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Date: Tue, 29 Mar 2011 14:39:49 +0300
From: Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: Release version information in the installation page.
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On 03/29/2011 12:46 PM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote:
> Hello, freebsd-doc@
>
> I would like to update the release version infomation in the FreeBSD Handbook
> installation page (doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml).
>
> How about the follwing patch?
>
> Regards,
>   Ryusuke
>   
Hi Ryusuke,

Looks fine,  better use 8.<replaceable>X</replaceable> instead of just
8.X. It is also worth inserting &nbsp; where appropriate, i.e.
&os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>X</replaceable>


Cheers,
Manolis