From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Dec 29 1:30:22 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3EA5F37B422 for ; Sat, 29 Dec 2001 01:30:01 -0800 (PST) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id fBT9U1P84732; Sat, 29 Dec 2001 01:30:01 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from c9795-a.vncvr1.wa.home.com (12-225-156-18.client.attbi.com [12.225.156.18]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 44DE237B419 for ; Sat, 29 Dec 2001 01:21:12 -0800 (PST) Received: (from kuma@localhost) by c9795-a.vncvr1.wa.home.com (8.11.6/8.11.6) id fBT9MAk15914; Sat, 29 Dec 2001 01:22:10 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from kuma) Message-Id: <200112290922.fBT9MAk15914@c9795-a.vncvr1.wa.home.com> Date: Sat, 29 Dec 2001 01:22:10 -0800 (PST) From: Norihiro Kumagai Reply-To: Norihiro Kumagai To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/33295: Some errata in ntpq.8 Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 33295 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Some errata in ntpq.8 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Dec 29 01:30:01 PST 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Norihiro Kumagai >Release: FreeBSD 4.4-RELEASE i386 >Organization: jpman project >Environment: System: FreeBSD c9795-a.vncvr1.wa.home.com 4.4-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.4-RELEASE #16: Sun Nov 4 13:05:43 PST 2001 kuma@c9795-a.vncvr1.wa.home.com:/usr/src/sys/compile/C9795A i386 src/usr.sbin/ntp/doc/ntpq.8 revision 1.3.2.6 2001/12/21 >Description: I believe most of the following chunk related to misspells. I suspect 'the form and index' should be 'the form of index', but I hope some of you review if my idea is suitable or not. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- ntpq-cur.8 Tue Dec 25 20:03:03 2001 +++ ntpq-mod.8 Fri Dec 28 09:00:16 2001 @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ The output of a command is normally sent to the standard output, but optionally the output of individual commands may be sent to a file by appending a -.Ql \&< , +.Ql \&> , followed by a file name, to the command line. A number of interactive format commands are executed entirely within @@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ The index is then of use when dealing with stupid servers which use association identifiers which are hard for humans to type, in that for any subsequent commands which require an -association identifier as an argument, the form and index may be +association identifier as an argument, the form of index may be used as an alternative. .It Xo Ic clockvar Op Ar assocID .Oo @@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ .Ic peers command with the reference ID replaced by the local interface address. -.It Ic passocations +.It Ic passociations Displays association data concerning in-spec peers from the internally cached list of associations. This command performs @@ -455,14 +455,14 @@ The peer is discarded by the clustering algorithm as an outlyer. .It \&+ -.Pq candidat +.Pq candidate The peer is a survivor and a candidate for the combining algorithm. .It \&# .Pq selected The peer is a survivor, but not among the first six peers sorted by synchronization distance. -If the assocation is ephemeral, +If the association is ephemeral, it may be demobilized to conserve resources. .It \&* .Pq peer @@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ .It o .Pq (pps.peer) The peer has been declared the system peer and lends its -variables to thesystem variables. +variables to the system variables. However, the actual system synchronization is derived from a pulse-per-second (PPS) signal, either indirectly via the PPS reference clock driver or directly @@ -688,7 +688,7 @@ The names and values of the peer variables returned will be printed. Note that the status word from the header is -displayed preceding the variables, both in hexidecimal and in +displayed preceding the variables, both in hexadecimal and in pidgeon English. .It Ic readlist Ar assocID .It Ic rl Ar assocID >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message