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Date:      Mon, 12 Jun 2000 13:48:27 -0700
From:      Jim Mock <jim@luna.osd.bsdi.com>
To:        Ed Ryan <ryane@aasis.albany-academy.org>
Cc:        doc@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject:   Re: A few more corrections to the handbook
Message-ID:  <20000612134827.B34572@luna.osd.bsdi.com>
In-Reply-To: <Pine.BSF.4.10.10006121717450.60581-100000@aasis.albany-academy.org>; from ryane@aasis.albany-academy.org on Mon, Jun 12, 2000 at 05:22:02PM -0400
References:  <Pine.BSF.4.10.10006121717450.60581-100000@aasis.albany-academy.org>

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On Mon, 12 Jun 2000 at 17:22:02 -0400, Ed Ryan wrote:
> These are all in section 8.2 Introduction.
> In the second paragraph, third sentace, the word "interfere" is
> misspelled as "interefere".
> In the seventh paragraph, the third sentace is broken in a way I
> can't readilyt describe. It looks like it was accidentally merged with
> another sentance. In the fourth sentance, the word "convenient" is
> misspelled as "convienient", and in the last line of the paragraph,
> there is a redundant "in".

Thanks.  I'm working on fixing these now, and will be committing them in
a few minutes.

> This is fun :D

:-)

- jim

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