From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Nov 13 20:20:49 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5902D183; Tue, 13 Nov 2012 20:20:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from smtp6-g21.free.fr (smtp6-g21.free.fr [IPv6:2a01:e0c:1:1599::15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5A7258FC14; Tue, 13 Nov 2012 20:20:44 +0000 (UTC) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (unknown [88.179.1.53]) by smtp6-g21.free.fr (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5AFA9822E8; Tue, 13 Nov 2012 21:20:37 +0100 (CET) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.4) with ESMTP id qADKKZuM001554; Tue, 13 Nov 2012 21:20:35 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc@emphyrio.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.4/Submit) id qADKKZgA001553; Tue, 13 Nov 2012 21:20:35 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc) Date: Tue, 13 Nov 2012 21:20:35 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille To: Benjamin Kaduk Subject: Re: svn commit: r39981 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq Message-ID: <20121113202035.GB1460@emphyrio.blackend.org> References: <201211112229.qABMT1il009287@svn.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 8.3-STABLE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org, Eitan Adler X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 13 Nov 2012 20:20:49 -0000 On Mon, Nov 12, 2012 at 02:58:44PM -0500, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Sun, 11 Nov 2012, Eitan Adler wrote: > > > Author: eadler > > Date: Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012 > > New Revision: 39981 > > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39981 > > > > Log: > > Reduce redundant markup and word and other minor problems reported by > > igor. Limited additional checking was done of the surrounding content. > > > > Approved by: jkois (mentor, before merge conflict resolution) > > > > Modified: > > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml > > > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml > > ============================================================================== > > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Nov 11 21:42:32 2012 (r39980) > > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012 (r39981) > > @@ -923,7 +923,7 @@ > > Where the format is > > html-split, the files are bundled > > up using &man.tar.1;. The resulting > > - .tar file is then compressed > > + .tar is then compressed > > This would seem like a candidate where the "redundant" use of "file" > actually is helpful, since there is not a specific file name given. > [...] Well, can we avoid all these sort of changes? They are necessary? [...] > > + to make this work. See &man.chmod.1; and > > + &man.symlink.7; for more information. > > > > > > - The option does a > > + does a > > My understanding was that we did not like to start sentences with markup. > Same here, again "redundant" useless sweep... Please guys, stop these silly "redundant" commits. -- Marc