Date: Mon, 22 Apr 2013 16:14:00 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: Dru Lavigne <dru@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41471 - projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1304221609290.9389@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <201304221801.r3MI182f043890@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201304221801.r3MI182f043890@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Mon, 22 Apr 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote: > Make formatting for ppp command more consistent. > > Approved by: bcr (mentor) > > Modified: > projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml > > Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Mon Apr 22 16:14:28 2013 (r41470) > +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Mon Apr 22 18:01:07 2013 (r41471) > @@ -535,8 +536,8 @@ protocol: ppp</screen> > otherwise <literal>HISADDR</literal> will not yet > be initialized.</para> > > - <para>If you do not wish to run ppp in > - <option>-auto</option>, this line should be moved > + <para>If you do not wish to run <command>ppp</command> > + in <option>-auto</option>, this line should be moved This should take 'mode' per the next chunk. > to the <filename>ppp.linkup</filename> file.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > @@ -544,11 +545,12 @@ protocol: ppp</screen> > > <para>It is not necessary to add an entry to > <filename>ppp.linkup</filename> when you have a static > - IP address and are running ppp in <option>-auto</option> > - mode as your routing table entries are already correct > - before you connect. You may however wish to create an > - entry to invoke programs after connection. This is > - explained later with the sendmail example.</para> > + IP address and are running <command>ppp</command> in > + <option>-auto</option> mode as your routing table entries > + are already correct before you connect. You may however However is probably not needed but if present should be set off by commas. > + wish to create an entry to invoke programs after > + connection. This is explained later with the sendmail > + example.</para> > > <para>Example configuration files can be found in the > <filename > @@ -1173,10 +1177,11 @@ ifconfig_tun0=</programlisting> > <programlisting>ppp -auto mysystem</programlisting> > > <para>This script is executed at network configuration time, > - starting your ppp daemon in automatic mode. If you have > - a LAN for which this machine is a gateway, you may also > - wish to use the <option>-alias</option> switch. Refer > - to the manual page for further details.</para> > + starting your <command>ppp</command> daemon in automatic > + mode. If you have a LAN for which this machine is a This should be <option>-auto</option> mode for consistency with the above. -Ben > + gateway, you may also wish to use the > + <option>-alias</option> switch. Refer to the manual page > + for further details.</para> > </note> > > <para>Make sure that the router program is set to
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