Date: Sun, 8 Dec 2002 12:42:01 +0100 (CET) From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/46093: [PATCH] Various fixes for the IPv6 habdbook chapter Message-ID: <20021208114201.9430EABC9@milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de>
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>Number: 46093
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] Various fixes for the IPv6 habdbook chapter
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Dec 08 03:50:01 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Christian Brueffer
>Release: FreeBSD 4.7-STABLE i386
>Organization:
Aachen University of Technology (RWTH)
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de 4.7-STABLE FreeBSD 4.7-STABLE #7: Mon Oct 14 10:21:39 CEST 2002 chris@milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LORIEN i386
>Description:
- natd address translation -> Network Address Translation
- IPSec -> IPsec
- mozilla+ipv6 was removed from the ports tree some time ago,
so reference mozilla instead
- Remove a contradiction
- punctuation fixes
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- advanced-networking.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.orig Tue Dec 3 09:20:16 2002
+++ chapter.sgml Sun Dec 8 12:25:56 2002
@@ -6236,11 +6236,12 @@
anymore since private address spaces
(<hostid role="ipaddr">10.0.0.0/8</hostid>,
<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0/24</hostid>,
- etc.) and natd address translation are being employed.</para>
+ etc.) and Network Address Translation (<acronym>NAT</acronym>) are
+ being employed.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Router table entries were getting to large. This is
+ <para>Router table entries were getting too large. This is
still a concern today.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -6251,7 +6252,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>128 bit address space. In other words theoretically there are
340,282,366,920,938,463,463,374,607,431,768,211,456 addresses
- available. This means there are approximately.
+ available. This means there are approximately
6.67 * 10^27 IPv6 addresses per square meter on our planet.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -6278,7 +6279,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>IPSec (IP Security)</para>
+ <para>IPsec (IP security)</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -6468,7 +6469,7 @@
<para>This output will differ from machine to machine. By now you should be
able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net">www.kame.net</ulink>;
and see the dancing tortoise - that is if you have a IPv6 enabled browser such as
- <filename role="package">mozilla+ipv6</filename>.</para>
+ <filename role="package">mozilla</filename>.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -6482,7 +6483,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>A6records</para>
+ <para>A6 records</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -6491,7 +6492,7 @@
<programlisting>MYHOSTNAME AAAA MYIPv6ADDR</programlisting>
- <para>To your primary zone DNS file. In case you don't serve your own
+ <para>To your primary zone DNS file. In case you do not serve your own
<acronym>DNS</acronym> zones ask your <acronym>DNS</acronym> provider.
Current versions of <application>bind</application> (version 8.3 and 9)
support AAAA records.</para>
--- advanced-networking.diff ends here ---
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