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http://p4web.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=170700

Change 170700 by rene@rene_self on 2009/11/17 12:02:42

	[porters handbook/clang]
	English lessons from mcl@ and aspell(1)

Affected files ...

.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml#54 edit

Differences ...

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml#54 (text+ko) ====

@@ -13607,9 +13607,9 @@
 
 	<para>A future version of &os; will likely have the Clang C/C++
 	  compiler as its base compiler.  Some modifications to the Ports
-	  Collection are necessary.  In general, these are <quote>write proper
-	    ports</quote> and <quote>write proper source code</quote>.  More
-	  specifically:</para>
+	  Collection are necessary.  In general, these involve
+	  <quote>generalizing the port</quote> and <quote>making the source
+	    code portable</quote>.  More specifically:</para>
 
 	<itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem>
@@ -13644,7 +13644,7 @@
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>The <literal>-traditional</literal> option is not supported,
-	      so existing occurences have to be removed.  No concensus has yet
+	      so existing occurrences have to be removed.  No consensus has yet
 	      been reached on ports abusing this option to preserve white space
 	      in text formatting.  Note that the Clang preprocessor does not
 	      preserve white space.</para>
@@ -13666,7 +13666,7 @@
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>The maximum useable optimization level is 3.  Level 4 is
+	    <para>The maximum usable optimization level is 3.  Level 4 is
 	      reserved for link-time optimization for the Clang backend.</para>
 	  </listitem>