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From: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge chapter.sgml
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mwlucas     2002/03/21 10:05:31 PST

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Start cleaning up the stable/current section.
  
  a) literally stop literally repeating certain words literally every
  sentence.  Generally, this isn't generally useful and generally
  becomes generally annoying very quickly, generally.
  
  b) add specific examples of why -current is not what it isn't.
  
  c) make it explicit that users of -current should be able to debug
  many problems on their own.
  
  d) smooth & tighten the language after the above changes.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.110     +38 -29    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml

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