Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2015 15:52:56 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r46961 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status Message-ID: <201507131552.t6DFquOp099325@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Mon Jul 13 15:52:55 2015 New Revision: 46961 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46961 Log: Slight update to the summary to reduce redundancy. We should reconsider whether the introduction really needs to summarize all the individual reports. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Mon Jul 13 13:27:06 2015 (r46960) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Mon Jul 13 15:52:55 2015 (r46961) @@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ June 2015. This is the second of four reports planned for 2015.</p> - <p>The second quarter of 2015 was another productive quarter for - the &os; project and community. BSDCan was held in Ottawa in - June, and both it and the Developer Summit preceding it allowed - developers to plan for the future and discover what others have - already accomplished.</p> + <p>Another productive quarter for the &os; project and community + has passed. BSDCan was held in Ottawa in June, and both it and + the preceding Developer Summit allowed developers to plan for + the future and discover what others have already + accomplished.</p> <p>Thanks to all the reporters for the excellent work!</p>
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