From owner-cvs-src@FreeBSD.ORG Fri May 12 18:00:23 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-src@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: cvs-src@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7861116B15F; Fri, 12 May 2006 18:00:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Received: from igloo.linux.gr (igloo.linux.gr [62.1.205.36]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5BFE943D46; Fri, 12 May 2006 18:00:22 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gothmog.pc (aris.bedc.ondsl.gr [62.103.39.226]) (authenticated bits=128) by igloo.linux.gr (8.13.6/8.13.6/Debian-1) with ESMTP id k4CHxuHs006392 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Fri, 12 May 2006 20:59:59 +0300 Received: from gothmog.pc (gothmog [127.0.0.1]) by gothmog.pc (8.13.6/8.13.6) with ESMTP id k4CI27l7027437; Fri, 12 May 2006 21:02:07 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from giorgos@localhost) by gothmog.pc (8.13.6/8.13.6/Submit) id k4CI27Ys027436; Fri, 12 May 2006 21:02:07 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Date: Fri, 12 May 2006 21:02:06 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas To: "Bruce A. Mah" Message-ID: <20060512180205.GA27424@gothmog.pc> References: <200605121255.k4CCtvhM066623@repoman.freebsd.org> <4464B5B6.8020704@freebsd.org> <20060512170625.GF26040@gothmog.pc> <4464C96D.1090200@freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <4464C96D.1090200@freebsd.org> X-Hellug-MailScanner: Found to be clean X-Hellug-MailScanner-SpamCheck: not spam, SpamAssassin (score=-3.975, required 5, autolearn=not spam, ALL_TRUSTED -1.80, AWL 0.42, BAYES_00 -2.60) X-Hellug-MailScanner-From: keramida@freebsd.org X-Spam-Status: No Cc: cvs-src@FreeBSD.org, src-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/share/man/man4 ath.4 X-BeenThere: cvs-src@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the src tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 12 May 2006 18:00:29 -0000 On 2006-05-12 10:44, "Bruce A. Mah" wrote: >If memory serves me right, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: >> On 2006-05-12 09:20, "Bruce A. Mah" wrote: >>> A list of cards that are supported can be found at >>> http://customerproducts.atheros.com/customerproducts. The ath(4) >>> driver supports all Atheros Cardbus or PCI cards, except those >>> that are based on the AR5005VL chipset. >>> >>> It's not clear to me whether it'd be better to reword the >>> above sentences in the manpage to make them more suitable for >>> "dual use", or if it'd be better to hard-code some >>> appropriate text into the hardware notes. (In any case, >>> please keep the Web pointer in the hardware notes if >>> possible.) >> >> Hmmm, I forgot about the special meaning of the "HARDWARE" >> section. What is a good way to write something that _can_ >> have a dual use? > > What about interchanging the two remaining sentences in the > HARDWARE section? If you do that, then we'll have the driver > name at the start of the paragraph, which is what's necessary > to have it make some sense in the hardware notes. Ok, that is a cool and simple way to fix this. I just committed the re-arranged sentences. Thanks for all the help :)))