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From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
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chern       2001/09/19 17:37:20 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml 
  Log:
   * Grammar nit changes
   * Reworded sentences for consistency/understandability
   * Consistency/Standardization changes
   * Minor markup changes, placing items in <devicename>, and so forth
   * Revising constant usage of ie
   * Used generic Example.EDU in examples
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.60      +147 -122  doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml


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