From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Jun 10 16:20:12 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.ORG [204.216.27.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6803937BD7B for ; Sat, 10 Jun 2000 16:20:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.9.3/8.9.2) id QAA93746; Sat, 10 Jun 2000 16:20:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from dannyboy.eyep.net (adsl-207-68-94-238.ba-dsg.net [207.68.94.238]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C5C3E37B7AE for ; Sat, 10 Jun 2000 16:17:24 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from dannyboy@dannyboy.eyep.net) Received: (from dannyboy@localhost) by dannyboy.eyep.net (8.9.3/8.9.3) id TAA01072; Sat, 10 Jun 2000 19:17:26 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from dannyboy) Message-Id: <200006102317.TAA01072@dannyboy.eyep.net> Date: Sat, 10 Jun 2000 19:17:26 -0400 (EDT) From: Daniel Harris Reply-To: dannyboy@subdimension.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.2 Subject: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 19186 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Semi-overhaul docs.html >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Jun 10 16:20:01 PDT 2000 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Daniel Harris >Release: FreeBSD 4.0-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: docs.sgml rev 1.82 >Description: Various fixes, nits, etc. Executive Summary: Standardize: Remove "This is" type verbiage. Tweak FAQ blurb. Fix run-on under Additional Resources. Add trailing slash to link to Wolfram Schneider's page. Hinrich Eilts's manpage viewer seems to have vanished, remove dead link. A couple was/were fixes. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: (drumroll) --- docs.sgml.orig Sat Jun 10 19:03:42 2000 +++ docs.sgml Sat Jun 10 19:02:56 2000 @@ -32,13 +32,13 @@

FreeBSD in the Press

-

The press about FreeBSD.

+

Articles in the press about FreeBSD.

Year 2000 Compatibility

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This is the FreeBSD project's current statement about its Year 2000 +

The FreeBSD project's current statement about its Year 2000 compatibility.

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@

FreeBSD Real-Quick (TM) Newsletter (RQN)

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A monthly (sometimes bi-weekly) newsletter containing recent +

A monthly (sometimes bi-weekly) newsletter announcing recent developments in the FreeBSD arena. Subscribe to freebsd-announce to receive this newsletter via e-mail.

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@

The FreeBSD Handbook

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This is an evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. +

An evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. Please address comments and contributions to <freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>.

@@ -72,9 +72,8 @@

Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)

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If you have a question, chances are that someone else has the same - question. The most common of these have been compiled here in a brief - question-answer format.

+

If you have a question, chances are that someone else has had it too. + The most common of these questions (and answers) have been compiled here.

&i.new; We now offer a Russian translation and a Chinese translation of the FAQ.

@@ -86,7 +85,7 @@

Tutorials

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Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD +

Assorted documents about various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD software, and hardware. If you have comments or would like to contribute a document, please contact us at freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org.

@@ -95,9 +94,9 @@

Additional Resources

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www.FreeBSD.org is not the only place to get information on FreeBSD and - various independent efforts have also produced a great deal of useful - information on FreeBSD:

+

www.FreeBSD.org is not the only place to get information on FreeBSD; + various independent efforts have also produced a great deal of useful + information about FreeBSD.

  • Kirk McKusick, one @@ -139,7 +138,7 @@

  • The - Linux+FreeBSD mini-HOWTO - this document describes how to use + Linux+FreeBSD mini-HOWTO describes how to use Linux and FreeBSD on the same system. It introduces FreeBSD and discusses how the two operating systems can cooperate, e.g. by sharing swap space.

    @@ -221,13 +220,7 @@ -->

    This service is provided courtesy of Wolfram Schneider. There - is another - script available with the manual pages for FreeBSD 2.0 and XFree86 - release 3.1, courtesy of Hinrich - Eilts.

    + href="http://wolfram.schneider.org/">Wolfram Schneider.

    @@ -236,7 +229,7 @@

    If you like reading BSD manuals online, here is a hypertext version of the 4.4BSD documents from /usr/share/doc, where you would find - the documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the doc distribution was + the documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the doc distribution were installed).

    @@ -246,7 +239,7 @@

    If you like reading FreeBSD Info documents online, here is a hypertext version of the Info documents from /usr/share/info, where you would find - the Info documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the info distribution was + the Info documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the info distribution were installed).

    @@ -270,7 +263,7 @@

    FreeBSD ezine

    -

    The FreeBSD 'zine is a monthly collection of easy to read (we hope) +

    A monthly collection of easy to read (we hope) articles written by FreeBSD users and administrators just like you.

    Like FreeBSD itself, this documentation is the product of a volunteer >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message