From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Sep 17 14:30:22 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3374216A417 for ; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:30:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9C24443D5F for ; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:30:21 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id k8HEULdg024708 for ; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:30:21 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id k8HEULqv024707; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:30:21 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:30:21 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200609171430.k8HEULqv024707@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Marian Cerny Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6321116A407 for ; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:22:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [216.136.204.117]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 28DA043D53 for ; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:22:03 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id k8HEM2xL036045 for ; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:22:02 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id k8HEM2Oe036044; Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:22:02 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200609171422.k8HEM2Oe036044@www.freebsd.org> Date: Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:22:02 GMT From: Marian Cerny To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-2.3 Cc: Subject: docs/103327: Typos in articles/vm-design X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 17 Sep 2006 14:30:22 -0000 >Number: 103327 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Typos in articles/vm-design >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Sep 17 14:30:20 GMT 2006 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marian Cerny >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: I have found two typos in Articles > Design elements of the FreeBSD VM system (vm-design). The first one is in section 2 VM Objects. There is one extra right parenthesis at the end of the sentence: "The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a “real” file)." The second one is in section 9 Bonus QA session by Allen Briggs, question 9.5. Finally, in the page coloring section, it might help to have a little more description of what you mean here. I did not quite follow it. In the sentence "If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0!" there is one extra word offset. >How-To-Repeat: Look at http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/vm-objects.html http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/allen-briggs-qa.html#Q9.5. >Fix: Change: The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a “real” file). To: The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a “real” file. And: If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0! To: If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0! >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: