Date: Wed, 18 Apr 2001 19:20:10 -0700 (PDT) From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/26690: Update to ports(7) Message-ID: <200104190220.f3J2KAG91890@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/26690; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org> To: petef@databits.net Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/26690: Update to ports(7) Date: Wed, 18 Apr 2001 19:19:01 -0700 petef@databits.net writes: > >Fix: > > Index: ports.7 > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/share/man/man7/ports.7,v > retrieving revision 1.21 > diff -u -r1.21 ports.7 > [...] > @@ -186,6 +188,20 @@ > This can be used from > .Pa /usr/ports > to create a browsable web of all ports on your system! > +.It Ar search > +Search the INDEX file for the keyword specified by the This should be: Search the .Pa INDEX file for the.... > +.Ev KEY ``KEY'' is not an environment variable. Perhaps you could explain that the syntax is `make search name=query' and `make search key=query'. Ideally it wouldn't be too long. > +value. Results include the path to the port, a short comment, and the Please put a newline instead of two spaces at the end of sentences, e.g.: value. Results include the path... > +build and run depends required. > +.It Ar index > +Create /usr/ports/INDEX, used by the > +.Pa pretty-print-* > +and > +.Pa search This should be: Create .Pa /usr/ports/INDEX , which is used by the .Ar pretty-print-* and .Ar search targets. Other than that (and a few other places you made the same errors) it looks pretty good. If you could fix that up I'd appreciate it. Thanks, Dima Dorfman dima@unixfreak.org To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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