From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 11 10:40:29 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 30A3616A4CF for ; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:40:29 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D300843D69 for ; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:40:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) i4BHeNG4087739 for ; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:40:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11/Submit) id i4BHeN1v087738; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:40:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 10:40:23 -0700 (PDT) Resent-Message-Id: <200405111740.i4BHeN1v087738@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Michel Lavondès Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B5F4D16A4CF for ; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:38:24 -0700 (PDT) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [216.136.204.117]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 782F343D5C for ; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:38:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11) with ESMTP id i4BHcNNf056778 for ; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:38:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.12.11/8.12.11/Submit) id i4BHcNqh056777; Tue, 11 May 2004 10:38:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200405111738.i4BHcNqh056777@www.freebsd.org> Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 10:38:23 -0700 (PDT) From: Michel Lavondès To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-2.3 Subject: docs/66540: [patch] share/man/man4/ppbus.4 wording nits X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 17:40:29 -0000 >Number: 66540 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] share/man/man4/ppbus.4 wording nits >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue May 11 10:40:23 PDT 2004 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Michel Lavondès >Release: FreeBSD 4.8-RELEASE-p13 >Organization: Ecdysiasts United For Overdressing >Environment: >Description: Patch says it all, really. >How-To-Repeat: man 4 ppbus >Fix: Patch also available from http://www.livejournal.com/users/pauamma/1911.html --- share/man/man4/ppbus.4.orig Fri May 7 07:43:07 2004 +++ share/man/man4/ppbus.4 Fri May 7 08:06:15 2004 @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ modes. The computer acts as master and the peripheral as slave. .Pp -Any transfer is defined as a finite state automate. +Any transfer is defined as a finite state machine. It allows software to properly manage the fully interlocked scheme of the signaling method. The compatible mode is supported "as is" without any negotiation because it @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ termination, transfer in any mode without bothering you with low level characteristics of the standard. .Pp -IEEE1284 interacts with the ppbus system as least as possible. +IEEE1284 interacts with the ppbus system as little as possible. That means you still have to request the ppbus when you want to access it, the negotiate function doesn't do it for you. @@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ This architecture should support IEEE1284-1994 modes. .Sh FEATURES .Ss The boot process -The boot process starts with the probe phasis of the +The boot process starts with the probe stage of the .Xr ppc 4 driver during ISA bus (PC architecture) initialization. During attachment of >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: