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wblock      2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Various fixes:
  "effective at improving performance" is correct in English.
  "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded.
  Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information.
  Spelling/grammar.
  Simplify Introducing bsdinstall.
  Expand/clarify mirror site description choice.
  Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you".
  "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting".
  Add link to network information.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.2       +44 -41    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml