusuke> How about the following patch? ryusuke> ryusuke> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml ryusuke> snip... ryusuke> +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. ryusuke> + You might start with at least those parts of the glen> I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed. Thanks. "at leaset" is removed and clarify "those parts" as following, diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 15:29:53 -0000 @@ -70,11 +70,10 @@ beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy this one.

    • -

  • The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those - parts of the - Handbook - that are relevant to your needs, and explore the +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. + You might start with the PPP and SLIP + chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook that are relevant to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information and the latest updates.

    • Regards, Ryusuke ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_01_18_33_2010_542)-- Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAk0CUtkACgkQG5rRvmPSlyRpwgCghcGuc3a3+QYuSOi8lcdD3Om0 WMgAnRKk1zNPeWl9GKPukEO7iGu58oAR =D187 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_01_18_33_2010_542)---- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Dec 10 17:15:09 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 513671065670 for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 17:15:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from glen.j.barber@gmail.com) Received: from mail-qw0-f54.google.com (mail-qw0-f54.google.com [209.85.216.54]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F0F408FC14 for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 17:15:08 +0000 (UTC) Received: by qwj9 with SMTP id 9so4045473qwj.13 for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 09:15:08 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject:references:in-reply-to :x-enigmail-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=U72cRmEFo5ew/N7aSxob/8wbe7Cw6RtCbNUPkPv6wTg=; b=K5g2SKPe3aiVdU3lpqbY01TJNSFF/mG8VkObgok/jYq7RvQLPXf4/pH4uJBuDLD5mU 719db5MhTsneuJpSSg/2Z55CmNWBcGC9Oxi9e9anwnerWu4bQopQRT0nOigGvcLrDgjZ q3TeyI6k4lgY0Ma40VbhrPLXildYqtjgDwCQA= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject :references:in-reply-to:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; b=o7RhbJMeVTqBpABy/TLRIRpmY/ptBv9BgYtLouRQSu0RylzupW0LpGQr6DJOkTxmLM 0w5EBIg4a0r8otNKTE+QmuonsVz8olBEl09IzUpK+qCVafsWjxnlgP4SY9IO+ek4F3el TJkrh7vobJfVMcsr0KwPs5xLoqtk6BIwA724Y= Received: by 10.224.19.213 with SMTP id c21mr923877qab.326.1292001308074; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 09:15:08 -0800 (PST) Received: from schism.local (173-161-130-225-Philadelphia.hfc.comcastbusiness.net [173.161.130.225]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id t17sm2103091qcp.26.2010.12.10.09.15.06 (version=SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Fri, 10 Dec 2010 09:15:06 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <4D026019.20408@gmail.com> Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 12:15:05 -0500 From: Glen Barber User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; Intel Mac OS X 10.6; en-US; rv:1.9.2.12) Gecko/20101027 Thunderbird/3.1.6 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Ryusuke SUZUKI References: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> <20101211.011833.193776160.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20101211.011833.193776160.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.1.1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 17:15:09 -0000 On 12/10/10 11:18 AM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote: > > ryusuke> How about the following patch? > ryusuke> > ryusuke> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml > > ryusuke> snip... > > ryusuke> +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. > ryusuke> + You might start with at least those parts of the > > glen> I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed. > > Thanks. "at leaset" is removed and clarify "those parts" as following, > > diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml > --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 > +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 15:29:53 -0000 > @@ -70,11 +70,10 @@ > beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy > this one.

    • > > -

  • The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is > - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those > - parts of the > - Handbook > - that are relevant to your needs, and explore the > +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. > + You might start with the + href="&url.books;/handbook/ppp-and-slip.html">PPP and SLIP > + chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook that are relevant to your needs, and explore the Not to sound pedantic, but maybe 's/FreeBSD/&os;/' too? :) Best regards, -- Glen Barber From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Dec 10 19:00:59 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1F5D2106566C for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 19:00:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from devel-bounces@lists.laptop.org) Received: from mail.laptop.org (lists.laptop.org [18.85.2.145]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EF0598FC0A for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 19:00:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: from pedal.laptop.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.laptop.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 48FD823B3C for ; Fri, 10 Dec 2010 13:45:06 -0500 (EST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: devel-bounces@lists.laptop.org To: doc@freebsd.org Message-ID: Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 13:45:05 -0500 Precedence: bulk X-BeenThere: devel@lists.laptop.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.9 X-List-Administrivia: yes Sender: devel-bounces@lists.laptop.org Errors-To: devel-bounces@lists.laptop.org Cc: Subject: Your message to Devel awaits moderator approval X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 19:00:59 -0000 Your mail to 'Devel' with the subject (no subject) Is being held until the list moderator can review it for approval. The reason it is being held: Post by non-member to a members-only list Either the message will get posted to the list, or you will receive notification of the moderator's decision. If you would like to cancel this posting, please visit the following URL: http://lists.laptop.org/confirm/devel/8de59ed612f397611135f7e13c38ae324c7728bc From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Dec 11 13:13:30 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 96096106564A; Sat, 11 Dec 2010 13:13:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ryusuke@FreeBSD.org) Received: from castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (castle.jp.FreeBSD.org [IPv6:2001:218:422:1::15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D53B58FC0A; Sat, 11 Dec 2010 13:13:29 +0000 (UTC) Received: from localhost (localhost [::1]) by castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (8.11.6p2+3.4W/8.11.3) with ESMTP/inet6 id oBBDDRs82273; Sat, 11 Dec 2010 22:13:27 +0900 (JST) (envelope-from ryusuke@FreeBSD.org) Date: Sat, 11 Dec 2010 22:13:21 +0900 (JST) Message-Id: <20101211.221321.193765267.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> To: glen.j.barber@gmail.com From: Ryusuke SUZUKI In-Reply-To: <4D026019.20408@gmail.com> References: <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> <20101211.011833.193776160.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> <4D026019.20408@gmail.com> X-Mailer: Mew version 6.1 on Emacs 22.3 / Mule 5.0 (SAKAKI) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Multipart/Signed; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1; boundary="--Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)--" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: ryusuke@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 11 Dec 2010 13:13:30 -0000 ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)-- Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit ryusuke> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml ryusuke> --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 ryusuke> +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 15:29:53 -0000 ryusuke> @@ -70,11 +70,10 @@ ryusuke> beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy ryusuke> this one.

    • ryusuke> ryusuke> -

  • The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is ryusuke> - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those ryusuke> - parts of the ryusuke> - Handbook ryusuke> - that are relevant to your needs, and explore the ryusuke> +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. ryusuke> + You might start with the + href="&url.books;/handbook/ppp-and-slip.html">PPP and SLIP ryusuke> + chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook that are relevant to your needs, and explore the gjb> Not to sound pedantic, but maybe 's/FreeBSD/&os;/' too? :) Thanks. I committed my patch with 's/FreeBSD/&os;/'; I also replaced other "FreeBSD" with "&os;". Regards, Ryusuke ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)-- Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAk0DePEACgkQG5rRvmPSlySYEwCgvJiIAwpKldOvrC4a4/xRFKHD s3gAoOstfK9XUb7czpV2I7ukvbPq5I9u =7nMV -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- ----Security_Multipart(Sat_Dec_11_22_13_21_2010_819)----