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Date:      Sun, 19 May 2002 01:12:02 -0400 (EDT)
From:      Chris Pepper <pepper@mail.rockefeller.edu>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   docs/38276: HTML & text cleanup
Message-ID:  <200205190512.g4J5C2411413@guest.reppep.com>

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>Number:         38276
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       HTML & text cleanup
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat May 18 22:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 4.5-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE #0: Mon Jan 28 14:31:56 GMT 2002 murray@builder.freebsdmall.com:/usr/src/sys/compile/GENERIC i386


	
>Description:
Add hostid tag to domain name.
Clarify that *sendmail* must be restarted (current wording is ambiguous).
A few more minor clean-ups.
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
SGML diff attached.

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
diff -u -r1.49 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	2002/05/12 23:34:30	1.49
+++ chapter.sgml	2002/05/19 05:02:13
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
       the local host name.  Place any domains or hosts that
       <application>sendmail</application> is to be receiving mail for.
       For example, if this mail server was to accept mail for the
-      domain example.com and the host
+      domain <hostid role="domainname">example.com</hostid> and the host
       <hostid>mail.example.com</hostid>, its
       <filename>local-host-names</filename> might look something like
       this:</para>
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@
 mail.example.com</programlisting>
 
     <para>When this file is updated, &man.sendmail.8; needs to be
-    restarted for it to read the changes.</para>
+    restarted to read the changes.</para>
     
   </sect2>
 
@@ -416,14 +416,14 @@
     <para><application>sendmail</application>'s master configuration
       file, <filename>sendmail.cf</filename> controls the overall
       behavior of <application>sendmail</application>, including everything
-      from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing reject messages for
+      from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing rejection messages to
       remote mail servers.  Naturally, with such a diverse role, this
       configuration file is quite complex and its details are a bit
       out of the scope of this section.  Fortunately, this file rarely
       needs to be changed for standard mail servers.</para>
 
     <para>The master <application>sendmail</application> configuration
-      file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define features
+      file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define the features
       and behavior of sendmail.  Please see
       <filename>/usr/src/contrib/sendmail/cf/README</filename> for
       some of the details.</para>
@@ -436,11 +436,11 @@
   <sect2>
     <title><filename>/etc/mail/virtusertable</filename></title>
 
-    <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail for 
+    <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail addresses for 
       virtual domains and
       mailboxes to real mailboxes.  These mailboxes can be local,
-      remote, an alias defined in
-      <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or a file.</para>
+      remote, aliases defined in
+      <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or files.</para>
 
     <example>
 	<title>Example Virtual Domain Mail Map</title>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


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