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Subject: Re: [RFC] Article on freebsd-update-server
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Hello there,

2009/11/19 Manolis Kiagias <manolis@freebsd.org>:
> The source is here:
>
> http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/patches/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml.txt
>
> And the build:
>
> http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/patches/freebsd-update-server/index.html
>
> Please send us any comments and suggestions  on content, format or whatever!

I have created a modified version of your version on freefall, and I put there:

http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2009/11/22/article.html

You can find the modified sources as well as a diff against the
original one (my comments are added inline as comments) here:

http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2009/11/22/article.sgml.txt
http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2009/11/22/article.diff

I hope it helps.

Cheers,
:g