From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Feb 13 04:20:24 2005 Return-Path: <owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG> Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A27D116A4CF for <freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org>; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:20:24 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5164E43D5A for <freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org>; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:20:24 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j1D4KOJ4074839 for <freebsd-doc@freefall.freebsd.org>; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:20:24 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j1D4KOxK074838; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:20:24 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:20:24 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200502130420.j1D4KOxK074838@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, "Paul A.Hoadley" <paulh@logicsquad.net> Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 07CF316A4CF for <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:17:10 +0000 (GMT) Received: from grover.logicsquad.net (ppp140-249.lns1.adl2.internode.on.net [150.101.140.249]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 7074643D39 for <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:17:08 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from paulh@logicsquad.net) Received: (qmail 11940 invoked by uid 1000); 13 Feb 2005 04:17:06 -0000 Message-Id: <20050213041706.11939.qmail@grover.logicsquad.net> Date: 13 Feb 2005 04:17:06 -0000 From: "Paul A.Hoadley" <paulh@logicsquad.net> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/77437: Typos in gmirror(8) manual page X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: "Paul A.Hoadley" <paulh@logicsquad.net> List-Id: Documentation project <freebsd-doc.freebsd.org> List-Unsubscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc>, <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc> List-Post: <mailto:freebsd-doc@freebsd.org> List-Help: <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc>, <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:20:24 -0000 >Number: 77437 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Typos in gmirror(8) manual page >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 13 04:20:23 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Paul A. Hoadley >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: Logic Squad >Environment: System: FreeBSD grover.logicsquad.net 4.8-STABLE FreeBSD 4.8-STABLE #0: Mon May 12 16:58:58 CST 2003 paulh@grover.logicsquad.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GROVER i386 >Description: Almost trivial typos in gmirror.8. >How-To-Repeat: man gmirror >Fix: Diff to gmirror.8 v1.11 attached. The first two are perhaps a little subjective. (In fact, the first is not even an error. It just sounds awkward. The second is similarly strictly correct, but sounds better with a definite article.) The third should be changed to "List all currently configured devices;" or "List every currently configured device;". I chose the latter. --- diff begins here --- --- gmirror.8.orig Sun Feb 13 14:26:31 2005 +++ gmirror.8 Sun Feb 13 14:35:32 2005 @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ .Sh DESCRIPTION The .Nm -utility is used for mirrors (RAID1) configuration. +utility is used for mirror (RAID1) configuration. After a mirror's creation, all components are detected and configured automatically. All operations like failure detection, stale component detection, rebuild @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ Create a mirror. The order of components is important, because a component's priority is based on its position (starting from 0). -The component with the biggest priority is used by prefer balance algorithm +The component with the biggest priority is used by the prefer balance algorithm and is also used as a master component when resynchronization is needed, e.g.\& after a power failure when the device was open for writing. .Pp @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Stop the given mirror even if it is opened. .El .It Cm list -List every currently configured devices; if a list of devices is passed as a +List every currently configured device; if a list of devices is passed as a parameter then only those devices will be shown. .It Cm load Load --- diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: