From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Oct 1 17:35:00 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7251D106566C for ; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 17:35:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-pb0-f54.google.com (mail-pb0-f54.google.com [209.85.160.54]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E9508FC0A for ; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 17:34:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: by pbbrp8 with SMTP id rp8so9126861pbb.13 for ; Mon, 01 Oct 2012 10:34:59 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-type; bh=pK12aaL7joVXhYDuWvapO0Ub3EsOz3TO0v4n2GJ3F/k=; b=GkeIeHQl41wVKgz8bddR0J9Ao7QZh/4QIWQW2Z5JwGQnRBpcMuAQUDhegp3itdwpgS tZOOLD4y6lMcHYtXUMm6X9TIoZzBCfAX9z5j3jUWx8DBJINIu8uabVCPZFL2fwN/+XC2 2XEZ444QV9oVQltj0RsiWDXNYJMgUbgYypuwM= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-type:x-gm-message-state; bh=pK12aaL7joVXhYDuWvapO0Ub3EsOz3TO0v4n2GJ3F/k=; b=Ed7K0SS6F0mGbbwDRHkznaBw/JHWyUIVo6BwIz5Ed8XiEeNKA+hdWnqpKdHOsQvLPh GrjPjCpAWb1eaU8SZSwgga1CwWSaaBeBmjoJa8DvFGKgEM4A2xAUh31ERnp6lCGW8bO3 qu8yPyCvztduLnwIMnB4Sh2GdaE/O6a3kyU2O+9hmZlqsSpWRjBDs+zVHMz24ZVyg6jV hz59CImoT9Y0VatiARGFbVnjNhK8bi3ss8EpfK5Zq228Obuww+DkCXWXijXdO0mxIg5P ig8T+qPzsHBQ/L/f0PtDvFzHhNqhfhJiCtAhdCsPgB8JuzvPjjPDM/G6YThn1c9qKWbC YEJw== Received: by 10.68.242.231 with SMTP id wt7mr42546227pbc.99.1349112899031; Mon, 01 Oct 2012 10:34:59 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.66.190.164 with HTTP; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 10:34:28 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: From: Eitan Adler Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 13:34:28 -0400 Message-ID: To: Cpet Services Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQlVaRWaRx2ZUh7/OS02lWB7kb3en1rrkz5Jc3/o39p0DqLoA78FY5mjhgmbucNWja+gfnk8 Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Updates to features.html X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 01 Oct 2012 17:35:00 -0000 On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services wrote: > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html General comments: This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing document, not a technical one. Specific comments: ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than 10 years now ;) "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a feature? Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed? Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all* the headers were links to handbook pages. I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section. > And tell me what you think of it. Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on the website! I hope that your work makes it in. Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well? -- Eitan Adler