Date: Mon, 30 Aug 1999 12:09:04 +0100 (BST) From: mark@ukug.uk.freebsd.org To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/13465: Fix typos in the Documentation Primer Message-ID: <199908301109.MAA00825@marder-1.>
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>Number: 13465
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Fix typos in the Documentation Primer
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Aug 30 04:30:00 PDT 1999
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Mark Ovens mark@ukug.uk.freebsd.org
>Release: FreeBSD 3.1-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
Fix a couple of typos in section 4.2.4.2 of the Documentation
Project Primer.
A <title> tag is ended with </para>
Also, just to be pedantic, although Nik is English the example
text is from the US Constitution so "defence" should be "defense".
>How-To-Repeat:
Read the FDP Primer
>Fix:
*** doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml.orig Mon Aug 30 11:33:09 1999
--- doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml Mon Aug 30 11:33:51 1999
***************
*** 978,990 ****
<![ CDATA [<para>A small excerpt from the US Constitution;</para>
<blockquote>
! <title>Preamble to the Constitution of the United States</para>
<attribution>Copied from a web site somewhere</attribution>
<para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect
Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the
! common defence, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings
of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this
Constitution for the United States of America.</para>
</blockquote>]]></programlisting>
--- 978,990 ----
<![ CDATA [<para>A small excerpt from the US Constitution;</para>
<blockquote>
! <title>Preamble to the Constitution of the United States</title>
<attribution>Copied from a web site somewhere</attribution>
<para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect
Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the
! common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings
of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this
Constitution for the United States of America.</para>
</blockquote>]]></programlisting>
***************
*** 998,1004 ****
<para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more
perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility,
! provide for the common defence, promote the general Welfare, and
secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity,
do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States
of America.</para>
--- 998,1004 ----
<para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more
perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility,
! provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and
secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity,
do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States
of America.</para>
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