From owner-cvs-all Mon Jul 23 1:39:34 2001 Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from axl.seasidesoftware.co.za (axl.seasidesoftware.co.za [196.31.7.201]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6B7F337B405; Mon, 23 Jul 2001 01:39:29 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from sheldonh@starjuice.net) Received: from sheldonh (helo=axl.seasidesoftware.co.za) by axl.seasidesoftware.co.za with local-esmtp (Exim 3.31 #1) id 15ObGI-000CC5-00; Mon, 23 Jul 2001 10:40:22 +0200 From: Sheldon Hearn To: Dima Dorfman Cc: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/bin/ls ls.1 In-reply-to: Your message of "Sun, 22 Jul 2001 03:33:31 MST." <200107221033.f6MAXVY73755@freefall.freebsd.org> Date: Mon, 23 Jul 2001 10:40:22 +0200 Message-ID: <46876.995877622@axl.seasidesoftware.co.za> Sender: owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.ORG On Sun, 22 Jul 2001 03:33:31 MST, Dima Dorfman wrote: > Modified files: > bin/ls ls.1 > Log: > Don't put a shell prompt in the example since none of the other man > pages do it. Also, don't use brackets to indicate optional options in > the example; instead, add a paragraph below the example explaining it. The use of the second person ("you") in this document is getting worse. It began with that god-awful colour import, and this delta adds more. Please be careful not to introduce the second person ("you") into documents that are relatively pure in this respect. Ciao, Sheldon. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe cvs-all" in the body of the message