From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Aug 31 16:03:58 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8B23E16A4E1; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 16:03:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from chris@hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE) Received: from ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de (ms-2.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE [134.130.3.131]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E6C0443D5A; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 16:03:47 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from chris@hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE) Received: from circe (circe.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE [134.130.3.36]) by ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de (iPlanet Messaging Server 5.2 Patch 2 (built Jul 14 2004)) with ESMTP id <0J4V002IZDY980@ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de>; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:46 +0200 (MEST) Received: from talos.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE ([134.130.3.22]) by circe (MailMonitor for SMTP v1.2.2 ) ; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:45 +0200 (MEST) Received: from bigboss.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de (bigspace.hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE [137.226.181.2]) by smarthost.rwth-aachen.de (8.13.7/8.13.1/1) with ESMTP id k7VG3iFt000565; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:44 +0200 Received: from haakonia.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de ([137.226.181.92]) by bigboss.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de with esmtps (TLS-1.0:DHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA:32) (Exim 4.50) id 1GIp16-0006hX-SO; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:44 +0200 Received: by haakonia.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 801103F413; Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:44 +0200 (CEST) Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:44 +0200 From: Christian Brueffer In-reply-to: <44F70528.1030100@freebsd.org> To: "Bruce A. Mah" Message-id: <20060831160344.GA1758@haakonia.hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE> MIME-version: 1.0 Content-type: multipart/signed; boundary="jI8keyz6grp/JLjh"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1 Content-disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.11 X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 6.1-STABLE X-PGP-Key: http://people.FreeBSD.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc X-PGP-Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D References: <200608311453.k7VErvIH050852@repoman.freebsd.org> <20060831145406.5900716A613@hub.freebsd.org> <1527203135.20060831171432@rulez.sk> <44F70528.1030100@freebsd.org> Cc: cvs-src@freebsd.org, Daniel Gerzo , src-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [src] cvs commit: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2006 16:03:58 -0000 --jI8keyz6grp/JLjh Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Aug 31, 2006 at 08:50:00AM -0700, Bruce A. Mah wrote: > If memory serves me right, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > > Hello Bruce, > >=20 > > Thursday, August 31, 2006, 4:54:06 PM, you wrote: > >=20 > >> bmah 2006-08-31 14:53:57 UTC > >=20 > >> FreeBSD src repository > >=20 > >> Modified files: (Branch: RELENG_5) > >> release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml=20 > >=20 > >> + netcat has been updated from the > >> + version in a 4 February 2005 OpenBSD snapshot to the version > >> + included in OpenBSD 3.9. > >> + > >=20 > > Maybe it should be better to write it like: > >=20 > > netcat has been updated from the version included in OpenBSD snapshot > > as of February 4th 2005 to the version included in OpenBSD 3.9. ? >=20 > Hey Daniel-- >=20 > I think that what I wrote is grammatically correct, in that "4 February > 2005" modifies "OpenBSD snapshot". I don't have any objections if you > want to change it, although in your text you should probably do s/in > OpenBSD snapshot/in an OpenBSD snapshot/. Also I personally don't write > dates as "February 4th 2005" but I'm probably not the right person to > wave the consistency banner either. :-) >=20 > I'll think about it some more when I'm next in the file (if you haven't > already changed it, that is). (This text now exists on HEAD, RELENG_6, > and RELENG_5.) >=20 FYI, your entry looks perfectly fine to me. - Christian --=20 Christian Brueffer chris@unixpages.org brueffer@FreeBSD.org GPG Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc GPG Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D --jI8keyz6grp/JLjh Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.5 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFE9whgbHYXjKDtmC0RAhGaAKDnKgEL6eGDwkFXFWQ1Jz6uObgSUACgq8dy zxPegn3YwU9B7S218dNhLS0= =inD9 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --jI8keyz6grp/JLjh--