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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia
	chapter.sgml
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bcr         2009-09-29 15:06:13 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  A couple of small wording, grammar and style fixes:
  
  - add &nbsp; between the &epson.perfection; and the model number
  - replace a ` with ' to be consistent with the screen output
  - contain -> contents
  - cause -> because
  - Reword the sentence containing "most of time" to one that is
    easier to read
  
  Approved by:    jkois (mentor)
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.135     +8 -9      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml