From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jan 13 11:08:12 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 13F85F4 for ; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 11:08:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from smtp6-g21.free.fr (smtp6-g21.free.fr [IPv6:2a01:e0c:1:1599::15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 75929FF1 for ; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 11:08:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (unknown [88.179.1.53]) by smtp6-g21.free.fr (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2C1078227D; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 12:08:01 +0100 (CET) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.4) with ESMTP id r0DB804j001737; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 12:08:00 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc@emphyrio.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.4/Submit) id r0DB8025001736; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 12:08:00 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc) Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 12:08:00 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille To: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter Message-ID: <20130113110800.GA1505@emphyrio.blackend.org> References: <1357943512.96753.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <1357943512.96753.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 8.3-STABLE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 11:08:12 -0000 On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 02:31:52PM -0800, Dru Lavigne wrote: > Attached is the svn diff for the X11 chapter. This represents a > complete content update of this chapter. > > Igor is mostly happy. I think the remaining indent errors are false > warnings as they only occur when an inline tag is in the previous > . > > I did not verify the widescreen settings. I think the i810 section is > correct. The KDM section needs more content. Other than that, it is a > decent first pass at bringing this chapter into the 21st century. > Some thoughts: - the whole diff will be difficult to read for a translator: section moves, whitespace & content changes, etc. It will be important to commit in separate parts: for example: 1st section moves/removals, 2nd addition & content changes and 3rd whitespace/indentation changes; - you removed the prerequisite of knowing how to use ports, I think it's important to know how to get a ports tree before using the ports; - you removed the way to get a localized keyboard for people not using a desktop manager. Well this configuration is not easy to guess for a newcomer. Maybe it can be kept somewhere in the chapter. - What is # in Crtl+Alt+F#? -- Marc