From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Apr 22 20:19:11 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 587B7D94; Mon, 22 Apr 2013 20:19:11 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu (DMZ-MAILSEC-SCANNER-3.MIT.EDU [18.9.25.14]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D614B1290; Mon, 22 Apr 2013 20:19:10 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 1209190e-b7f4f6d000005142-26-51759a0b48ef Received: from mailhub-auth-4.mit.edu ( [18.7.62.39]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 23.03.20802.B0A95715; Mon, 22 Apr 2013 16:14:03 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-4.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r3MKE2Ej002003; Mon, 22 Apr 2013 16:14:03 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (SYSTEM-LOW-SIPB.MIT.EDU [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r3MKE1Ts006684 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Mon, 22 Apr 2013 16:14:02 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r3MKE0Vb016065; Mon, 22 Apr 2013 16:14:00 -0400 (EDT) Date: Mon, 22 Apr 2013 16:14:00 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: svn commit: r41471 - projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip In-Reply-To: <201304221801.r3MI182f043890@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201304221801.r3MI182f043890@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFnrNIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixG6nrss9qzTQYN5nTYsfHw8xWXQ1qVos PLOa2YHZY8an+SwBjFFcNimpOZllqUX6dglcGW237jIV3BevuP8huYHxgVAXIyeHhICJxLz2 HYwQtpjEhXvr2boYuTiEBPYxSuydvowZwtnIKHHq0yVWCOcQk8TPtzOgMg2MEssPzWQC6WcR 0JZoOrgUbBabgIrEzDcb2UBsEQFFiadf94LFmQVsJCY8WMAOYgsLZEscu9ANFucUsJLYNWUT 0BwODl4BB4kVO8VBwkIClhJtj5rAxogK6Eis3j+FBcTmFRCUODnzCQvESEuJf2t/sU5gFJyF JDULSWoBI9MqRtmU3Crd3MTMnOLUZN3i5MS8vNQiXWO93MwSvdSU0k2MoDDllOTbwfj1oNIh RgEORiUeXgH30kAh1sSy4srcQ4ySHExKorx7ZwCF+JLyUyozEosz4otKc1KLDzFKcDArifCK 5gPleFMSK6tSi/JhUtIcLErivFdSbvoLCaQnlqRmp6YWpBbBZGU4OJQkeJVmAjUKFqWmp1ak ZeaUIKSZODhBhvMADecDqeEtLkjMLc5Mh8ifYlSUEuddDnKRAEgiozQPrheWRl4xigO9Isxr B9LOA0xBcN2vgAYzAQ3OTCgBGVySiJCSamCM+KjIwRLw9qpT+aYvS6w8DkhcXLSYZWOt7MmX LrpzHk9VEXrJu2jDgtevQk/H9O059e+Yk6gus9tmCan+JQ4e+seObYu/y/7m1i6W87+qdJls 3Au6eDWz2hLS1A0fzb9gcexRqeY27d/KUud+Gm3ac1R5z7ddr/2/Sf/6+sWi3L7t8W2nx37d SizFGYmGWsxFxYkAR937J/4CAAA= Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 22 Apr 2013 20:19:11 -0000 On Mon, 22 Apr 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote: > Make formatting for ppp command more consistent. > > Approved by: bcr (mentor) > > Modified: > projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml > > Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Mon Apr 22 16:14:28 2013 (r41470) > +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Mon Apr 22 18:01:07 2013 (r41471) > @@ -535,8 +536,8 @@ protocol: ppp > otherwise HISADDR will not yet > be initialized. > > - If you do not wish to run ppp in > - , this line should be moved > + If you do not wish to run ppp > + in , this line should be moved This should take 'mode' per the next chunk. > to the ppp.linkup file. > > > @@ -544,11 +545,12 @@ protocol: ppp > > It is not necessary to add an entry to > ppp.linkup when you have a static > - IP address and are running ppp in > - mode as your routing table entries are already correct > - before you connect. You may however wish to create an > - entry to invoke programs after connection. This is > - explained later with the sendmail example. > + IP address and are running ppp in > + mode as your routing table entries > + are already correct before you connect. You may however However is probably not needed but if present should be set off by commas. > + wish to create an entry to invoke programs after > + connection. This is explained later with the sendmail > + example. > > Example configuration files can be found in the > @@ -1173,10 +1177,11 @@ ifconfig_tun0= > ppp -auto mysystem > > This script is executed at network configuration time, > - starting your ppp daemon in automatic mode. If you have > - a LAN for which this machine is a gateway, you may also > - wish to use the switch. Refer > - to the manual page for further details. > + starting your ppp daemon in automatic > + mode. If you have a LAN for which this machine is a This should be mode for consistency with the above. -Ben > + gateway, you may also wish to use the > + switch. Refer to the manual page > + for further details. > > > Make sure that the router program is set to