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Date:      Thu, 26 Aug 2010 23:40:16 +0800
From:      Li <fender0107401@gmail.com>
To:        freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   A seggestion about Chapter 29.
Message-ID:  <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation>

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Hi all:

FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers -> 
29.2 The inetd “Super-Server” -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options:

>Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually
>do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting
>options below as they be useful should you find that you are 
>receiving an excessive amount of connections. 
>A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual.

I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long.

It may cause some confusion.

So, I suggest some modify it.

				fender0107401



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