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Doug Barton p=ED=A8e v =FAt 17. 01. 2006 v 01:37 -0800:
> Pav Lucistnik wrote:
> > Doug Barton p=ED=B9e v po 16. 01. 2006 v 18:12 -0800:
> >=20
> >> I've gone through the handbook and updated a few areas related to the =
rc.d
> >> new world order, and would appreciate review, especially for style, of=
 my
> >> patch, since it's been a while since I've done anything beyond simple =
doc work.
> >=20
> >> http://people.freebsd.org/~dougb/doc-rc.d.diff
> >=20
> > Regarding Porter's Handbook patch, what's wrong with opening the text
> > with "Startup scripts"?=20
>=20
> I'm definitely open to a better suggestion here.

I don't have a better suggestion on this. I'm cool with the patch now.


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Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz>
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