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Author: wblock
Date: Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013
New Revision: 42279
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42279

Log:
  Simplify and clarify.
  
  Reviewed by:	dru

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 08:24:02 2013	(r42278)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
     <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  Willingness to contribute is the only
     membership requirement.</para>
 
-  <para>This primer shows the reader how to:</para>
+  <para>This primer shows how to:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>Submit changes back for review and eventual inclusion in
+      <para>Submit changes back for review and inclusion in
 	the &os; documentation.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
@@ -110,22 +110,22 @@
 
     <para>Translation teams are responsible for translating the
       Handbook and web site into different languages.  Manual pages
-      are not translated.</para>
+      are not translated at present.</para>
 
     <para>Documentation source for the &os; web site, Handbook, and
-      <acronym>FAQ</acronym> is available in the Subversion
+      <acronym>FAQ</acronym> is available in the documentation
       repository at
       <literal>https://svn.FreeBSD.org/doc/</literal>.</para>
 
     <para>Source for manual pages is available in a separate
-      Subversion repository located at
+      source repository located at
       <literal>https://svn.FreeBSD.org/base/</literal>.</para>
 
     <para>Documentation commit messages are visible with
-      <application>svn</application>.  Commit messages are also
+      <command>svn log</command>.  Commit messages are also
       archived at <ulink url="&a.svn-doc-all.url;"></ulink>.</para>
 
-    <para>In addition, many people have written tutorials or how-to
+    <para>Many people have written tutorials or how-to
       articles about &os;.  Some are stored as part of the
       <acronym>FDP</acronym> files.  In other cases, the author has
       decided to keep the documentation separate.  The
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@
   <sect1 id="overview-quick-start">
     <title>Quick Start</title>
 
-    <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must take before
-      making changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.  New
+    <para>Some preparatory steps must be taken before
+      editing the &os; documentation.  New
       contributors will interact with other members of the &os;
       Documentation Team, which can assist in learning to use
       <acronym>XML</acronym> and the suggestions in
@@ -148,8 +148,8 @@
 
     <procedure>
       <step>
-	<para>Subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some members of the mailing
-	  list also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
+	<para>Subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some mailing list
+	  members also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
 	  <acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on <ulink
 	    url="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</ulink>.</para>
       </step>
@@ -158,26 +158,25 @@
 	<para>Install the
 	  <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename>
 	  package or port.  This meta-port installs all of the
-	  utilities needed by the <acronym>FDP</acronym>.</para>
+	  software needed to edit and build &os; documentation.</para>
       </step>
 
       <step>
 	<para>Install a local working copy of the documentation
-	  from a mirror of the &os; repository.  For the fastest
-	  download, pick the nearest mirror from the list of <ulink
-	    url="&url.books.handbook;/subversion-mirrors.html">Subversion
-	    mirror sites</ulink>.  If <filename
+	  from a mirror of the &os; repository.  If <filename
 	    class="directory">/usr/doc</filename> already exists, move
 	  or delete it first to prevent file conflicts.</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn checkout https://<replaceable>svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/doc/head <replaceable>/usr/doc</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
+	<para>For the fastest download, pick the nearest mirror from
+	  the list of <ulink
+	    url="&url.books.handbook;/subversion-mirrors.html">Subversion
+	    mirror sites</ulink>.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>Before making any documentation edits, configure your
-	    editor to conform to <acronym>FDP</acronym> standards.
-	    How to do so varies by editor.  Some editor configurations
-	    are listed in <xref linkend="writing-style"/>. The editor
+	  <para>The editor to be used
 	    should be configured as follows:</para>
 
 	  <itemizedlist>
@@ -194,38 +193,43 @@
 		single tab.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>
+
+	  <para>
+	    Some specific editor configurations
+	    are listed in <xref linkend="writing-style"/>.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>Locate the file to edit.  Run
-	    <command>svn up</command> within the local working copy to
-	    make sure that it is up to date.  Before making major
-	    changes to a file, discuss the proposed changes with the
+	  <para>Run
+	    <command>svn up</command> to update the local working copy.
+	    Edit the documentation files that need changes.
+	    Before making major
+	    changes to a file, ask for input on the
 	    &a.doc;.</para>
 
-	  <para>When making edits, determine which tags and entities
-	    are needed to achieve the desired formatting.  One way to
-	    learn is to compare some text in the
+	  <para>To learn which tags and entities
+	    are needed to achieve the desired formatting,
+	    compare some text in the
 	    <acronym>HTML</acronym> formatted version of the document
-	    to the tags which surround the text or the entities that
-	    represent that text in the <acronym>XML</acronym> file.
+	    to the text, tags, and entities
+	    in the <acronym>XML</acronym> file.
 	    References to the commonly used tags and entities can be
 	    found in <xref linkend="xhtml-markup"/> and
 	    <xref linkend="docbook-markup"/>.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>After edits are complete, check for problems by
+	  <para>After editing, check for problems by
 	    running:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>igor -R filename.xml | less -RS</userinput></screen>
 
-	  <para>Review the output and edit the file to fix any listed
-	    tab errors, spelling mistakes, and improper grammar.  Save
-	    the changes and rerun this command to find any remaining
-	    problems.  Repeat until all of the errors that you deem
-	    fixable are resolved.  If you get stuck trying to fix
-	    errors, ask for assistance on the &a.doc;.</para>
+	  <para>Review the output and edit the file to fix any
+	    problems shown, then
+	    rerun the command to find any remaining
+	    problems.  Repeat until all of the errors that are
+	    fixable are resolved.  If an error seems unsolvable,
+	    ask for assistance on the &a.doc;.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
@@ -234,34 +238,24 @@
 	    <userinput>make</userinput> in the top-level directory of
 	    the type of documentation being edited will generate that
 	    documentation in split HTML format.  For example, to build
-	    the English version of the Handbook, type
+	    the English version of the Handbook in <acronym>HTML</acronym>, type
 	    <command>make</command> in the
 	    <filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/</filename>
-	    directory.  This step is necessary to make sure that the
+	    directory.  This step is necessary to make sure that
 	    edits do not break the build.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>In order to build the output in other formats, other
-	    <application>make</application> targets are defined in
-	    <filename>head/share/mk/doc.docbook.mk</filename>.  Use
-	    quotes around the list of formats when building more than
-	    one format with a single command.</para>
-
-	  <para>For example, to convert the document to both
-	    <literal>.html</literal> and <literal>.txt</literal>, use
-	    this command:</para>
-
-	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>make FORMATS="html txt"</userinput></screen>
-
-	  <para>Once these steps are successfully completed, generate
-	    a <quote>diff file</quote> of the changes.  While in
-	    <filename class="directory">/usr/doc</filename>, run this
-	    command, replacing <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable>
-	    with the name of the directory containing the
-	    edits:</para>
+	  <para>After successfully completing the previous steps, generate
+	    a <quote>diff file</quote> of the changes:</para>
+
+	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd /usr/doc</userinput>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff > <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable>.diff.txt</userinput></screen>
 
-	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff > <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable>.diff.txt</userinput></screen>
+	  <para>Give the diff file a name that describes the contents.
+	    In the example above, changes have been made to the
+	    <filename class="directory">bsdinstall</filename> portion
+	    of the Handbook.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
@@ -276,15 +270,13 @@
 	    should contain a short description of the edits and any
 	    important discussion points.  Use the
 	    <guibutton>[&nbsp;Browse...&nbsp;]</guibutton> button to
-	    attach the <literal>.diff.txt</literal> file and enter
-	    the captcha phrase.</para>
+	    attach the <literal>.diff.txt</literal>.</para>
 
-	  <para>It is important to remember that the
+	  <para>Remember that the
 	    <acronym>FDP</acronym> is comprised of volunteers who
 	    review edits in their spare time and who live in different
-	    time zones around the globe.  It takes time to review
-	    edits and to either commit them or respond if additional
-	    edits are required.  If you do not receive a response in a
+	    time zones around the globe.  It can take some time to review
+	    changes.  If a response is not received in a
 	    reasonable amount of time, send a follow-up email to the
 	    &a.doc; and ask if anyone has had a chance to review the
 	    patch or if additional information is required.</para>

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On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote:

> On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
>
>  Potentially a single, more constrained user would require
>  an additional label to be added, the resource database
>  rebuilt using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, and edits made to
>  <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename>.


That helps, thanks.

-Ben

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Author: wblock
Date: Sun Jul 14 18:14:09 2013
New Revision: 42281
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42281

Log:
  Improve a strange sentence in the resource limits section.
  
  Reviewed by:	bjk

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 18:14:09 2013	(r42281)
@@ -3742,8 +3742,8 @@ VII. References <co id="co-ref"/></progr
       group labels known as classes, which require changes not
       only to this flat file but also the password database.
       Potentially a single, more constrained user would require
-      an additional label added, the resource database needs to be
-      built using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, edits made to
+      an additional label to be added, the resource database
+      rebuilt using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, and edits made to
       <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename>.  In
       addition, the password database must be rebuilt using
       <command>pwd_mkdb</command>.  This multi-step process could be

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Author: gjb
Date: Sun Jul 14 20:59:45 2013
New Revision: 42282
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42282

Log:
  Updates to the releng article:
  
   - Explicitly note 'doc/head/' is the parent path for the
     website files.
   - Update paths that have not been updated since the conversion
     to subversion.
   - Remove files that no longer exist.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 18:14:09 2013	(r42281)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 20:59:45 2013	(r42282)
@@ -542,42 +542,37 @@
         This information is currently kept in
 	<filename>src/usr.sbin/sysinstall/dist.c</filename>.</para>
 
-      <para>After the release has been built, a number of file should
-        be updated to announce the release to the world.</para>
+      <para>After the release has been built, a number of files should
+	be updated to announce the release to the world.  These files
+	are relative to <literal>head/</literal> within the
+	<literal>doc/</literal> subversion tree.</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para><filename>doc/share/images/articles/releng/branches-releng<replaceable>X</replaceable>.pic</filename></para>
+          <para><filename>share/images/articles/releng/branches-releng<replaceable>X</replaceable>.pic</filename></para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/share/xml/advisories.xml</filename></para>
+	  <para><filename>head/share/xml/release.ent</filename></para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/share/xml/includes.release.xml</filename></para>
+	  <para><filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/*</filename></para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/share/xml/includes.release.xsl</filename></para>
+	  <para><filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releng/index.xml</filename></para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/en/releases/*</filename></para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/en/releng/index.xml</filename></para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/en/news/news.xml</filename></para>
+	  <para><filename>share/xml/news.xml</filename></para>
         </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
 
-        <listitem>
-          <para><filename>www/en/search/web.atoz</filename></para>
-        </listitem>
+      <para>Additionally, update the <quote>BSD Family Tree</quote>
+	file:</para>
 
+      <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para><filename>src/share/misc/bsd-family-tree</filename></para>
         </listitem>

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Subject: svn commit: r42280 - in head/ru_RU.KOI8-R: articles/committers-guide
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Author: taras
Date: Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013
New Revision: 42280
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42280

Log:
  + make use of &a.*.email; entities within ru/articles && ru/books.

Modified:
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/console-server/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/gjournal-desktop/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/hubs/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/mailing-list-faq/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng-packages/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng/article.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/faq/book.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
  head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry><emphasis>&a.cvsadm;</emphasis></entry>
-	    <entry>&a.peter; и &a.markm;, а также &a.joe; и &a.marcus; для
+	    <entry>&a.peter.email; и &a.markm.email;, а также &a.joe.email; и &a.marcus.email; для
 	      иерархии <filename>ports/</filename></entry>
 	  </row>
 
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ alias scvs cvs -d <replaceable>user</rep
 	необходимости синхронизации с самыми свежими изменениями вы можете
 	пользоваться машиной <hostid>cvsup-master</hostid>, которая обладает
 	достаточными ресурсами для удаленной работы с CVS; за нее отвечает
-	&a.kuriyama;.
+	&a.kuriyama.email;.
       </para>
     </note>
 
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ alias scvs cvs -d <replaceable>user</rep
       Некоторая полезная информация о CVS на русском языке может быть найдена
       <ulink url="http://alexm.here.ru/cvs-ru/">здесь</ulink>.</para>
 
-    <para>&a.des; написал такой <quote>мини-пример</quote> работы с CVS:</para>
+    <para>&a.des.email; написал такой <quote>мини-пример</quote> работы с CVS:</para>
 
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -1131,7 +1131,7 @@ Host pcvs.FreeBSD.org
 	  вам нужно его создать).  Не забудьте изменить и произвести коммит
 	  в файл <filename>doc/share/pgpkeys/pgpkeys.ent</filename>.</para>
 
-	<para>&a.des; написал скрипт для упрощения этого процесса.
+	<para>&a.des.email; написал скрипт для упрощения этого процесса.
 	  Дополнительную информацию можно прочесть в файле <ulink
 	  url="http://cvsweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/share/pgpkeys/README">README</ulink>.</para>
 
@@ -1307,7 +1307,7 @@ Host pcvs.FreeBSD.org
       в файле <filename>Makefile</filename>.  Для других частей репозитория,
       в случае если вам не очевидно, кто ведет данный участок кода, может
       помочь исследование вывода команды <command>cvs log</command>.
-      &a.fenner; написал отличный скрипт для определения разработчиков,
+      &a.fenner.email; написал отличный скрипт для определения разработчиков,
       наиболее активно производивших коммиты, выводящий для каждого из
       указанных файлов имя пользователя вместе с количеством произведенных
       им коммитов в данный файл.  Скрипт можно найти на машине
@@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
     <variablelist>
 
       <varlistentry>
-	<term>&a.jhb;</term>
+	<term>&a.jhb.email;</term>
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Джон возглавляет проект SMPng и отвечает за архитектуру,
@@ -1525,7 +1525,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
       </varlistentry>
 
       <varlistentry>
-	<term>&a.ru;</term>
+	<term>&a.ru.email;</term>
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Руслан великолепно знает тонкости &man.mdoc.7;.  Если вы
@@ -1535,7 +1535,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
       </varlistentry>
 
       <varlistentry>
-	<term>&a.bde;</term>
+	<term>&a.bde.email;</term>
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Брюс занимается общим стилем кода проекта.  Если ваш коммит
@@ -1546,13 +1546,13 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
       </varlistentry>
 
       <varlistentry>
-	<term>&a.murray;</term>
-	<term>&a.dwhite;</term>
-	<term>&a.rwatson;</term>
-	<term>&a.kensmith;</term>
-	<term>&a.hrs;</term>
-	<term>&a.mux;</term>
-	<term>&a.bmah;</term>
+	<term>&a.murray.email;</term>
+	<term>&a.dwhite.email;</term>
+	<term>&a.rwatson.email;</term>
+	<term>&a.kensmith.email;</term>
+	<term>&a.hrs.email;</term>
+	<term>&a.mux.email;</term>
+	<term>&a.bmah.email;</term>
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Таков состав группы &a.re;.  Эта группа отвечает за сроки
@@ -1572,7 +1572,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
       </varlistentry>
 
       <varlistentry>
-	<term>&a.cperciva;</term>
+	<term>&a.cperciva.email;</term>
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Колин&nbsp;&mdash;
@@ -1584,7 +1584,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
       </varlistentry>
 
       <varlistentry>
-	<term>&a.wollman;</term>
+	<term>&a.wollman.email;</term>
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Если вам нужен совет по поводу темных мест сетевой части ядра,
@@ -2339,7 +2339,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
 	      <filename>Makefile</filename>, добавит строку в файл
 	      <filename>CVSROOT/modules</filename> и в файл
 	      <filename>Makefile</filename> для нужной категории.
-	      Скрипт был написан &a.mharo; и &a.will;; вопросы и исправления
+	      Скрипт был написан &a.mharo.email; и &a.will.email;; вопросы и исправления
 	      по поводу <command>addport</command> следует отправлять Уиллу,
 	      как текущему мейнтейнеру.</para>
 	  </answer>
@@ -2451,7 +2451,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:freebsd-doc:</pro
 
 	    <para>Вы можете воспользоваться скриптом <command>rmport</command>
 	      из каталога <filename class="directory">ports/Tools/scripts</filename>.
-	      Этот скрипт написал &a.vd;, и он же его поддерживает, так что
+	      Этот скрипт написал &a.vd.email;, и он же его поддерживает, так что
 	      вопросы, исправления и замечания по поводу  <command>rmport</command>
 	      следует посылать непосредственно ему.</para>
 	  </answer>
@@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ bak/packages  пакеты последней полной сб
 	<term>Прямой доступ к машине <hostid>cvsup-master</hostid></term>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Будучи коммиттером, вы можете обратиться к &a.kuriyama;, чтобы
+	  <para>Будучи коммиттером, вы можете обратиться к &a.kuriyama.email;, чтобы
 	    получить доступ к машине
 	    <hostid role="fqdn">cvsup-master.FreeBSD.org</hostid>, приложив
 	    вывод команды <command>cvpasswd
@@ -3101,7 +3101,7 @@ bak/packages  пакеты последней полной сб
 
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>Опция CVS <option>-j</option> не всегда хорошо работает.
-		Можете спросить &a.obrien;, он расскажет вам жутких
+		Можете спросить &a.obrien.email;, он расскажет вам жутких
 		историй.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 	  </itemizedlist>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/console-server/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/console-server/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/console-server/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ print crypt($cleartext, $salt), "\n";</p
 	  паролей DES, скорее всего, потребует другой базы шифрования.</para>
       </note>
 
-      <para>Недавно &a.kris; показал, что вы можете достичь того же эффекта
+      <para>Недавно &a.kris.email; показал, что вы можете достичь того же эффекта
 	при помощи команды <command>openssl passwd</command>:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.user; openssl passwd -1

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/gjournal-desktop/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/gjournal-desktop/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/gjournal-desktop/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -708,13 +708,13 @@ tunefs: soft updates set</screen>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para><ulink url="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-current/2006-June/064043.html">Этот пост</ulink>
-	  в списке рассылки &a.current.name;, написанный &a.pjd; &mdash;
+	  в списке рассылки &a.current.name;, написанный &a.pjd.email; &mdash;
 	  автором &man.gjournal.8;.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para><ulink url="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-questions/2008-April/173501.html">Этот пост</ulink>
-	  от &a.ivoras; в списке рассылки &a.questions.name;.</para>
+	  от &a.ivoras.email; в списке рассылки &a.questions.name;.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/hubs/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/hubs/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/hubs/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@
 	  <application>AnonCVS</application>, FTP,
 	  <application>rsync</application> или HTTP, но использование
 	  <application>CVSup</application> наиболее разумно.
-	  Автором <application>CVSup</application> является &a.jdp;.
+	  Автором <application>CVSup</application> является &a.jdp.email;.
 	  <application>CVSup</application> непросто установить на платформе,
 	  отличной от FreeBSD, поскольку он написан на языке Modula-3 и требует
 	  соответствующего окружения.  Джон Полстра создал усеченную версию M3,
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@
 	<programlisting>/dev/da0s1b /anoncvstmp mfs rw,-s=786432,-b=4096,-f=512,-i=560,-c=3,-m=0,nosuid 0 0</programlisting>
 
 	<para>Эти установки (разумеется, тщательно подобранные) предложил
-	  &a.jdp;.</para>
+	  &a.jdp.email;.</para>
       </sect3>
    </sect2>
   </sect1>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/mailing-list-faq/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/mailing-list-faq/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/mailing-list-faq/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@
 
       <variablelist>
 	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>&a.grog;</term>
+	  <term>&a.grog.email;</term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Первоначальный автор большинства материала по этикету списков
 	      рассылки, взятого из статьи <ulink
@@ -504,7 +504,7 @@
 	</varlistentry>
 
 	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>&a.linimon;</term>
+	  <term>&a.linimon.email;</term>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Создание черновой версии данного FAQ.</para>
 	  </listitem>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng-packages/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng-packages/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng-packages/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -416,6 +416,6 @@
 
     <para>Если вы окончательно запутались, и не можете понять, почему всё
       работает неправильно и как это исправить, то пошлите письмо в адрес
-      &a.steve; с просьбой о помощи.</para>
+      &a.steve.email; с просьбой о помощи.</para>
   </sect1>
 </article>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/releng/article.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -1090,10 +1090,10 @@
       дал мне возможность взять под свою ответственность некоторые части
       процесса подготовки релиза &os;&nbsp;4.4, а также за все годы его работы,
       сделавшие &os; такой, какой она является сейчас.  Конечно, релиз не
-      был бы возможен без той работы, которую проделали &a.asami;, &a.steve;,
-      &a.bmah;, &a.nik;, &a.obrien;, &a.kris;, &a.jhb; и остальные члены
+      был бы возможен без той работы, которую проделали &a.asami.email;, &a.steve.email;,
+      &a.bmah.email;, &a.nik.email;, &a.obrien.email;, &a.kris.email;, &a.jhb.email; и остальные члены
       сообщества разработчиков &os;.  Я также рад выразить благодарность
-      &a.rgrimes; и &a.phk;, а также остальным, работавшим над инструментами
+      &a.rgrimes.email; и &a.phk.email;, а также остальным, работавшим над инструментами
       подготовки релизов в первые годы существования &os;.  Эта статья была
       также написана под впечатлением документации по подготовке релизов от
       CSRG[13], NetBSD Project[10] и замечаний Джона Балдвина (John Baldwin)

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
 <chapter id="driverbasics">
   <title>Написание драйверов устройств для FreeBSD</title>
 
-  <para>Эту главу написал &.murray; на основе множества
+  <para>Эту главу написал &a.murray.email; на основе множества
     источников, включая справочную страницу intro(4), которую
-    создал &a.joerg;.</para>
+    создал &a.joerg.email;.</para>
 
   <sect1 id="driverbasics-intro">
     <title>Введение</title>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -538,7 +538,7 @@
           <function>channel_resetdone()</function>, и
           <function>channel_notify()</function> предназначены для
 	  специальных целей и не должны употребляться в драйвере
-	  без обсуждения с авторами (&a.cg;).</para>
+	  без обсуждения с авторами (&a.cg.email;).</para>
 
         <para><function>channel_setdir()</function> is deprecated.</para>
       </sect3>

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -1475,7 +1475,7 @@
 	  <para>Сообщалось, что в более поздних версиях BIOS от IBM эта
 	    ошибка может появиться снова.  <ulink
 	    url="http://docs.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?20010427133759.A71732">Это
-	    сообщение</ulink> от &a.nectar; в &a.mobile; описывает
+	    сообщение</ulink> от &a.nectar.email; в &a.mobile; описывает
 	    процедуру, выполнение которой может помочь, если ваш новый лэптоп
 	    от IBM не загружает &os;, и вы можете изменить BIOS.</para>
 
@@ -3479,7 +3479,7 @@ quit</programlisting>
 	<answer>
 	  <para>Причины такого поведения объясняются в следующем сообщении
 	    электронной почты, опубликованном в &a.questions;
-	    Питером Уэммом (&a.peter;) в ответ на вопрос о внутреннем модеме,
+	    &a.peter.email; в ответ на вопрос о внутреннем модеме,
 	    который перестал распознаваться после обновления до &os;
 	    4.<replaceable>X</replaceable>
 	    (комментарии внутри <literal>[]</literal> были добавлены для
@@ -4459,7 +4459,7 @@ kern.timecounter.hardware: TSC -&gt; i82
 	  <para>Тем не менее, начиная с версии &os;&nbsp;6.2-RELEASE,
 	    пользователи &os; больше не страдают от отсутствия встроенного
 	    клиента, совместимого с <application>CVSup</application>.
-	    Благодаря &a.mux;, <application>CVSup</application> был
+	    Благодаря &a.mux.email;, <application>CVSup</application> был
 	    переписан на языке Си и получил название &man.csup.1;, и теперь
 	    является частью базового комплекта.  И хотя в настоящее время
 	    в клиенте не реализованы все функциональные возможности
@@ -6103,7 +6103,7 @@ perm	/dev/acd0	0660</programlisting>
 	  <para>Ниже следует часть письма, адресованного в &a.current;.</para>
 
 	  <blockquote>
-	    <attribution>&a.wollman;, 24 апреля 2001</attribution>
+	    <attribution>&a.wollman.email;, 24 апреля 2001</attribution>
 
 	    <para>Сообщение <quote>can't assign resources</quote> говорит о
 	      том, что устройство является устаревшим ISA-устройством, для
@@ -8789,7 +8789,7 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a
 	    режим отладки с их стороны, а потом, когда связь прервётся в
 	    следующий раз, они могут сказать вам, почему возникли проблемы
 	    с их стороны.  Будет хорошо, если вы пришлёте детальное описание
-	    на адрес &a.brian;, или даже попросите провайдера связаться
+	    на адрес &a.brian.email;, или даже попросите провайдера связаться
 	    с ним напрямую.</para>
 	</answer>
       </qandaentry>
@@ -8827,7 +8827,7 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a
 	    <application>gdb</application>.</para>
 
 	  <para>В завершение, отошлите результат сессии
-	    <application>gdb</application> на адрес &a.brian;.</para>
+	    <application>gdb</application> на адрес &a.brian.email;.</para>
 	</answer>
       </qandaentry>
 
@@ -10297,7 +10297,7 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
 	  <para>В общем, вы можете свободно использовать изображение в
 	    высокохудожественном стиле и в личных целях, если даются
 	    соответствующие отсылки.  Если вы хотите использовать его в
-	    коммерческих целях, вы должны обратиться к &a.mckusick;.
+	    коммерческих целях, вы должны обратиться к &a.mckusick.email;.
 	    Дополнительная информация находится на <ulink
 	    url="http://www.mckusick.com/beastie/index.html">домашней странице
 	    Даемона BSD</ulink>.</para>
@@ -10350,14 +10350,14 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
 
 	  <para>Более пространный и полный ответ заключается в том, что после очень
 	    долгого обсуждения того, должна ли утилита &man.sleep.1; обрабатывать
-	    дробное число, заданное в качестве второго аргумента, &a.phk;
+	    дробное число, заданное в качестве второго аргумента, &a.phk.email;
 	    опубликовал большое сообщение, озаглавленное <quote><ulink
 	    url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/getmsg.cgi?fetch=506636+517178+/usr/local/www/db/text/1999/freebsd-hackers/19991003.freebsd-hackers">
 	    Велосипедный навес (подставьте здесь цвет) на зелёной траве...</ulink></quote>.
 	    Соответствующие части этого сообщения цитируются ниже.</para>
 
 	    <blockquote>
-	      <attribution>&a.phk; on freebsd-hackers,
+	      <attribution>&a.phk.email; on freebsd-hackers,
 		October 2, 1999</attribution>
 
 	      <para><quote>Что это за история с навесом для велосипеда?</quote> Кто-то
@@ -10569,7 +10569,7 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
 	  <para>Спустя две недели после смены лампочки пятьдесят семь человек
 	    сообщат о том, что света всё равно нет.</para>
 
-	  <para><emphasis>&a.nik; добавил:</emphasis></para>
+	  <para><emphasis>&a.nik.email; добавил:</emphasis></para>
 
 	  <para><emphasis>Я сильно смеялся над всем этим.</emphasis></para>
 
@@ -10578,7 +10578,7 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
 
 	  <para><emphasis>И на меня снизошло озарение :-)</emphasis></para>
 
-	  <para><emphasis>&a.tabthorpe;</emphasis> говорит: <quote>Нет,
+	  <para><emphasis>&a.tabthorpe.email;</emphasis> говорит: <quote>Нет,
 	    <emphasis>настоящие</emphasis> хакеры &os; не боятся
 	    темноты!</quote></para>
 	</answer>
@@ -10983,7 +10983,7 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
 	    Как бы то ни было, я думаю, что это большое поле для
 	    экспериментов.</para>
 
-	  <para>&a.mckusick;, сентябрь 1998 года</para>
+	  <para>&a.mckusick.email;, сентябрь 1998 года</para>
 	</answer>
       </qandaentry>
 

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -2913,7 +2913,7 @@ cd /usr/src/etc; make distribution</prog
 	протоколов ISDN, не поддерживаемых на данный момент адаптеров ISDN для
 	PC или каких-то других усовершенствованиях
 	<application>isdn4bsd</application>, пожалуйста, свяжитесь с
-	&a.hm;.</para>
+	&a.hm.email;.</para>
 
       <para>Для обсуждения вопросов, связанных с установкой, настройкой и
 	устранением неисправностей <application>isdn4bsd</application>,

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -972,12 +972,12 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
     <title>Введение в <application>bsdinstall</application></title>
 
     <para><application>bsdinstall</application> это текстовая программа для
-      установки &os;, созданная &a.nwhitehorn; и представленная в 2011 году
+      установки &os;, созданная &a.nwhitehorn.email; и представленная в 2011 году
       для &os;&nbsp;9.0.</para>
 
     <note>
       <para>В комплекте с <ulink url="http://pcbsd.org">PC-BSD</ulink>
-	есть программа <application>pc-sysinstall</application> от &a.kmoore;,
+	есть программа <application>pc-sysinstall</application> от &a.kmoore.email;,
 	которая также может использоваться для <ulink
 	url="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">
 	установки &os;</ulink>.  Несмотря на то, что эту программу путают с

Modified: head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 13:03:00 2013	(r42279)
+++ head/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 14 16:53:00 2013	(r42280)
@@ -4008,7 +4008,7 @@ gbde_lockdir="/etc/gbde"</programlisting
 
       <para>Во &os; имеется альтернативный криптографический класс GEOM
 	&mdash; <command>geli</command>.  В настоящий момент он поддерживается
-	&a.pjd;.  Утилита <command>geli</command> отличается от
+	&a.pjd.email;.  Утилита <command>geli</command> отличается от
 	<command>gbde</command>; она предоставляет другой комплекс
 	возможностей и использует иную схему криптования.</para>
 

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Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jul 15 18:35:24 2013
New Revision: 42286
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42286

Log:
  Removing a port also requires removing the directory.
  
  PR:		docs/180579
  Submitted by:	Matthias Andree <mandree@FreeBSD.org>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Mon Jul 15 15:23:13 2013	(r42285)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Mon Jul 15 18:35:24 2013	(r42286)
@@ -3529,7 +3529,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
 
 		<procedure>
 		  <step>
-		    <para>Remove the port's files via
+		    <para>Remove the port's files and directory with
 		      <command>svn remove</command>.</para>
 		  </step>
 

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Author: eadler
Date: Mon Jul 15 20:59:25 2013
New Revision: 42287
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42287

Log:
  Use a better spanish translation for "Host Controller Interface"
  
  Submitted by:	Luis Manuel Sцёnchez <luissanchez.ee@gmail.com>

Modified:
  head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml

Modified: head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 15 18:35:24 2013	(r42286)
+++ head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 15 20:59:25 2013	(r42287)
@@ -1384,7 +1384,7 @@ Number of SCO packets: 8</screen>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Interfaz de la controladora de la mАquina (HCI)</title>
+      <title>Intefase Maquina-controlador</title>
 
       <indexterm><primary>HCI</primary></indexterm>
 

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Author: pgj
Date: Tue Jul 16 01:12:11 2013
New Revision: 42289
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42289

Log:
  - Change the suggested format of announcing quarterly status reports; this
    one shall interact better with search engines
  
  Submitted by:	theraven

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/README

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/README
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/README	Mon Jul 15 22:56:23 2013	(r42288)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/README	Tue Jul 16 01:12:11 2013	(r42289)
@@ -157,11 +157,11 @@ Report//EN"
     next due date in status.xml and link to the new report.
   - Add a news entry to head/share/xml/news.xml.  Template:
 	 <event>
-	   <title>June-October, 2006 Status Report</title>
+	   <title>June-October 2006 Status Report</title>
 
-           <p>The June-October, 2006 Status Report is <a
-             href="&enbase;/news/status/report-2006-06-2006-10.html">now
-	     available</a> with 49 entries.</p>
+	  <p>The <a
+		href="&enbase;/news/status/report-2006-06-2006-10.html">June to October 2006 Status Report</a>
+	     is now available with 49 entries.</p>
         </event>
   - Extract a text version with the command
     lynx -dump -nolist report.html > report.txt and prettify it.

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Author: pgj
Date: Tue Jul 16 01:37:28 2013
New Revision: 42290
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42290

Log:
  - Publish the April-June, 2013 Status Report

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/status.xml
  head/share/xml/news.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/status.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/status.xml	Tue Jul 16 01:12:11 2013	(r42289)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/status.xml	Tue Jul 16 01:37:28 2013	(r42290)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
     <body class="navinclude.about">
 
-  <h2>Next Quarterly Status Report submissions (April - June) due: July
+  <h2>Next Quarterly Status Report submissions (July - September) due: October
     7th, 2013</h2>
 
   <p>Use the <a href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/monthly.cgi">xml
@@ -55,6 +55,8 @@
   <h2>2013</h2>
 
   <ul>
+    <li><a href="report-2013-04-2013-06.html">April, 2013 -
+      June, 2013</a></li>
     <li><a href="report-2013-05-devsummit.html">BSDCan 2013 Developer
       Summit Special</a></li>
     <li><a href="report-2013-01-2013-03.html">January, 2013 -

Modified: head/share/xml/news.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/news.xml	Tue Jul 16 01:12:11 2013	(r42289)
+++ head/share/xml/news.xml	Tue Jul 16 01:37:28 2013	(r42290)
@@ -34,6 +34,18 @@
       <name>7</name>
 
       <day>
+	<name>16</name>
+
+	<event>
+	  <title>April-June, 2013 Status Report</title>
+
+	    <p>The <a
+		href="&enbase;/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.html">April-June, 2013 Status Report</a>
+	      is now available with 33 entries.</p>
+	</event>
+      </day>
+
+      <day>
 	<name>4</name>
 	<event>
 	  <p>New committer:

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Author: wblock
Date: Tue Jul 16 02:50:48 2013
New Revision: 42291
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42291

Log:
  Rewrite this section to get it to say what it was trying to say in a
  less circuitous fashion.
  
  Submitted by:	jgh

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml	Tue Jul 16 01:37:28 2013	(r42290)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml	Tue Jul 16 02:50:48 2013	(r42291)
@@ -19,13 +19,19 @@
 
 <hr/>
 
-<p>If you are installing FreeBSD from CD-ROM or an ftp site, the
+<p>The &os; installer programs allow the Ports Collection to be
+  installed at the same time as the operating system.  See
+  <a href="&base;/cgi/man.cgi?query=bsdinstall"><tt>bsdinstall</tt></a>
+  for &os;&nbsp;9.X and later versions, or
   <a href="&base;/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysinstall"><tt>sysinstall</tt></a>
-  application will allow you to install the Ports Collection directly.</p>
+  for &os;&nbsp;8.X and earlier versions.</p>
 
-<p>However, if you are not installing using that method, you may
-  <a href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ports/ports.tar.gz">
-  download the gzipped tarball</a> for the entire ports hierarchy.  The
+<p>If the Ports Collection is not initially installed, it can be added with
+  <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-portsnap.html"><tt>portsnap</tt></a>
+  or <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/svn.html">Subversion</a>.</p>
+
+<p>A <a href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ports/ports.tar.gz">gzipped
+  tarball of the Ports Collection</a> can also be downloaded.  The current
   size of the file is &ports.size;.</p>
 
 </body>

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Author: gjb
Date: Tue Jul 16 02:57:38 2013
New Revision: 42292
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42292

Log:
  Fix a typo: s/useable/usable/
  
  Submitted by:	Kenta Suzumoto (via private email)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-05-devsummit.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-05-devsummit.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-05-devsummit.xml	Tue Jul 16 02:50:48 2013	(r42291)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-05-devsummit.xml	Tue Jul 16 02:57:38 2013	(r42292)
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Report//EN"
 	soon.</p>
 
       <p>Bryan Drewery presented a short talk on the status of
-	Poudriere, the new package builder.  This is useable for building
+	Poudriere, the new package builder.  This is usable for building
 	package sets for local deployment and for the official &os;
 	packages.  When the original package building infrastructure was
 	designed, it took most of a day to build a large port like

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Author: wblock
Date: Tue Jul 16 04:34:39 2013
New Revision: 42293
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42293

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml	Tue Jul 16 02:57:38 2013	(r42292)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ports/installing.xml	Tue Jul 16 04:34:39 2013	(r42293)
@@ -10,7 +10,8 @@
 <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"><head>
       <title>&title;</title>
 
-      <cvs:keyword xmlns:cvs="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/CVS">$FreeBSD$</cvs:keyword>
+      <cvs:keyword
+	xmlns:cvs="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/CVS">$FreeBSD$</cvs:keyword>
     </head>
 
     <body class="navinclude.ports">
@@ -20,19 +21,22 @@
 <hr/>
 
 <p>The &os; installer programs allow the Ports Collection to be
-  installed at the same time as the operating system.  See
-  <a href="&base;/cgi/man.cgi?query=bsdinstall"><tt>bsdinstall</tt></a>
-  for &os;&nbsp;9.X and later versions, or
-  <a href="&base;/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysinstall"><tt>sysinstall</tt></a>
+  installed at the same time as the operating system.  See <a
+    href="&base;/cgi/man.cgi?query=bsdinstall"><tt>bsdinstall</tt></a>
+  for &os;&nbsp;9.X and later versions, or <a
+    href="&base;/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysinstall"><tt>sysinstall</tt></a>
   for &os;&nbsp;8.X and earlier versions.</p>
 
-<p>If the Ports Collection is not initially installed, it can be added with
-  <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-portsnap.html"><tt>portsnap</tt></a>
-  or <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/svn.html">Subversion</a>.</p>
-
-<p>A <a href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ports/ports.tar.gz">gzipped
-  tarball of the Ports Collection</a> can also be downloaded.  The current
-  size of the file is &ports.size;.</p>
+<p>If the Ports Collection is not initially installed, it can be added
+  with <a
+    href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-portsnap.html"><tt>portsnap</tt></a>
+  or <a
+    href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/svn.html">Subversion</a>.</p>
+
+<p>A <a
+    href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ports/ports.tar.gz">gzipped
+  tarball of the Ports Collection</a> can also be downloaded.  The
+  current size of the file is &ports.size;.</p>
 
 </body>
 </html>

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Author: jgh (ports committer)
Date: Tue Jul 16 06:33:49 2013
New Revision: 42294
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42294

Log:
  - add Gavin McDonald for security/orthrus
  
  PR:		180571

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml
==============================================================================
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+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml	Tue Jul 16 06:33:49 2013	(r42294)
@@ -3407,6 +3407,11 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>Gavin McDonald
+	<email>gavin@16degrees.com.au</email></para>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>Gavin Mu
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Em 15-07-2013 22:59, Eitan Adler escreveu:
> Author: eadler
> Date: Mon Jul 15 20:59:25 2013
> New Revision: 42287
> URL:http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42287
>
> Log:
>    Use a better spanish translation for "Host Controller Interface"
>    
>    Submitted by:	Luis Manuel Sцёnchez<luissanchez.ee@gmail.com>
>
> Modified:
>    head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 15 18:35:24 2013	(r42286)
> +++ head/es_ES.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 15 20:59:25 2013	(r42287)
> @@ -1384,7 +1384,7 @@ Number of SCO packets: 8</screen>
>       </sect2>
>   
>       <sect2>
> -      <title>Interfaz de la controladora de la mО©╫quina (HCI)</title>
> +      <title>Intefase Maquina-controlador</title>
>   
>         <indexterm><primary>HCI</primary></indexterm>
Since when are you authorized to commit to the Spanish translation? This 
commit contains a serious ortography error and there's a missing accent. 
The use of uppercase letter is not consistent either. Please revert.

Gabor

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Author: ryusuke
Date: Tue Jul 16 08:38:32 2013
New Revision: 42295
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42295

Log:
  - Merge the following from the English version:
  
  	r42240 -> r42290	head/ja_JP.eucJP/share/xml/news.xml

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/share/xml/news.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/share/xml/news.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/share/xml/news.xml	Tue Jul 16 06:33:49 2013	(r42294)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/share/xml/news.xml	Tue Jul 16 08:38:32 2013	(r42295)
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
      the contents of <title> will be preferred over <p>.
 
      $FreeBSD$
-     Original revision: r42240
+     Original revision: r42290
 -->
 <news>
     <cvs:keyword xmlns:cvs="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/CVS">
@@ -34,6 +34,19 @@
       <name>7</name>
 
       <day>
+	<name>16</name>
+
+	<event>
+	  <title>Ё╚х╞©йд╫╔Л╔щ║╪╔х (2013 г╞ 4 ╥Н - 6 ╥Н) ╦ЬЁ╚</title>
+
+	    <p><a
+		href="&enbase;/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.html">2013
+	      г╞ 4 ╥Н ╓╚╓И 6 ╥Н╓нЁ╚х╞©йд╫╔Л╔щ║╪╔х</a> (33 ╔╗╔С╔х╔Й)
+	      ╓╛╦ЬЁ╚╓╣╓Л╓ч╓╥╓©║ё</p>
+	</event>
+      </day>
+
+      <day>
 	<name>4</name>
 	<event>
 	  <p>©╥╔Ё╔ъ╔ц╔©╫╒г╓:

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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 12:47:07 2013
New Revision: 42296
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42296

Log:
  Removbe outdated or unresponsive Ukranian mirrors

Modified:
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Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 08:38:32 2013	(r42295)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 12:47:07 2013	(r42296)
@@ -1898,26 +1898,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-ua">
     <country>Ukraine</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.ua.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.ua.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.ua.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.ua.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www5.ua.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www5.ua.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www4.ua.FreeBSD.org</name>
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-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.ua.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ua.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1925,31 +1905,10 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.ua.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.ua.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
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-    <host type="ftp">
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       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp7.ua.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
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16/07/13 08:49(e)an, Gabor Kovesdan(e)k idatzi zuen:

(...)

Hi,

> Since when are you authorized to commit to the Spanish translation? This
> commit contains a serious ortography error and there's a missing accent.
> The use of uppercase letter is not consistent either. Please revert.
>
> Gabor
>

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Author: flo (ports committer)
Date: Tue Jul 16 17:50:10 2013
New Revision: 42297
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42297

Log:
  Add freebsd-pkg-fallout list.
  
  Approved by:	gjb

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/xml/mailing-lists.ent

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml	Tue Jul 16 12:47:07 2013	(r42296)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.xml	Tue Jul 16 17:50:10 2013	(r42297)
@@ -450,6 +450,11 @@
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
+	      <entry>&a.pkg-fallout.name;</entry>
+	      <entry>Fallout logs from package building</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
 	      <entry>&a.platforms.name;</entry>
 	      <entry>Concerning ports to non &intel; architecture
 		platforms</entry>
@@ -1620,6 +1625,18 @@
 	</varlistentry>
 
 	<varlistentry>
+	  <term>&a.pkg-fallout.name;</term>
+
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para><emphasis>Fallout logs from package building</emphasis></para>
+
+	    <para>All packages building failures logs from the package building
+	    clusters</para>
+
+	  </listitem>
+	</varlistentry>
+
+	<varlistentry>
 	  <term>&a.platforms.name;</term>
 
 	  <listitem>

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/xml/mailing-lists.ent
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/xml/mailing-lists.ent	Tue Jul 16 12:47:07 2013	(r42296)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/xml/mailing-lists.ent	Tue Jul 16 17:50:10 2013	(r42297)
@@ -337,6 +337,10 @@
 <!ENTITY a.pkg "<ulink url='&a.pkg.url;'>Binary package management and package tools discussion</ulink>">
 <!ENTITY a.pkg.name "<ulink url='&a.pkg.url;'>freebsd-pkg</ulink>">
 
+<!ENTITY a.pkg-fallout.url "&a.mailman.listinfo;/freebsd-pkg-fallout">
+<!ENTITY a.pkg-fallout "<ulink url='&a.pkg-fallout.url;'>Fallout logs from package building</ulink>">
+<!ENTITY a.pkg-fallout.name "<ulink url='&a.pkg-fallout.url;'>freebsd-pkg-fallout</ulink>">
+
 <!ENTITY a.platforms.url "&a.mailman.listinfo;/freebsd-platforms">
 <!ENTITY a.platforms "<ulink url='&a.platforms.url;'>FreeBSD non-Intel platforms porting mailing list</ulink>">
 <!ENTITY a.platforms.name "<ulink url='&a.platforms.url;'>freebsd-platforms</ulink>">

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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 19:57:14 2013
New Revision: 42298
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42298

Log:
  Nothing resolves under ro.FreeBSD.org any more, due to a lack of
  nameservers.  Remove from the mirror list.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 17:50:10 2013	(r42297)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 19:57:14 2013	(r42298)
@@ -1245,60 +1245,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@pt.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-ro">
-    <country>Romania</country>
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-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www3.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www3.ro.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ro.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp1.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp1.ro.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="ftpv6"></url>
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-      <url proto="httpv6">http://ftp1.ro.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup1.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup3.ro.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <email>hostmaster@ro.FreeBSD.org</email>
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-ru">
     <country>Russia</country>
     <host type="www">

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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 20:00:08 2013
New Revision: 42299
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42299

Log:
  Nothing exists under kw.FreeBSD.org any more due to a lack of nameservers.
  Remove from the documentation.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 19:57:14 2013	(r42298)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 20:00:08 2013	(r42299)
@@ -990,19 +990,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@kr.FreeBSD.org</email>
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-  <entry id="mirrors-kw">
-    <country>Kuwait</country>
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-  </entry>
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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 21:06:18 2013
New Revision: 42300
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42300

Log:
  Remove mirrors that no longer respond.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 20:00:08 2013	(r42299)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:06:18 2013	(r42300)
@@ -277,11 +277,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www2.br.FreeBSD.org/www.freebsd.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www3.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www3.br.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -310,16 +305,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://ftp5.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp6.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp6.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp7.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp7.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
@@ -332,14 +317,6 @@
       <name>cvsup3.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup4.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup5.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@br.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -370,10 +347,6 @@
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.ca.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup1.ca.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@ca.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -400,20 +373,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@cn.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-cr">
-    <country>Costa Rica</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www1.cr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www1.cr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup1.cr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <email>hostmaster@cr.FreeBSD.org</email>
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-cz">
     <country>Czech Republic</country>
     <host type="www">
@@ -734,10 +693,6 @@
       <name>cvsup.gr.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.gr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@gr.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -782,11 +737,6 @@
       <name>www.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www.ie.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.ie.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
 -->
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
@@ -997,30 +947,16 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www.lv.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.lv.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.lv.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp.lv.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.lv.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@lv.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -1118,11 +1054,6 @@
       <url proto="rsync"></url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp3.no.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.no.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup.no.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
@@ -1130,19 +1061,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@no.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-ph">
-    <country>Philippines</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.FreeBSD.org.ph</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.FreeBSD.org.ph/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup1.ph.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-pl">
     <country>Poland</country>
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -1170,10 +1088,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.pl.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup3.pl.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1183,11 +1097,6 @@
   <entry id="mirrors-pt">
     <country>Portugal</country>
     <host type="www">
-      <name>www.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
       <name>www1.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www1.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
@@ -1244,21 +1153,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www2.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www3.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www3.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www4.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www4.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www5.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www5.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ru.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1300,10 +1194,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup3.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1319,26 +1209,9 @@
       <name>cvsup6.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup7.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@ru.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-sm">
-    <country>San Marino</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.sm.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.sm.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.sm.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-sa">
     <country>Saudi Arabia</country>
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -1388,29 +1261,15 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www.si.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.si.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.si.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.si.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@si.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -1740,10 +1599,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup7.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup8.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1774,20 +1629,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@tw.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-th">
-    <country>Thailand</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.th.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.th.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.th.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <email>hostmaster@th.FreeBSD.org</email>
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-tr">
     <country>Turkey</country>
     <host type="www">
@@ -1891,11 +1732,6 @@
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp5.uk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp6.uk.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp6.uk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@uk.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -1906,16 +1742,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www2.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-<!--
-	www4.us.freebsd.org is a CNAME to freebsd.n.flirble.org
-	which currently has no records
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www4.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www4.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-      <url proto="httpv6">http://www4.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
--->
-
     <host type="www">
       <name>www5.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www5.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
@@ -1984,12 +1810,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp12.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp12.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp13.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 21:07:49 2013
New Revision: 42301
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42301

Log:
  www.ie.FreeBSD.org is back online, and up-to-date.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:06:18 2013	(r42300)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:07:49 2013	(r42301)
@@ -732,12 +732,11 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-ie">
     <country>Ireland</country>
-<!--
     <host type="www">
       <name>www.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www.ie.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
--->
+
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ie.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>

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On Tue, 16 Jul 2013, Gavin Atkinson wrote:

> Author: gavin
> Date: Tue Jul 16 21:06:18 2013
> New Revision: 42300
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42300
> 
> Log:
>   Remove mirrors that no longer respond.

This should have read "no longer resolve".

Gavin


> Modified:
>   head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
> 
> Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 20:00:08 2013	(r42299)
> +++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:06:18 2013	(r42300)
> @@ -277,11 +277,6 @@
>        <url proto="http">http://www2.br.FreeBSD.org/www.freebsd.org/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www3.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www3.br.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="ftp">
>        <name>ftp.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> @@ -310,16 +305,6 @@
>        <url proto="http">http://ftp5.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp6.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp6.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp7.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp7.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
> @@ -332,14 +317,6 @@
>        <name>cvsup3.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup4.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup5.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@br.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> @@ -370,10 +347,6 @@
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.ca.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup1.ca.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@ca.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> @@ -400,20 +373,6 @@
>      <email>hostmaster@cn.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> -  <entry id="mirrors-cr">
> -    <country>Costa Rica</country>
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www1.cr.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www1.cr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup1.cr.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <email>hostmaster@cr.FreeBSD.org</email>
> -  </entry>
> -
>    <entry id="mirrors-cz">
>      <country>Czech Republic</country>
>      <host type="www">
> @@ -734,10 +693,6 @@
>        <name>cvsup.gr.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup2.gr.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@gr.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> @@ -782,11 +737,6 @@
>        <name>www.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="http">http://www.ie.FreeBSD.org/</url>
>      </host>
> -
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www2.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www2.ie.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
>  -->
>      <host type="ftp">
>        <name>ftp.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
> @@ -997,30 +947,16 @@
>        <url proto="http">http://www.lv.FreeBSD.org/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www2.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www2.lv.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup2.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="ftp">
>        <name>ftp.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.lv.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>        <url proto="http">http://ftp.lv.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp2.lv.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.lv.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@lv.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> @@ -1118,11 +1054,6 @@
>        <url proto="rsync"></url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp3.no.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.no.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup.no.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
> @@ -1130,19 +1061,6 @@
>      <email>hostmaster@no.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> -  <entry id="mirrors-ph">
> -    <country>Philippines</country>
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www.FreeBSD.org.ph</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www.FreeBSD.org.ph/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup1.ph.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -  </entry>
> -
>    <entry id="mirrors-pl">
>      <country>Poland</country>
>      <host type="ftp">
> @@ -1170,10 +1088,6 @@
>      </host>
>  
>      <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup2.pl.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup3.pl.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> @@ -1183,11 +1097,6 @@
>    <entry id="mirrors-pt">
>      <country>Portugal</country>
>      <host type="www">
> -      <name>www.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="www">
>        <name>www1.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="http">http://www1.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
>      </host>
> @@ -1244,21 +1153,6 @@
>        <url proto="http">http://www2.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www3.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www3.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www4.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www4.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www5.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www5.ru.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="ftp">
>        <name>ftp.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ru.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> @@ -1300,10 +1194,6 @@
>      </host>
>  
>      <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup2.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup3.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> @@ -1319,26 +1209,9 @@
>        <name>cvsup6.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup7.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@ru.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> -  <entry id="mirrors-sm">
> -    <country>San Marino</country>
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www.sm.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www.sm.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup.sm.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -  </entry>
> -
>    <entry id="mirrors-sa">
>      <country>Saudi Arabia</country>
>      <host type="ftp">
> @@ -1388,29 +1261,15 @@
>        <url proto="http">http://www.si.FreeBSD.org/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www2.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www2.si.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="ftp">
>        <name>ftp.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.si.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp2.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.si.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup2.si.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@si.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> @@ -1740,10 +1599,6 @@
>      </host>
>  
>      <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup7.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
>        <name>cvsup8.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
>      </host>
>  
> @@ -1774,20 +1629,6 @@
>      <email>hostmaster@tw.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> -  <entry id="mirrors-th">
> -    <country>Thailand</country>
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www.th.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www.th.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="cvsup">
> -      <name>cvsup.th.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <email>hostmaster@th.FreeBSD.org</email>
> -  </entry>
> -
>    <entry id="mirrors-tr">
>      <country>Turkey</country>
>      <host type="www">
> @@ -1891,11 +1732,6 @@
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp5.uk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -    <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp6.uk.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp6.uk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -    </host>
> -
>      <email>hostmaster@uk.FreeBSD.org</email>
>    </entry>
>  
> @@ -1906,16 +1742,6 @@
>        <url proto="http">http://www2.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
>      </host>
>  
> -<!--
> -	www4.us.freebsd.org is a CNAME to freebsd.n.flirble.org
> -	which currently has no records
> -    <host type="www">
> -      <name>www4.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="http">http://www4.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -      <url proto="httpv6">http://www4.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> -    </host>
> --->
> -
>      <host type="www">
>        <name>www5.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="http">http://www5.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
> @@ -1984,12 +1810,6 @@
>      </host>
>  
>      <host type="ftp">
> -      <name>ftp12.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
> -      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp12.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> -      <url proto="rsync"></url>
> -    </host>
> -
> -    <host type="ftp">
>        <name>ftp13.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
>        <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp13.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
>        <url proto="http">http://ftp13.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
> 

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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 21:14:08 2013
New Revision: 42302
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42302

Log:
  Drop an Italian mirror that no longer exists.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:07:49 2013	(r42301)
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Date: Tue Jul 16 21:41:32 2013
New Revision: 42303
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42303

Log:
  Remove www mirrors that do not respond.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:14:08 2013	(r42302)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:41:32 2013	(r42303)
@@ -266,17 +266,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-br">
     <country>Brazil</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.br.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-      <url proto="httpv6">http://www.br.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.br.FreeBSD.org/www.freebsd.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -433,11 +422,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-ee">
     <country>Estonia</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.ee.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.ee.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.ee.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ee.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -457,11 +441,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www.fi.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.fi.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.fi.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.fi.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.fi.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -481,11 +460,6 @@
   <entry id="mirrors-fr">
     <country>France</country>
     <host type="www">
-      <name>www.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.fr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
       <name>www1.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www1.fr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
@@ -784,11 +758,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-it">
     <country>Italy</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.it.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.it.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.it.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.it.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -803,11 +772,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-kg">
     <country>Kyrgyzstan</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.kg.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.kg.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup.kg.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
@@ -1090,21 +1054,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-pt">
     <country>Portugal</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www1.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www1.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www4.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www4.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www5.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www5.pt.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.pt.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1322,11 +1271,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www2.es.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www3.es.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www3.es.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.es.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.es.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1631,11 +1575,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.tr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
       <name>www3.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www3.tr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
       <url proto="httpv6">http://www3.tr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
@@ -1731,10 +1670,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-us">
     <country>USA</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.us.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
 
     <host type="www">
       <name>www5.us.FreeBSD.org</name>

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On 2013.07.16. 23:06, Gavin Atkinson wrote:
> Author: gavin
> Date: Tue Jul 16 21:06:18 2013
> New Revision: 42300
> URL:http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42300
>
> Log:
>    Remove mirrors that no longer respond.
What if some of these are temporary problems? Have you checked them 
several times or just now?

Gabor

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Author: gavin
Date: Tue Jul 16 21:44:21 2013
New Revision: 42304
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42304

Log:
  Remove web mirrors that are no longer mirrors of www.freebsd.org:
  
  http://freebsd.unixtech.be/ - Very outdated (2010)
  http://www.cn.FreeBSD.org/ - Blank page
  http://www.gr.FreeBSD.org/ - Just a frame that includes www.freebsd.org
  http://www.kr.FreeBSD.org/ - No longer a mirror site
  http://www2.kr.FreeBSD.org/ - Advertising
  http://www2.nl.FreeBSD.org/ - No longer a www mirror site
  http://www3.tw.FreeBSD.org/ - No longer a mirror site
  http://www6.tw.FreeBSD.org/ - No longer a mirror site
  http://www7.tw.FreeBSD.org/ - Outdated (2012)
  http://www3.tr.FreeBSD.org/ - nginx welcome page

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:41:32 2013	(r42303)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:44:21 2013	(r42304)
@@ -255,15 +255,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@at.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-be">
-    <country>Belgium</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>freebsd.unixtech.be</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://freebsd.unixtech.be/</url>
-    </host>
-
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-br">
     <country>Brazil</country>
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -341,11 +332,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-cn">
     <country>China</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.cn.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.cn.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.cn.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.cn.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -648,11 +634,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-gr">
     <country>Greece</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.gr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.gr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.gr.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.gr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -861,16 +842,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-kr">
     <country>Korea</country>
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www.kr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www.kr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.kr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.kr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.kr.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.kr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -953,11 +924,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www.nl.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www2.nl.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www2.nl.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.nl.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.nl.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1405,11 +1371,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="www">
-      <name>www3.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www3.tw.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
       <name>www4.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="http">http://www4.tw.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
@@ -1420,16 +1381,6 @@
       <url proto="httpv6">http://www5.tw.FreeBSD.org/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="www">
-      <name>www6.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://www6.tw.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="www">
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-      <url proto="http">http://www7.tw.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
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       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.tw.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1574,12 +1525,6 @@
       <url proto="http">http://www.tr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
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-      <url proto="httpv6">http://www3.tr.FreeBSD.org/</url>
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-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
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On Tue, 16 Jul 2013, Gabor Kovesdan wrote:

> On 2013.07.16. 23:06, Gavin Atkinson wrote:
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> > Log:
> >    Remove mirrors that no longer respond.
> What if some of these are temporary problems? Have you checked them several
> times or just now?

I mentioned in a followup commit, buit all of these actually don't 
resolve.  Some are CNAMEs that point to non-existant hosts, others are 
within domains that are no longer delegated.  I think it's unlikely that 
any of these will come back - "not resolving" is a bit more permanant than 
"not responding".

Gavin

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> Log:
>   Remove www mirrors that do not respond.

For these sites, all have been verified as having not responded since 
April, through the logs available at 
http://www.mavetju.org/unix/freebsd-mirrors/

Gavin

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Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jul 17 00:02:19 2013
New Revision: 42305
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42305

Log:
  Update the Tools chapter.  Simplify, remove irrelevant and outdated
  information.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml	Tue Jul 16 21:44:21 2013	(r42304)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml	Wed Jul 17 00:02:19 2013	(r42305)
@@ -34,132 +34,51 @@
 <chapter id="tools">
   <title>Tools</title>
 
-  <para>The FDP uses a number of different software tools to help
-    manage the FreeBSD documentation, convert it to different output
-    formats, and so on.  You will need to use these tools yourself if
-    you are to work with the FreeBSD documentation.</para>
-
-  <para>All these tools are available as FreeBSD Ports and Packages,
-    greatly simplifying the work you have to do to install
-    them.</para>
-
-  <para>You will need to install these tools before you work through
-    any of the examples in later chapters.  The actual usage of these
-    tools is covered in later chapters.</para>
-
-  <tip>
-    <title>Use <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename> If
-      Possible</title>
-
-    <para>You can save yourself a lot of time if you install the
-      <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename> port.  This
-      is a <emphasis>meta-port</emphasis> which does not contain any
-      software itself.  Instead, it depends on various other ports
-      being installed correctly.  Installing this port
-      <emphasis>should</emphasis> automatically download and install
-      all of the packages listed in this chapter that you need.</para>
-
-    <para>One of the packages that you might need is the
-      <application>JadeTeX</application> macro set.  In turn, this
-      macro set requires &tex; to be installed.  &tex; is a large
-      package, and you only need it if you want to produce Postscript
-      or PDF output.</para>
-
-    <para>To save yourself time and space you must specify whether or
-      not you want <application>JadeTeX</application> (and therefore
-      &tex;) installed when you install this port.  Either do:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make JADETEX=yes install</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>or</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make JADETEX=no install</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>as necessary.  Alternatively you may install
-      <filename role="package">textproc/docproj-jadetex</filename> or
-      <filename role="package">textproc/docproj-nojadetex</filename>.
-      These slave ports define the <makevar>JADETEX</makevar> variable
-      for you, therefore they will install the same suite of
-      applications on your machine.  Note that you can produce only
-      XHTML or ASCII text output if you do not install
-      <application>JadeTeX</application>.  PostScript or PDF output
-      requires &tex;.</para>
-  </tip>
-
-  <sect1 id="tools-mandatory">
-    <title>Mandatory Tools</title>
-
-    <sect2>
-      <title>Software</title>
-
-      <para>These programs are required before you can usefully work
-	with the FreeBSD documentation, and they will allow you to
-	convert the documentation to XHTML, plain text, and RTF
-	formats.  They are all included in <filename
-	  role="package">textproc/docproj</filename>.</para>
-
-      <variablelist>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><application>Jade</application>
-	    (<filename role="package">textproc/jade</filename>)</term>
-
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>A DSSSL implementation.  Used for converting marked
-	      up documents to other formats, including HTML and
-	      &tex;.</para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><application>Links</application>
-	    (<filename role="package">www/links</filename>)</term>
-
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>A text-mode WWW browser that can also convert
-	      XHTML files to plain text.</para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><application>peps</application>
-	    (<filename role="package">graphics/peps</filename>)</term>
-
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Some of the documentation includes images, some of
-	      which are stored as EPS files.  These must be converted
-	      to PNG before most web browsers will display
-	      them.</para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-      </variablelist>
-    </sect2>
+  <para>Several software tools are used to
+    manage the FreeBSD documentation and render it to different output
+    formats.  Some of these tools are required and must be installed
+    before working through the examples in the following chapters.
+    Some are optional, adding capabilities or making the job of
+    creating documentation less demanding.</para>
+
+  <sect1 id="tools-required">
+    <title>Required Tools</title>
+
+    <para>Install
+      <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename> from the
+      Ports Collection.  This <emphasis>meta-port</emphasis> installs
+      all the applications required to do useful work with the &os;
+      documentation.  Some further notes on particular components are
+      given below.</para>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>DTDs and Entities</title>
+      <title><acronym>DTD</acronym>s and <acronym>Entities</acronym></title>
 
-      <para>These are the DTDs and entity sets used by the FDP.  They
-	need to be installed before you can work with any of the
-	documentation.</para>
+      <para>&os; documentation uses several Document Type Definitions
+	(<acronym>DTD</acronym>s) and sets of <acronym>XML</acronym>
+	entities.  These are all installed by the
+	<filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename>
+	port.</para>
 
       <variablelist>
 	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>XHTML DTD (<filename
+	  <term><acronym>XHTML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym> (<filename
 	      role="package">textproc/xhtml</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>XHTML is the markup language of choice for the World
-	      Wide Web, and is used throughout the FreeBSD web
+	    <para><acronym>XHTML</acronym> is the markup language of choice for the World
+	      Wide Web, and is used throughout the &os; web
 	      site.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 
 	<varlistentry>
-	  <term>DocBook DTD (<filename
+	  <term>DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym> (<filename
 	      role="package">textproc/docbook-xml-450</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>DocBook is designed for marking up technical
-	      documentation.  All the FreeBSD documentation is written
+	      documentation.  Most of the &os; documentation is written
 	      in DocBook.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
@@ -170,8 +89,8 @@
 	      role="package">textproc/iso8879</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>19 of the ISO 8879:1986 character entity sets used
-	      by many DTDs.  Includes named mathematical symbols,
+	    <para>Character entities from the ISO 8879:1986 standard used
+	      by many <acronym>DTD</acronym>s.  Includes named mathematical symbols,
 	      additional characters in the Latin character set
 	      (accents, diacriticals, and so on), and Greek
 	      symbols.</para>
@@ -184,10 +103,8 @@
   <sect1 id="tools-optional">
     <title>Optional Tools</title>
 
-    <para>You do not need to have any of the following installed.
-      However, you may find it easier to work with the documentation
-      if you do, and they may give you more flexibility in the output
-      formats that can be generated.</para>
+    <para>These applications are not required, but can make working on
+      the documentation easier or add capabilities.</para>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Software</title>
@@ -205,23 +122,24 @@
 	      <application>teTeX</application> and Modular DocBook Stylesheets are used to convert
 	      DocBook documents to DVI, Postscript, and PDF formats.
 	      The <application>JadeTeX</application> macros are needed
-	      in order to do this.</para>
+	      to do this.</para>
 
-	    <para>If you do not intend to convert your documentation
-	      to one of these formats (i.e., HTML and plain text
-	      are sufficient) then you do not need to install
-	      these.</para>
-
-	    <important>
-	      <para>If you decide to install
-		<application>JadeTeX</application> and
-		<application>teTeX</application> then you will need to
-		configure <application>teTeX</application> after
-		<application>JadeTeX</application> has been installed.
-		<filename>print/jadetex/pkg-message</filename>
-		contains detailed instructions explaining what you
-		need to do.</para>
-	    </important>
+	    <para>If <acronym>XHTML</acronym> and plain text output
+	      formats are adequate, then this program is not needed
+	      and the option to install it from the
+	      <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename>
+	      configuration screen can be disabled.</para>
+	  </listitem>
+	</varlistentry>
+
+	<varlistentry>
+	  <term><application>Vim</application>
+	  (<filename role="package">editors/vim</filename>)</term>
+
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>A popular editor for working with
+	      <acronym>XML</acronym> and derived documents, like
+	      DocBook <acronym>XML</acronym>.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 
@@ -232,22 +150,14 @@
 	    <filename role="package">editors/xemacs</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Both these editors include a special mode for
-	      editing documents marked up according to an SGML DTD.
+	    <para>Both of these editors include a special mode for
+	      editing documents marked up according to an <acronym>XML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym>.
 	      This mode includes commands to reduce the amount of
-	      typing you need, and help reduce the possibility of
+	      typing needed, and help reduce the possibility of
 	      errors.</para>
-
-	    <para>You do not need to use them; any text editor can be
-	      used to edit marked up documents.  You may find they
-	      make you more efficient.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
       </variablelist>
-
-      <para>If anyone has recommendations for other software that is
-	useful when manipulating XML documents, please let &a.doceng;
-	know, so they can be added to this list.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>

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Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jul 17 00:10:00 2013
New Revision: 42306
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42306

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml	Wed Jul 17 00:02:19 2013	(r42305)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.xml	Wed Jul 17 00:10:00 2013	(r42306)
@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@
 <chapter id="tools">
   <title>Tools</title>
 
-  <para>Several software tools are used to
-    manage the FreeBSD documentation and render it to different output
-    formats.  Some of these tools are required and must be installed
-    before working through the examples in the following chapters.
-    Some are optional, adding capabilities or making the job of
-    creating documentation less demanding.</para>
+  <para>Several software tools are used to manage the FreeBSD
+    documentation and render it to different output formats.  Some of
+    these tools are required and must be installed before working
+    through the examples in the following chapters.  Some are
+    optional, adding capabilities or making the job of creating
+    documentation less demanding.</para>
 
   <sect1 id="tools-required">
     <title>Required Tools</title>
@@ -52,7 +52,8 @@
       given below.</para>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title><acronym>DTD</acronym>s and <acronym>Entities</acronym></title>
+      <title><acronym>DTD</acronym>s and
+	<acronym>Entities</acronym></title>
 
       <para>&os; documentation uses several Document Type Definitions
 	(<acronym>DTD</acronym>s) and sets of <acronym>XML</acronym>
@@ -62,13 +63,14 @@
 
       <variablelist>
 	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><acronym>XHTML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym> (<filename
+	  <term><acronym>XHTML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym>
+	    (<filename
 	      role="package">textproc/xhtml</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para><acronym>XHTML</acronym> is the markup language of choice for the World
-	      Wide Web, and is used throughout the &os; web
-	      site.</para>
+	    <para><acronym>XHTML</acronym> is the markup language of
+	      choice for the World Wide Web, and is used throughout
+	      the &os; web site.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 
@@ -78,8 +80,8 @@
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>DocBook is designed for marking up technical
-	      documentation.  Most of the &os; documentation is written
-	      in DocBook.</para>
+	      documentation.  Most of the &os; documentation is
+	      written in DocBook.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 
@@ -89,11 +91,11 @@
 	      role="package">textproc/iso8879</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Character entities from the ISO 8879:1986 standard used
-	      by many <acronym>DTD</acronym>s.  Includes named mathematical symbols,
-	      additional characters in the Latin character set
-	      (accents, diacriticals, and so on), and Greek
-	      symbols.</para>
+	    <para>Character entities from the ISO 8879:1986 standard
+	      used by many <acronym>DTD</acronym>s.  Includes named
+	      mathematical symbols, additional characters in the Latin
+	      character set (accents, diacriticals, and so on), and
+	      Greek symbols.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
       </variablelist>
@@ -112,17 +114,20 @@
       <variablelist>
 	<varlistentry>
 	  <term><application>JadeTeX</application>,
-	    <application>teTeX</application> and Modular DocBook Stylesheets
+	    <application>teTeX</application> and Modular DocBook
+	    Stylesheets
 	    (<filename role="package">print/jadetex</filename>,
 	    <filename role="package">print/teTeX</filename> and
-	    <filename role="package">textproc/dsssl-docbook-modular</filename>)</term>
+	    <filename
+	      role="package">textproc/dsssl-docbook-modular</filename>)</term>
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para><application>Jade</application>,
-	      <application>teTeX</application> and Modular DocBook Stylesheets are used to convert
-	      DocBook documents to DVI, Postscript, and PDF formats.
-	      The <application>JadeTeX</application> macros are needed
-	      to do this.</para>
+	      <application>teTeX</application> and Modular DocBook
+	      Stylesheets are used to convert DocBook documents to
+	      DVI, Postscript, and PDF formats.  The
+	      <application>JadeTeX</application> macros are needed to
+	      do this.</para>
 
 	    <para>If <acronym>XHTML</acronym> and plain text output
 	      formats are adequate, then this program is not needed
@@ -151,9 +156,10 @@
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Both of these editors include a special mode for
-	      editing documents marked up according to an <acronym>XML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym>.
-	      This mode includes commands to reduce the amount of
-	      typing needed, and help reduce the possibility of
+	      editing documents marked up according to an
+	      <acronym>XML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym>.  This
+	      mode includes commands to reduce the amount of typing
+	      needed, and help reduce the possibility of
 	      errors.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>

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Author: eadler
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New Revision: 42307
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42307

Log:
  Revert r42287:
  	It contains typographical errors.

Modified:
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@@ -1384,7 +1384,7 @@ Number of SCO packets: 8</screen>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Intefase Maquina-controlador</title>
+      <title>Interfaz de la controladora de la mАquina (HCI)</title>
 
       <indexterm><primary>HCI</primary></indexterm>
 

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On Tue, Jul 16, 2013 at 7:21 PM, J. Vicente Carrasco -Bixen-
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> ... Please revert.


I am amazed that no one commented on this patch since June 2 (or June
24 in diff form) and after the commit is the first time anyone
mentions the problems.

Reverted.


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On 2013.07.17. 23:57, Eitan Adler wrote:
> On Tue, Jul 16, 2013 at 7:21 PM, J. Vicente Carrasco -Bixen-
> <carvay@tikismikis.org>  wrote:
>> >... Please revert.
> I am amazed that no one commented on this patch since June 2 (or June
> 24 in diff form) and after the commit is the first time anyone
> mentions the problems.
Probably it was not sent to the proper place?

Gabor

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Author: gjb
Date: Wed Jul 17 23:27:59 2013
New Revision: 42308
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42308

Log:
  Update ports count.
  
  Submitted by:	Kenta Suzumoto (via private mail)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/myths.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/myths.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/myths.xml	Wed Jul 17 21:57:47 2013	(r42307)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/myths.xml	Wed Jul 17 23:27:59 2013	(r42308)
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@
     <p>In addition, each *BSD project uses a ``ports'' system to make the
       building of ported software much easier.</p>
 
-    <p><b>FreeBSD:</b> There are currently more than 16,000
+    <p><b>FreeBSD:</b> There are currently more than 24,000
       applications ready to download and install in the FreeBSD ports
       collection. On i386 and AMD64, the Linux emulation layer will
       also run the vast majority of Linux applications. On the AMD64 and Itanium

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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013
New Revision: 42309
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42309

Log:
  Edit, update, and simplify the structure chapter.
  
  Reviewed by:	bps and Allan Jude on IRC

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Wed Jul 17 23:27:59 2013	(r42308)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013	(r42309)
@@ -32,12 +32,10 @@
 -->
 
 <chapter id="structure">
-  <title>Structuring Documents Under <filename>doc/</filename></title>
+  <title>Documentation Directory Structure</title>
 
-  <para>The <filename>doc/</filename> tree is organized in a
-    particular fashion, and the documents that are part of the FDP are
-    in turn organized in a particular fashion.  The aim is to make it
-    simple to add new documentation into the tree and:</para>
+  <para>Files and directories in the <filename class="directory">doc/</filename> tree follow a structure
+    meant to:</para>
 
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -58,50 +56,57 @@
   </orderedlist>
 
   <para>In addition, the documentation tree has to accommodate
-    documentation that could be in many different languages and in
-    many different encodings.  It is important that the structure of
-    the documentation tree does not enforce any particular defaults or
+    documents in many different languages and
+    encodings.  It is important that
+    the documentation tree structure does not enforce any particular defaults or
     cultural preferences.</para>
 
   <sect1 id="structure-top">
-    <title>The Top Level, <filename>doc/</filename></title>
+    <title>The Top Level, <filename class="directory">doc/</filename></title>
 
     <para>There are two types of directory under
-      <filename>doc/</filename>, each with very specific directory
+      <filename class="directory">doc/</filename>, each with very specific directory
       names and meanings.</para>
 
-    <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Directory</segtitle>
+    <informaltable pgwide="1" frame="none">
+      <tgroup cols="2">
+	<thead>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>Directory</entry>
+	    <entry>Usage</entry>
+	  </row>
+	</thead>
+
+	<tbody>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory">share</filename></entry>
 
-      <segtitle>Meaning</segtitle>
-
-      <seglistitem>
-	<seg><filename>share/</filename></seg>
-
-	<seg>Contains files that are not specific to the various
+	    <entry>Contains files that are not specific to the various
 	  translations and encodings of the documentation.  Contains
 	  subdirectories to further categorize the information.  For
 	  example, the files that comprise the &man.make.1;
-	  infrastructure are in <filename>share/mk</filename>, while
-	  the additional XML support files (such as the FreeBSD
-	  extended DocBook DTD) are in
-	  <filename>share/xml</filename>.</seg>
-      </seglistitem>
+	  infrastructure are in <filename class="directory">share/mk</filename>, while
+	  the additional <acronym>XML</acronym> support files (such as the &os;
+	  extended DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym>) are in
+	  <filename class="directory">share/xml</filename>.</entry>
+	  </row>
 
-      <seglistitem>
-	<seg><filename><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable>/</filename></seg>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename></entry>
 
-	<seg>One directory exists for each available translation and
+	    <entry>One directory exists for each available translation and
 	  encoding of the documentation, for example
-	  <filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/</filename> and
-	  <filename>zh_TW.Big5/</filename>.  The names are long, but
+	  <filename class="directory">en_US.ISO8859-1/</filename> and
+	  <filename class="directory">zh_TW.Big5/</filename>.  The names are long, but
 	  by fully specifying the language and encoding we prevent any
-	  future headaches should a translation team want to provide
-	  the documentation in the same language but in more than one
-	  encoding.  This also completely isolates us from any
-	  problems that might be caused by a switch to Unicode.</seg>
-      </seglistitem>
-    </segmentedlist>
+	  future headaches when a translation team wants to provide
+	  documentation in the same language but in more than one
+	  encoding.  This also avoids
+	  problems that might be caused by a future switch to Unicode.</entry>
+	  </row>
+	</tbody>
+      </tgroup>
+    </informaltable>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="structure-locale">
@@ -113,51 +118,58 @@
       documentation is split into up to three more categories at
       this level, indicated by the different directory names.</para>
 
-    <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Directory</segtitle>
-
-      <segtitle>Contents</segtitle>
-
-      <seglistitem>
-	<seg><filename>articles</filename></seg>
+    <informaltable pgwide="1" frame="none">
+      <tgroup cols="2">
+	<thead>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry>Directory</entry>
+	    <entry>Usage</entry>
+	  </row>
+	</thead>
+
+	<tbody>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory">articles</filename></entry>
 
-	<seg>Documentation marked up as a DocBook
+	    <entry>Documentation marked up as a DocBook
 	  <sgmltag>article</sgmltag> (or equivalent).  Reasonably
 	  short, and broken up into sections.  Normally only available
-	  as one XHTML file.</seg>
-      </seglistitem>
+	  as one <acronym>XHTML</acronym> file.</entry>
+	  </row>
 
-      <seglistitem>
-	<seg><filename>books</filename></seg>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry valign="top"><filename>books</filename></entry>
 
-	<seg>Documentation marked up as a DocBook
+	    <entry>Documentation marked up as a DocBook
 	  <sgmltag>book</sgmltag> (or equivalent).  Book length, and
 	  broken up into chapters.  Normally available as both one
-	  large XHTML file (for people with fast connections, or who
+	  large <acronym>XHTML</acronym> file (for people with fast connections, or who
 	  want to print it easily from a browser) and as a collection
-	  of linked, smaller files.</seg>
-      </seglistitem>
+	      of linked, smaller files.</entry>
+	  </row>
 
-      <seglistitem>
-	<seg><filename>man</filename></seg>
+	  <row>
+	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory">man</filename></entry>
 
-	<seg>For translations of the system manual pages.  This
+	    <entry>For translations of the system manual pages.  This
 	  directory will contain one or more
-	  <filename>man<replaceable>n</replaceable></filename>
+	  <filename class="directory">man<replaceable>n</replaceable></filename>
 	  directories, corresponding to the sections that have been
-	  translated.</seg>
-      </seglistitem>
-    </segmentedlist>
+	      translated.</entry>
+	  </row>
+	</tbody>
+      </tgroup>
+    </informaltable>
 
     <para>Not every
-      <filename><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename>
-      directory will contain all of these directories.  It depends on
+      <filename class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename>
+      directory will contain all of these subdirectories.  It depends on
       how much translation has been accomplished by that translation
       team.</para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="structure-document">
-    <title>Document Specific Information</title>
+    <title>Document-Specific Information</title>
 
     <para>This section contains specific notes about particular
       documents managed by the FDP.</para>
@@ -167,12 +179,12 @@
 
       <subtitle><filename>books/handbook/</filename></subtitle>
 
-      <para>The Handbook is written to comply with the FreeBSD DocBook
+      <para>The Handbook is written in DocBook <acronym>XML</acronym> using the &os; DocBook
 	extended DTD.</para>
 
       <para>The Handbook is organized as a DocBook
-	<sgmltag>book</sgmltag>. It is then divided into
-	<sgmltag>part</sgmltag>s, each of which may contain several
+	<sgmltag>book</sgmltag>.  The book is divided into
+	<sgmltag>part</sgmltag>s, each of which contains several
 	<sgmltag>chapter</sgmltag>s.  <sgmltag>chapter</sgmltag>s are
 	further subdivided into sections (<sgmltag>sect1</sgmltag>)
 	and subsections (<sgmltag>sect2</sgmltag>,
@@ -187,18 +199,18 @@
 	<note>
 	  <para>The Handbook's organization may change over time, and
 	    this document may lag in detailing the organizational
-	    changes.  If you have any questions about how the Handbook
-	    is organized, please contact the &a.doc;.</para>
+	    changes.  Post questions about Handbook
+	    organization to &a.doc;.</para>
 	</note>
 
 	<sect4>
 	  <title><filename>Makefile</filename></title>
 
 	  <para>The <filename>Makefile</filename> defines some
-	    variables that affect how the XML source is converted to
+	    variables that affect how the <acronym>XML</acronym> source is converted to
 	    other formats, and lists the various source files that
 	    make up the Handbook.  It then includes the standard
-	    <filename>doc.project.mk</filename> file, to bring in the
+	    <filename>doc.project.mk</filename>, to bring in the
 	    rest of the code that handles converting documents from
 	    one format to another.</para>
 	</sect4>
@@ -223,7 +235,7 @@
 	</sect4>
 
 	<sect4>
-	  <title><filename><replaceable>directory</replaceable>/chapter.xml</filename></title>
+	  <title><filename class="directory"><replaceable>directory</replaceable>/chapter.xml</filename></title>
 
 	  <para>Each chapter in the Handbook is stored in a file
 	    called <filename>chapter.xml</filename> in a separate
@@ -235,10 +247,9 @@
 	  <para>For example, if one of the chapter files
 	    contains:</para>
 
-	  <programlisting><![CDATA[
-<chapter id="kernelconfig">
+	  <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">chapter id="kernelconfig"</sgmltag>
 ...
-</chapter>]]></programlisting>
+<sgmltag class="endtag">chapter</sgmltag></programlisting>
 
 	  <para>Then it will be called
 	    <filename>chapter.xml</filename> in the
@@ -246,12 +257,12 @@
 	    the entire contents of the chapter will be held in this
 	    file.</para>
 
-	  <para>When the XHTML version of the Handbook is produced,
+	  <para>When the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> version of the Handbook is produced,
 	    this will yield <filename>kernelconfig.html</filename>.
 	    This is because of the <literal>id</literal> value, and is
 	    not related to the name of the directory.</para>
 
-	  <para>In earlier versions of the Handbook the files were
+	  <para>In earlier versions of the Handbook, the files were
 	    stored in the same directory as
 	    <filename>book.xml</filename>, and named after the value
 	    of the <literal>id</literal> attribute on the file's
@@ -259,8 +270,8 @@
 	    to include images in each chapter.  Images for each
 	    Handbook chapter are stored within <filename
 	      class="directory">share/images/books/handbook</filename>.
-	    Note that localized version of these images should be
-	    placed in the same directory as the XML sources for each
+	    Note that the localized version of these images should be
+	    placed in the same directory as the <acronym>XML</acronym> sources for each
 	    chapter.  Namespace collisions would be inevitable, and it
 	    is easier to work with several directories with a few
 	    files in them than it is to work with one directory that
@@ -273,27 +284,19 @@
 	    <filename>printing/chapter.xml</filename>.</para>
 
 	  <important>
-	    <para>Chapters and/or directories should not be named in a
-	      fashion that reflects their ordering within the
-	      Handbook.  This ordering might change as the content
-	      within the Handbook is reorganized; this sort of
-	      reorganization should not (generally) include the need
-	      to rename files (unless entire chapters are being
-	      promoted or demoted within the hierarchy).</para>
+	    <para>Do not name chapters or directories after
+	      their ordering within the
+	      Handbook.  This ordering can change as the content
+	      within the Handbook is reorganized.
+	      Reorganization should be possible without
+	      renaming files, unless entire chapters are being
+	      promoted or demoted within the hierarchy.</para>
 	  </important>
 
-	  <para>Each <filename>chapter.xml</filename> file will not
-	    be a complete XML document.  In particular, they will not
-	    have their own DOCTYPE lines at the start of the
-	    files.</para>
-
-	  <para>This is unfortunate as it makes it impossible to treat
-	    these as generic XML files and simply convert them to
-	    HTML, RTF, PS, and other formats in the same way the main
-	    Handbook is generated.  This <emphasis>would</emphasis>
-	    force you to rebuild the Handbook every time you want to
-	    see the effect a change has had on just one
-	    chapter.</para>
+	  <para>The <filename>chapter.xml</filename> files are not
+	    complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents. They cannot be
+	    individually rendered to output formats, but must be built
+	    as part of the Handbook.</para>
 	</sect4>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>

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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 00:31:45 2013
New Revision: 42310
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42310

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013	(r42309)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:31:45 2013	(r42310)
@@ -34,8 +34,9 @@
 <chapter id="structure">
   <title>Documentation Directory Structure</title>
 
-  <para>Files and directories in the <filename class="directory">doc/</filename> tree follow a structure
-    meant to:</para>
+  <para>Files and directories in the
+    <filename class="directory">doc/</filename> tree follow a
+    structure meant to:</para>
 
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -56,17 +57,17 @@
   </orderedlist>
 
   <para>In addition, the documentation tree has to accommodate
-    documents in many different languages and
-    encodings.  It is important that
-    the documentation tree structure does not enforce any particular defaults or
-    cultural preferences.</para>
+    documents in many different languages and encodings.  It is
+    important that the documentation tree structure does not enforce
+    any particular defaults or cultural preferences.</para>
 
   <sect1 id="structure-top">
-    <title>The Top Level, <filename class="directory">doc/</filename></title>
+    <title>The Top Level,
+      <filename class="directory">doc/</filename></title>
 
     <para>There are two types of directory under
-      <filename class="directory">doc/</filename>, each with very specific directory
-      names and meanings.</para>
+      <filename class="directory">doc/</filename>, each with very
+      specific directory names and meanings.</para>
 
     <informaltable pgwide="1" frame="none">
       <tgroup cols="2">
@@ -79,30 +80,35 @@
 
 	<tbody>
 	  <row>
-	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory">share</filename></entry>
+	    <entry valign="top">
+	      <filename class="directory">share</filename></entry>
 
 	    <entry>Contains files that are not specific to the various
-	  translations and encodings of the documentation.  Contains
-	  subdirectories to further categorize the information.  For
-	  example, the files that comprise the &man.make.1;
-	  infrastructure are in <filename class="directory">share/mk</filename>, while
-	  the additional <acronym>XML</acronym> support files (such as the &os;
-	  extended DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym>) are in
-	  <filename class="directory">share/xml</filename>.</entry>
+	      translations and encodings of the documentation.
+	      Contains subdirectories to further categorize the
+	      information.  For example, the files that comprise the
+	      &man.make.1; infrastructure are in
+	      <filename class="directory">share/mk</filename>, while
+	      the additional <acronym>XML</acronym> support files
+	      (such as the &os; extended DocBook
+	      <acronym>DTD</acronym>) are in <filename
+		class="directory">share/xml</filename>.</entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
-	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename></entry>
+	    <entry valign="top"><filename
+		class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename></entry>
 
-	    <entry>One directory exists for each available translation and
-	  encoding of the documentation, for example
-	  <filename class="directory">en_US.ISO8859-1/</filename> and
-	  <filename class="directory">zh_TW.Big5/</filename>.  The names are long, but
-	  by fully specifying the language and encoding we prevent any
-	  future headaches when a translation team wants to provide
-	  documentation in the same language but in more than one
-	  encoding.  This also avoids
-	  problems that might be caused by a future switch to Unicode.</entry>
+	    <entry>One directory exists for each available translation
+	      and encoding of the documentation, for example
+	      <filename class="directory">en_US.ISO8859-1/</filename>
+	      and <filename class="directory">zh_TW.Big5/</filename>.
+	      The names are long, but by fully specifying the language
+	      and encoding we prevent any future headaches when a
+	      translation team wants to provide documentation in the
+	      same language but in more than one encoding.  This also
+	      avoids problems that might be caused by a future switch
+	      to Unicode.</entry>
 	  </row>
 	</tbody>
       </tgroup>
@@ -129,43 +135,46 @@
 
 	<tbody>
 	  <row>
-	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory">articles</filename></entry>
+	    <entry valign="top">
+	      <filename class="directory">articles</filename></entry>
 
 	    <entry>Documentation marked up as a DocBook
-	  <sgmltag>article</sgmltag> (or equivalent).  Reasonably
-	  short, and broken up into sections.  Normally only available
-	  as one <acronym>XHTML</acronym> file.</entry>
+	      <sgmltag>article</sgmltag> (or equivalent).  Reasonably
+	      short, and broken up into sections.  Normally only
+	      available as one <acronym>XHTML</acronym> file.</entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry valign="top"><filename>books</filename></entry>
 
 	    <entry>Documentation marked up as a DocBook
-	  <sgmltag>book</sgmltag> (or equivalent).  Book length, and
-	  broken up into chapters.  Normally available as both one
-	  large <acronym>XHTML</acronym> file (for people with fast connections, or who
-	  want to print it easily from a browser) and as a collection
-	      of linked, smaller files.</entry>
+	      <sgmltag>book</sgmltag> (or equivalent).  Book length,
+	      and broken up into chapters.  Normally available as both
+	      one large <acronym>XHTML</acronym> file (for people with
+	      fast connections, or who want to print it easily from a
+	      browser) and as a collection of linked, smaller
+	      files.</entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
-	    <entry valign="top"><filename class="directory">man</filename></entry>
+	    <entry valign="top">
+	      <filename class="directory">man</filename></entry>
 
 	    <entry>For translations of the system manual pages.  This
-	  directory will contain one or more
-	  <filename class="directory">man<replaceable>n</replaceable></filename>
-	  directories, corresponding to the sections that have been
-	      translated.</entry>
+	      directory will contain one or more <filename
+		class="directory">man<replaceable>n</replaceable></filename>
+	      directories, corresponding to the sections that have
+	      been translated.</entry>
 	  </row>
 	</tbody>
       </tgroup>
     </informaltable>
 
-    <para>Not every
-      <filename class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename>
-      directory will contain all of these subdirectories.  It depends on
-      how much translation has been accomplished by that translation
-      team.</para>
+    <para>Not every <filename
+	class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename>
+      directory will contain all of these subdirectories.  It depends
+      on how much translation has been accomplished by that
+      translation team.</para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="structure-document">
@@ -179,8 +188,8 @@
 
       <subtitle><filename>books/handbook/</filename></subtitle>
 
-      <para>The Handbook is written in DocBook <acronym>XML</acronym> using the &os; DocBook
-	extended DTD.</para>
+      <para>The Handbook is written in DocBook <acronym>XML</acronym>
+	using the &os; DocBook extended DTD.</para>
 
       <para>The Handbook is organized as a DocBook
 	<sgmltag>book</sgmltag>.  The book is divided into
@@ -199,20 +208,20 @@
 	<note>
 	  <para>The Handbook's organization may change over time, and
 	    this document may lag in detailing the organizational
-	    changes.  Post questions about Handbook
-	    organization to &a.doc;.</para>
+	    changes.  Post questions about Handbook organization to
+	    &a.doc;.</para>
 	</note>
 
 	<sect4>
 	  <title><filename>Makefile</filename></title>
 
 	  <para>The <filename>Makefile</filename> defines some
-	    variables that affect how the <acronym>XML</acronym> source is converted to
-	    other formats, and lists the various source files that
-	    make up the Handbook.  It then includes the standard
-	    <filename>doc.project.mk</filename>, to bring in the
-	    rest of the code that handles converting documents from
-	    one format to another.</para>
+	    variables that affect how the <acronym>XML</acronym>
+	    source is converted to other formats, and lists the
+	    various source files that make up the Handbook.  It then
+	    includes the standard <filename>doc.project.mk</filename>,
+	    to bring in the rest of the code that handles converting
+	    documents from one format to another.</para>
 	</sect4>
 
 	<sect4>
@@ -235,7 +244,8 @@
 	</sect4>
 
 	<sect4>
-	  <title><filename class="directory"><replaceable>directory</replaceable>/chapter.xml</filename></title>
+	  <title><filename
+	      class="directory"><replaceable>directory</replaceable>/chapter.xml</filename></title>
 
 	  <para>Each chapter in the Handbook is stored in a file
 	    called <filename>chapter.xml</filename> in a separate
@@ -257,10 +267,11 @@
 	    the entire contents of the chapter will be held in this
 	    file.</para>
 
-	  <para>When the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> version of the Handbook is produced,
-	    this will yield <filename>kernelconfig.html</filename>.
-	    This is because of the <literal>id</literal> value, and is
-	    not related to the name of the directory.</para>
+	  <para>When the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> version of the
+	    Handbook is produced, this will yield
+	    <filename>kernelconfig.html</filename>.  This is because
+	    of the <literal>id</literal> value, and is not related to
+	    the name of the directory.</para>
 
 	  <para>In earlier versions of the Handbook, the files were
 	    stored in the same directory as
@@ -271,11 +282,11 @@
 	    Handbook chapter are stored within <filename
 	      class="directory">share/images/books/handbook</filename>.
 	    Note that the localized version of these images should be
-	    placed in the same directory as the <acronym>XML</acronym> sources for each
-	    chapter.  Namespace collisions would be inevitable, and it
-	    is easier to work with several directories with a few
-	    files in them than it is to work with one directory that
-	    has many files in it.</para>
+	    placed in the same directory as the <acronym>XML</acronym>
+	    sources for each chapter.  Namespace collisions would be
+	    inevitable, and it is easier to work with several
+	    directories with a few files in them than it is to work
+	    with one directory that has many files in it.</para>
 
 	  <para>A brief look will show that there are many directories
 	    with individual <filename>chapter.xml</filename> files,
@@ -285,16 +296,15 @@
 
 	  <important>
 	    <para>Do not name chapters or directories after
-	      their ordering within the
-	      Handbook.  This ordering can change as the content
-	      within the Handbook is reorganized.
-	      Reorganization should be possible without
+	      their ordering within the Handbook.  This ordering can
+	      change as the content within the Handbook is
+	      reorganized.  Reorganization should be possible without
 	      renaming files, unless entire chapters are being
 	      promoted or demoted within the hierarchy.</para>
 	  </important>
 
 	  <para>The <filename>chapter.xml</filename> files are not
-	    complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents. They cannot be
+	    complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents.  They cannot be
 	    individually rendered to output formats, but must be built
 	    as part of the Handbook.</para>
 	</sect4>

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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 00:49:59 2013
New Revision: 42311
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42311

Log:
  A few more simplifications and corrections to the structure chapter.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:31:45 2013	(r42310)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:49:59 2013	(r42311)
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
     </listitem>
   </orderedlist>
 
-  <para>In addition, the documentation tree has to accommodate
+  <para>In addition, the documentation tree must accommodate
     documents in many different languages and encodings.  It is
     important that the documentation tree structure does not enforce
     any particular defaults or cultural preferences.</para>
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
 
     <para>Not every <filename
 	class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename>
-      directory will contain all of these subdirectories.  It depends
+      directory will have all of these subdirectories.  It depends
       on how much translation has been accomplished by that
       translation team.</para>
   </sect1>
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@
       <subtitle><filename>books/handbook/</filename></subtitle>
 
       <para>The Handbook is written in DocBook <acronym>XML</acronym>
-	using the &os; DocBook extended DTD.</para>
+	using the &os; DocBook extended <acronym>DTD</acronym>.</para>
 
       <para>The Handbook is organized as a DocBook
 	<sgmltag>book</sgmltag>.  The book is divided into
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
 	  <para>Then it will be called
 	    <filename>chapter.xml</filename> in the
 	    <filename>kernelconfig</filename> directory.  In general,
-	    the entire contents of the chapter will be held in this
+	    the entire contents of the chapter are in this one
 	    file.</para>
 
 	  <para>When the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> version of the
@@ -281,9 +281,9 @@
 	    to include images in each chapter.  Images for each
 	    Handbook chapter are stored within <filename
 	      class="directory">share/images/books/handbook</filename>.
-	    Note that the localized version of these images should be
+	    The localized version of these images should be
 	    placed in the same directory as the <acronym>XML</acronym>
-	    sources for each chapter.  Namespace collisions would be
+	    sources for each chapter.  Namespace collisions are
 	    inevitable, and it is easier to work with several
 	    directories with a few files in them than it is to work
 	    with one directory that has many files in it.</para>

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On Thu, 18 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote:

> Author: wblock
> Date: Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013
> New Revision: 42309
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42309
>
> Log:
>  Edit, update, and simplify the structure chapter.
>
>  Reviewed by:	bps and Allan Jude on IRC
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Wed Jul 17 23:27:59 2013	(r42308)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:21:37 2013	(r42309)
> -
> -	  <para>This is unfortunate as it makes it impossible to treat
> -	    these as generic XML files and simply convert them to
> -	    HTML, RTF, PS, and other formats in the same way the main
> -	    Handbook is generated.  This <emphasis>would</emphasis>
> -	    force you to rebuild the Handbook every time you want to
> -	    see the effect a change has had on just one
> -	    chapter.</para>
> +	  <para>The <filename>chapter.xml</filename> files are not
> +	    complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents. They cannot be
> +	    individually rendered to output formats, but must be built
> +	    as part of the Handbook.</para>

I think "and" is slightly better than "but" as a conjunction, here.  There 
is not really a contrast between the two clauses, they are saying 
similar/related things.

-Ben

> 	</sect4>
>       </sect3>
>     </sect2>
>

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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 18 16:50:45 2013
New Revision: 42312
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42312

Log:
  Remove the following CVSup mirrors from the mirror list:
  
  cvsup2.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup13.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup16.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.at.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.br.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup3.br.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.cn.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.cn.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.fi.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.fr.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup4.fr.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.il.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.kg.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.kr.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup3.kr.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.lt.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup3.lt.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.nz.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.pt.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.pt.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup3.pt.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.ru.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup4.ru.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.za.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup4.tw.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup5.tw.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup8.tw.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup9.tw.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup14.tw.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup.tr.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.tr.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup2.us.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup10.us.FreeBSD.org
  cvsup16.us.FreeBSD.org
  
  None have responded for at least four days, several have been unresponsive
  for months.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 00:49:59 2013	(r42311)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 16:50:45 2013	(r42312)
@@ -110,10 +110,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup3.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -154,10 +150,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup13.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup14.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -166,10 +158,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup16.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup18.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -248,10 +236,6 @@
       <url proto="httpv6">http://ftp.at.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.at.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@at.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -286,17 +270,9 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup2.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup3.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@br.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -337,14 +313,6 @@
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.cn.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.cn.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.cn.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@cn.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -436,10 +404,6 @@
       <name>cvsup.fi.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.fi.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@fi.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -512,18 +476,10 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup3.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup4.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup5.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -730,10 +686,6 @@
       <url proto="ftpv6"></url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.il.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@il.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -751,15 +703,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@it.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-kg">
-    <country>Kyrgyzstan</country>
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.kg.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <email>hostmaster@kg.FreeBSD.org</email>
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-jp">
     <country>Japan</country>
     <host type="www">
@@ -858,14 +801,6 @@
       <name>cvsup.kr.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.kr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup3.kr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@kr.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -906,14 +841,6 @@
       <name>cvsup.lt.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.lt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup3.lt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@lt.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -953,10 +880,6 @@
 
   <entry id="mirrors-nz">
     <country>New Zealand</country>
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.nz.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp.nz.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.nz.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -1035,18 +958,6 @@
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.pt.FreeBSD.org/pub/ISO/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup3.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@pt.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -1099,18 +1010,10 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup3.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup4.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup5.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1218,10 +1121,6 @@
       <name>cvsup.za.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.za.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@za.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -1476,26 +1375,10 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup4.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup5.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup6.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup8.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup9.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup10.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1511,10 +1394,6 @@
       <name>cvsup13.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup14.tw.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
     <email>hostmaster@tw.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -1537,15 +1416,6 @@
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.tr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="rsync"></url>
     </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
   </entry>
 
   <entry id="mirrors-ua">
@@ -1706,10 +1576,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup2.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup3.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1738,10 +1604,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup10.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup11.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 
@@ -1762,10 +1624,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
-      <name>cvsup16.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup18.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>
 

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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 18 17:03:17 2013
New Revision: 42313
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42313

Log:
  Remove five FTP mirrors:
  
  ftp8.FreeBSD.org
  ftp9.FreeBSD.org
  ftp9.us.FreeBSD.org
  ftp12.FreeBSD.org
  ftp7.us.FreeBSD.org
  
  These hostnames have all been repointed to other FTP mirrors, but it
  seems pointless to also continue listing them in their own right.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 16:50:45 2013	(r42312)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 17:03:17 2013	(r42313)
@@ -67,16 +67,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp8.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp8.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp9.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp9.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp10.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp10.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="ftpv6"></url>
@@ -90,11 +80,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp12.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp12.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp13.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp13.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
@@ -1527,23 +1512,11 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp7.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp7.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="http">http://ftp7.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp8.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp8.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
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-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp10.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp10.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 17:21:07 2013
New Revision: 42314
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42314

Log:
  Reword explanation of Handbook chapters not being standalone files.
  
  Reviewed by:	bjk

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 17:03:17 2013	(r42313)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 17:21:07 2013	(r42314)
@@ -304,9 +304,9 @@
 	  </important>
 
 	  <para>The <filename>chapter.xml</filename> files are not
-	    complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents.  They cannot be
-	    individually rendered to output formats, but must be built
-	    as part of the Handbook.</para>
+	    complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents that can be
+	    built individually.  They can only be built
+	    as parts of the whole Handbook.</para>
 	</sect4>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>

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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 18 18:00:44 2013
New Revision: 42315
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42315

Log:
  Comment out two out-of-date mirrors:
  
  ftp://ftp3.ca.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ - 2012
  ftp://ftp6.de.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ - 2010

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 17:21:07 2013	(r42314)
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@@ -282,12 +282,12 @@
       <name>ftp2.ca.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.ca.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
-
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     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp3.ca.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.ca.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
-
+-->
     <email>hostmaster@ca.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
@@ -521,12 +521,12 @@
       <name>ftp5.de.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp5.de.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
-
+<!--
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp6.de.FreeBSD.org</name>
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     </host>
-
+-->
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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 18 18:01:35 2013
New Revision: 42316
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42316

Log:
  Fix path for ftp2.br.FreeBSD.org mirror

Modified:
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Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 18:00:44 2013	(r42315)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 18:01:35 2013	(r42316)
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@
 
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       <name>ftp2.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
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     </host>
 

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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 18 18:17:55 2013
New Revision: 42317
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42317

Log:
  Remove several FTP mirrors: all have been down for at least 14 days.  The
  sole exception here is ftp3.de.FreeBSD.org which has only been down for
  seven days, but is the same mirror as ftp.de.FreeBSD.org so doesn't need
  listing twice.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 18:01:35 2013	(r42316)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Thu Jul 18 18:17:55 2013	(r42317)
@@ -412,11 +412,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.fr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp3.fr.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.fr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
@@ -506,11 +501,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp3.de.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.de.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -634,18 +624,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.ie.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.ie.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="http">http://ftp2.ie.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp3.ie.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.ie.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp3.ie.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
@@ -663,23 +641,8 @@
     <email>hostmaster@ie.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-il">
-    <country>Israel</country>
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.il.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.il.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="ftpv6"></url>
-    </host>
-
-    <email>hostmaster@il.FreeBSD.org</email>
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-it">
     <country>Italy</country>
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.it.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.it.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
 
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup.it.FreeBSD.org</name>
@@ -926,26 +889,6 @@
     <email>hostmaster@pl.FreeBSD.org</email>
   </entry>
 
-  <entry id="mirrors-pt">
-    <country>Portugal</country>
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.pt.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.pt.FreeBSD.org/pub/freebsd/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp4.pt.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.pt.FreeBSD.org/pub/ISO/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <email>hostmaster@pt.FreeBSD.org</email>
-  </entry>
-
   <entry id="mirrors-ru">
     <country>Russia</country>
     <host type="www">
@@ -973,11 +916,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp3.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.ru.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp4.ru.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.ru.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
@@ -1093,11 +1031,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp3.za.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp3.za.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp4.za.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.za.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
@@ -1128,11 +1061,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp2.es.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.es.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp3.es.FreeBSD.org</name>
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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 18 21:04:22 2013
New Revision: 42318
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42318

Log:
  Announce svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org, a new official Subversion mirror for Europe.
  This mirror is based in the UK, and is well connected to the rest of
  Europe.  It hosts read-only copies of the src, ports, doc and socsvn
  repositories, all available over https (recommended), http, svn and rsync.
  
  This mirror is generously hosted by Bytemark, http://www.bytemark.co.uk/
  
  While here, add a note that svn0.us-east is available over rsync.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 18:17:55 2013	(r42317)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:04:22 2013	(r42318)
@@ -746,13 +746,28 @@
 	    <entry>svn, <ulink
 		url="http://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">http</ulink>,
 	      <ulink
-		url="https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">https</ulink></entry>
+		url="https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">https</ulink>, rsync</entry>
 
 	    <entry>USA, New Jersey</entry>
 
 	    <entry>SHA1
 	      <literal>06:D1:23:DE:5E:7A:F7:2B:7A:7E:74:95:5F:54:8D:5C:B0:D6:2E:8F</literal></entry>
 	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry><hostid
+		role="fqdn">svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org</hostid></entry>
+
+	    <entry>svn, <ulink
+		url="http://svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org/">http</ulink>,
+	      <ulink
+		url="https://svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org/">https</ulink>, rsync</entry>
+
+	    <entry>Europe, UK</entry>
+
+	    <entry>SHA1
+	      <literal>39:B0:53:35:CE:60:C7:BB:00:54:96:96:71:10:94:BB:CE:1C:07:A7</literal></entry>
+	  </row>
 	</tbody>
       </tgroup>
     </informaltable>

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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 21:31:16 2013
New Revision: 42319
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42319

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:04:22 2013	(r42318)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:31:16 2013	(r42319)
@@ -64,8 +64,8 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>Submit changes back for review and inclusion in
-	the &os; documentation.</para>
+      <para>Submit changes back for review and inclusion in the &os;
+	documentation.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -172,12 +172,12 @@
 	<para>For the fastest download, pick the nearest mirror from
 	  the list of <ulink
 	    url="&url.books.handbook;/subversion-mirrors.html">Subversion
-	    mirror sites</ulink>.</para>
+	      mirror sites</ulink>.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>The editor to be used
-	    should be configured as follows:</para>
+	  <para>The editor to be used should be configured as
+	    follows:</para>
 
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
@@ -200,21 +200,18 @@
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>Run
-	    <command>svn up</command> to update the local working copy.
-	    Edit the documentation files that need changes.
-	    Before making major
-	    changes to a file, ask for input on the
-	    &a.doc;.</para>
-
-	  <para>To learn which tags and entities
-	    are needed to achieve the desired formatting,
-	    compare some text in the
+	  <para>Run <command>svn up</command> to update the local
+	    working copy.  Edit the documentation files that need
+	    changes.  Before making major changes to a file, ask for
+	    input on the &a.doc;.</para>
+
+	  <para>To learn which tags and entities are needed to achieve
+	    the desired formatting, compare some text in the
 	    <acronym>HTML</acronym> formatted version of the document
-	    to the text, tags, and entities
-	    in the <acronym>XML</acronym> file.
-	    References to the commonly used tags and entities can be
-	    found in <xref linkend="xhtml-markup"/> and
+	    to the text, tags, and entities in the
+	    <acronym>XML</acronym> file.  References to the commonly
+	    used tags and entities can be found in
+	    <xref linkend="xhtml-markup"/> and
 	    <xref linkend="docbook-markup"/>.</para>
 	</step>
 
@@ -225,10 +222,9 @@
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>igor -R filename.xml | less -RS</userinput></screen>
 
 	  <para>Review the output and edit the file to fix any
-	    problems shown, then
-	    rerun the command to find any remaining
-	    problems.  Repeat until all of the errors that are
-	    fixable are resolved.  If an error seems unsolvable,
+	    problems shown, then rerun the command to find any
+	    remaining problems.  Repeat until all of the errors that
+	    are fixable are resolved.  If an error seems unsolvable,
 	    ask for assistance on the &a.doc;.</para>
 	</step>
 
@@ -238,16 +234,16 @@
 	    <userinput>make</userinput> in the top-level directory of
 	    the type of documentation being edited will generate that
 	    documentation in split HTML format.  For example, to build
-	    the English version of the Handbook in <acronym>HTML</acronym>, type
-	    <command>make</command> in the
-	    <filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/</filename>
-	    directory.  This step is necessary to make sure that
-	    edits do not break the build.</para>
+	    the English version of the Handbook in
+	    <acronym>HTML</acronym>, type <command>make</command> in
+	    the <filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/</filename>
+	    directory.  This step is necessary to make sure that edits
+	    do not break the build.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>After successfully completing the previous steps, generate
-	    a <quote>diff file</quote> of the changes:</para>
+	  <para>After successfully completing the previous steps,
+	    generate a <quote>diff file</quote> of the changes:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd /usr/doc</userinput>
 &prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff > <replaceable>bsdinstall</replaceable>.diff.txt</userinput></screen>
@@ -272,14 +268,14 @@
 	    <guibutton>[&nbsp;Browse...&nbsp;]</guibutton> button to
 	    attach the <literal>.diff.txt</literal>.</para>
 
-	  <para>Remember that the
-	    <acronym>FDP</acronym> is comprised of volunteers who
-	    review edits in their spare time and who live in different
-	    time zones around the globe.  It can take some time to review
-	    changes.  If a response is not received in a
-	    reasonable amount of time, send a follow-up email to the
-	    &a.doc; and ask if anyone has had a chance to review the
-	    patch or if additional information is required.</para>
+	  <para>Remember that the <acronym>FDP</acronym> is comprised
+	    of volunteers who review edits in their spare time and who
+	    live in different time zones around the globe.  It can
+	    take some time to review changes.  If a response is not
+	    received in a reasonable amount of time, send a follow-up
+	    email to the &a.doc; and ask if anyone has had a chance to
+	    review the patch or if additional information is
+	    required.</para>
 	</step>
       </procedure>
     </sect1>

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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 21:32:53 2013
New Revision: 42320
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42320

Log:
  Remove the "s" I mistakenly added.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xhtml-markup/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xhtml-markup/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
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+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xhtml-markup/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:32:53 2013	(r42320)
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="xhtml-markup-fpi">
-    <title>Formal Public Identifier (<acronym>FPI</acronym>)s</title>
+    <title>Formal Public Identifier (<acronym>FPI</acronym>)</title>
 
     <para>There are a number of <acronym>XHTML</acronym>
       <acronym>FPI</acronym>s, depending upon the version, or

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Author: wblock
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New Revision: 42321
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Log:
  Add an "s" in the right place.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:32:53 2013	(r42320)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:33:31 2013	(r42321)
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Formal Public Identifiers
-	(<acronym>FPI</acronym>)</title>
+	(<acronym>FPI</acronym>s)</title>
 
       <indexterm significance="preferred">
 	<primary>Formal Public Identifier</primary>

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Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jul 18 22:49:39 2013
New Revision: 42322
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42322

Log:
  Add a chapter on the working copy, and rearrange the other chapters to
  get the details closer to the order they are needed by the reader.
  
  Reviewed by:	bjk, eadler

Added:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml   (contents, props changed)
Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/Makefile
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/chapters.ent

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/Makefile
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/Makefile	Thu Jul 18 21:33:31 2013	(r42321)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/Makefile	Thu Jul 18 22:49:39 2013	(r42322)
@@ -32,6 +32,7 @@ SRCS+= doc-build/chapter.xml
 SRCS+= the-website/chapter.xml
 SRCS+= tools/chapter.xml
 SRCS+= translations/chapter.xml
+SRCS+= working-copy/chapter.xml
 SRCS+= writing-style/chapter.xml
 
 SRCS+= examples/appendix.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml	Thu Jul 18 21:33:31 2013	(r42321)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml	Thu Jul 18 22:49:39 2013	(r42322)
@@ -250,13 +250,14 @@ The time is 09:18</screen></entry>
 
   &chap.overview;
   &chap.tools;
+  &chap.working-copy;
+  &chap.structure;
+  &chap.doc-build;
+  &chap.the-website;
   &chap.xml-primer;
   &chap.xhtml-markup;
   &chap.docbook-markup;
   &chap.stylesheets;
-  &chap.structure;
-  &chap.doc-build;
-  &chap.the-website;
   &chap.translations;
   &chap.writing-style;
   &chap.psgml-mode;

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/chapters.ent
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/chapters.ent	Thu Jul 18 21:33:31 2013	(r42321)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/chapters.ent	Thu Jul 18 22:49:39 2013	(r42322)
@@ -11,17 +11,18 @@
 -->
 
 <!ENTITY chap.overview		SYSTEM "overview/chapter.xml">
-<!ENTITY chap.xml-primer	SYSTEM "xml-primer/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.tools		SYSTEM "tools/chapter.xml">
+<!ENTITY chap.working-copy      SYSTEM "working-copy/chapter.xml">
+<!ENTITY chap.structure         SYSTEM "structure/chapter.xml">
+<!ENTITY chap.doc-build		SYSTEM "doc-build/chapter.xml">
+<!ENTITY chap.the-website	SYSTEM "the-website/chapter.xml">
+<!ENTITY chap.xml-primer	SYSTEM "xml-primer/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.xhtml-markup      SYSTEM "xhtml-markup/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.docbook-markup    SYSTEM "docbook-markup/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.stylesheets	SYSTEM "stylesheets/chapter.xml">
-<!ENTITY chap.structure         SYSTEM "structure/chapter.xml">
-<!ENTITY chap.the-website	SYSTEM "the-website/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.translations	SYSTEM "translations/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.writing-style	SYSTEM "writing-style/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.psgml-mode	SYSTEM "psgml-mode/chapter.xml">
 <!ENTITY chap.see-also		SYSTEM "see-also/chapter.xml">
-<!ENTITY chap.doc-build		SYSTEM "doc-build/chapter.xml">
 
 <!ENTITY app.examples		SYSTEM "examples/appendix.xml">

Added: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- /dev/null	00:00:00 1970	(empty, because file is newly added)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 22:49:39 2013	(r42322)
@@ -0,0 +1,176 @@
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
+<!-- Copyright (c) 2013 Warren Block
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+
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+
+<chapter id="working-copy">
+  <title>The Working Copy</title>
+
+  <para>The <emphasis>working copy</emphasis> is a copy of the &os;
+    repository documentation tree downloaded onto the local computer.
+    Changes are made to the local working copy, tested, and then
+    submitted as patches to be committed to the main
+    repository.</para>
+
+  <para><ulink
+      url="&url.books.handbook;/svn.html"><application>Subversion</application></ulink>
+    is used to manage the &os; documentation files.  It is installed
+    by <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename> as one of
+    the required applications.</para>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-doc-and-src">
+    <title>Documentation and Manual Pages</title>
+
+    <para>&os; documentation is not just books and articles.  Manual
+      pages for all the commands and configuration files are also part
+      of the documentation, and part of the <acronym>FDP</acronym>'s
+      territory.  Two repositories are involved:
+      <literal>doc</literal> for the books and articles, and
+      <literal>base</literal> for the operating system and manual
+      pages.  To edit manual pages, the <literal>base</literal>
+      repository must be checked out separately.</para>
+
+    <para>Repositories may contain multiple versions of documentation
+      and source code.  New modifications are almost always made only
+      to the latest version, called <literal>head</literal>.</para>
+  </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-choosing-mirror">
+    <title>Choosing a Mirror</title>
+
+    <para>To increase speed and reduce download time, select a mirror
+      from the list of <ulink
+	url="&url.books.handbook;/subversion-mirrors.html">Subversion
+	mirror sites</ulink> that is close to your location.
+      Substitute the chosen mirror <acronym>URL</acronym> for the
+      <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/</replaceable>
+      used in these examples.</para>
+  </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-choosing-directory">
+    <title>Choosing a Directory</title>
+
+    <para>&os; documentation is traditionally stored in
+      <filename class="directory">/usr/doc/</filename>, and system
+      source code with manual pages in
+      <filename class="directory">/usr/src/</filename>.  These
+      directory trees are relocatable, and users may want to put the
+      working copies in other locations to avoid interfering with
+      existing information in the main directories.  The examples
+      that follow use <filename class="directory">~/doc</filename>
+      and <filename class="directory">~/src</filename>, both
+      subdirectories of the user's home directory.</para>
+  </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-checking-out">
+    <title>Checking Out a Copy</title>
+
+    <para>A download of a working copy from the repository is called
+      a <emphasis>checkout</emphasis>, and done with
+      <command>svn checkout</command>.  This example checks out a
+      copy of the latest version (<literal>head</literal>) of
+      the main documentation tree:</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn checkout <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/doc/head</replaceable> <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
+    <para>A checkout of the source code to work on manual pages is
+      very similar:</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn checkout <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/base/head</replaceable> <replaceable>~/src</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+  </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-updating">
+    <title>Updating a Working Copy</title>
+
+    <para>The documents and files in the &os; repository change daily.
+      People modify files and commit changes frequently.  Even a short
+      time after an initial checkout, there will already be
+      differences between the local working copy and the main &os;
+      repository.  To update the local version with the changes that
+      have been made to the main repository, use
+      <command>svn update</command> on the directory containing the
+      local working copy:</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn update <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
+    <para>Get in the protective habit of using
+      <command>svn update</command> before editing document files.
+      Someone else may have edited that file very recently, and the
+      local working copy will not include the latest changes until it
+      has been updated.  Editing the newest version of a file is much
+      easier than trying to combine an older, edited local file with
+      the newer version from the repository.</para>
+  </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-revert">
+    <title>Reverting Changes</title>
+
+    <para>Sometimes, it turns out that some changes made locally were
+      not necessary after all, or the writer just wants to start over.
+      Files can be <quote>reset</quote> to their unchanged form with
+      <command>svn revert</command>.  For example, to erase the edits
+      made to <filename>chapter.xml</filename> and reset it to
+      unmodified form:</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn revert chapter.xml</userinput></screen>
+  </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-making-diff">
+    <title>Making a Diff</title>
+
+    <para>After edits to a file or group of files are complete, the
+      differences between the local working copy and the version on
+      the &os; repository must be collected into a single file for
+      submission.  These <emphasis>diff</emphasis> files are produced
+      by redirecting the output of <command>svn diff</command> into a
+      file:</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff &gt; <replaceable>doc-fix-spelling.diff</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
+    <para>Give the file a meaningful name that identifies the
+      contents.  The example above is for spelling fixes to the whole
+      documentation tree.</para>
+
+    <para>If the diff file is to be submitted with the web
+      <quote><ulink url="&url.base;/send-pr.html">Submit a &os;
+	  problem report</ulink></quote> interface, add a
+      <filename>.txt</filename> extension to give the earnest and
+      simple-minded web form a clue that the contents are plain
+      text.</para>
+
+    <para>Be careful: <command>svn diff</command> includes all changes
+      made in the current directory and any subdirectories.  If there
+      are files in the working copy with edits that are not ready to
+      be submitted yet, provide a list of only the files that are to
+      be included:</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff <replaceable>disks/chapter.xml printers/chapter.xml</replaceable> &gt; <replaceable>disks-printers.diff</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+  </sect1>
+</chapter>

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Author: wblock
Date: Fri Jul 19 03:30:02 2013
New Revision: 42323
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42323

Log:
  Add a note about space requirements to the working-copy chapter, so that
  and the Subversion instructions can be removed from the website chapter.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 18 22:49:39 2013	(r42322)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 19 03:30:02 2013	(r42323)
@@ -37,6 +37,11 @@
     submitted as patches to be committed to the main
     repository.</para>
 
+  <para>A full copy of the documentation tree can occupy 700 megabytes
+    of disk space.  Allow for a full gigabyte of space to have room
+    for temporary files and test versions of various output
+    formats.</para>
+
   <para><ulink
       url="&url.books.handbook;/svn.html"><application>Subversion</application></ulink>
     is used to manage the &os; documentation files.  It is installed

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Author: wblock
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New Revision: 42324
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42324

Log:
  Remove redundant information about working copy size and use of
  Subversion from "the website" chapter.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
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+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 19 03:46:00 2013	(r42324)
@@ -34,55 +34,6 @@
 <chapter id="the-website">
   <title>The Website</title>
 
-  <sect1 id="the-website-prep">
-    <title>Preparation</title>
-
-    <para>Use a disk with sufficient free space.  A full copy of
-      the documentation and web site files takes over 700&nbsp;MB.
-      Allowing a full gigabyte provides some breathing room.  This
-      space will hold the XML tools, the documentation tree, temporary
-      build space and the installed web pages.</para>
-
-    <note>
-      <para>Make sure the documentation ports are updated to the
-	latest version.  See
-	<ulink url="&url.books.handbook;/ports.html#ports-using">the
-	  Handbook section on ports</ulink> for more
-	information.</para>
-    </note>
-
-    <sect2 id="the-website-svn">
-      <title>Using <command>svn</command></title>
-
-      <para><command>svn</command> is needed to check out the
-	documentation and web site files from the
-	<literal>doc</literal> Subversion repository.
-	<command>svn</command> can be installed with &man.pkg.add.1;
-	or from the &os; Ports Collection by running:</para>
-
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput><command>cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion</command></userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput><command>make</command> <maketarget>install clean</maketarget></userinput></screen>
-
-      <para>To check out the source files for the &os; web site and
-	the rest of the documentation, run:</para>
-
-      <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput><command>svn checkout <replaceable>https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/doc/head/ <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></command></userinput></screen>
-
-      <para><ulink
-	  url="https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org</ulink>
-	is a public <literal>SVN</literal> server. Select the closest
-	mirror and verify the mirror server certificate from the list
-	of
-	<ulink url="&url.books.handbook;/svn-mirrors.html">Subversion
-	mirror sites</ulink>.</para>
-
-      <para>After the checkout completes, the current version of the
-	&os; documentation, including the web site files, will be
-	present in
-	<filename class="directory">~/doc</filename>.</para>
-    </sect2>
-  </sect1>
-
   <sect1 id="the-website-build">
     <title>Build the Web Pages</title>
 

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Author: wblock
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Log:
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  accompanying text.

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@@ -43,13 +43,13 @@
   </i18n>
 
   <xsl:template name="user.footer.navigation">
-    <p align="center"><small>This, and other documents, can be downloaded
-    from <a href="http://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/">http://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/</a></small></p>
+    <p align="center"><small>All FreeBSD documents are available for download
+    at <a href="http://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/">http://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/</a></small></p>
 
-    <p align="center"><small>For questions about FreeBSD, read the
-    <a href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/docs.html">documentation</a> before
-    contacting &lt;<a href="mailto:questions@FreeBSD.org">questions@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;.<br/>
-    For questions about this documentation, e-mail &lt;<a href="mailto:doc@FreeBSD.org">doc@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;.</small></p>
+    <p align="center"><small>Questions that are not answered by the
+    <a href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/docs.html">documentation</a> may be
+    sent to &lt;<a href="mailto:freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.org">freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;.<br/>
+    Send questions about this document to &lt;<a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;.</small></p>
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Author: ryusuke
Date: Fri Jul 19 10:32:50 2013
New Revision: 42326
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42326

Log:
  - Merge the following from the English version:
  
  	r41875 -> r42318	head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 19 04:19:13 2013	(r42325)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 19 10:32:50 2013	(r42326)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
      The FreeBSD Japanese Documentation Project
 
-     Original revision: r41875
+     Original revision: r42318
      $FreeBSD$
 -->
 
@@ -754,13 +754,28 @@
 	    <entry>svn, <ulink
 		url="http://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">http</ulink>,
 	      <ulink
-		url="https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">https</ulink></entry>
+		url="https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/">https</ulink>, rsync</entry>
 
 	    <entry>USA, ╔к╔Е║╪╔╦╔Ц║╪╔╦</entry>
 
 	    <entry>SHA1
 	      <literal>06:D1:23:DE:5E:7A:F7:2B:7A:7E:74:95:5F:54:8D:5C:B0:D6:2E:8F</literal></entry>
 	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
+	    <entry><hostid
+		role="fqdn">svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org</hostid></entry>
+
+	    <entry>svn, <ulink
+		url="http://svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org/">http</ulink>,
+	      <ulink
+		url="https://svn0.eu.FreeBSD.org/">https</ulink>, rsync</entry>
+
+	    <entry>Europe, UK</entry>
+
+	    <entry>SHA1
+	      <literal>39:B0:53:35:CE:60:C7:BB:00:54:96:96:71:10:94:BB:CE:1C:07:A7</literal></entry>
+	  </row>
 	</tbody>
       </tgroup>
     </informaltable>

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Author: wblock
Date: Fri Jul 19 19:32:30 2013
New Revision: 42327
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42327

Log:
  Add a section with references to Subversion usage.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 19 10:32:50 2013	(r42326)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/working-copy/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 19 19:32:30 2013	(r42327)
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
   <sect1 id="working-copy-revert">
     <title>Reverting Changes</title>
 
-    <para>Sometimes, it turns out that some changes made locally were
+    <para>Sometimes it turns out that changes were
       not necessary after all, or the writer just wants to start over.
       Files can be <quote>reset</quote> to their unchanged form with
       <command>svn revert</command>.  For example, to erase the edits
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
   <sect1 id="working-copy-making-diff">
     <title>Making a Diff</title>
 
-    <para>After edits to a file or group of files are complete, the
+    <para>After edits to a file or group of files are completed, the
       differences between the local working copy and the version on
       the &os; repository must be collected into a single file for
       submission.  These <emphasis>diff</emphasis> files are produced
@@ -178,4 +178,16 @@
     <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput>
 &prompt.user; <userinput>svn diff <replaceable>disks/chapter.xml printers/chapter.xml</replaceable> &gt; <replaceable>disks-printers.diff</replaceable></userinput></screen>
   </sect1>
+
+  <sect1 id="working-copy-subversion-references">
+    <title><application>Subversion</application> References</title>
+
+    <para>These examples show very basic usage of
+      <application>Subversion</application>.  More detail is available
+      in the <ulink
+	url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/">Subversion Book</ulink>
+      and the <ulink
+	url="http://subversion.apache.org/docs/">Subversion
+	documentation</ulink>.</para>
+  </sect1>
 </chapter>

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Author: wblock
Date: Sat Jul 20 01:21:45 2013
New Revision: 42328
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42328

Log:
  Update, simplify, and clarify the doc-build chapter.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
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+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml	Sat Jul 20 01:21:45 2013	(r42328)
@@ -34,75 +34,41 @@
 <chapter id="doc-build">
   <title>The Documentation Build Process</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter's main purpose is to clearly explain
-    <emphasis>how the documentation build process is
-      organized</emphasis>, and <emphasis>how to affect modifications
-      to this process</emphasis>.</para>
-
-  <para>After you have finished reading this chapter you
-    should:</para>
-
-  <itemizedlist>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Know what you need to build the FDP documentation, in
-	addition to those mentioned in the
-	<link linkend="tools">XML tools chapter</link>.</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Be able to read and understand the
-	<application>make</application> instructions that are present
-	in each document's <filename>Makefile</filename>s, as well as
-	an overview of the <filename>doc.project.mk</filename>
-	includes.</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Be able to customize the build process by using
-	<application>make</application> variables and
-	<application>make</application> targets.</para>
-    </listitem>
-  </itemizedlist>
+  <para>This chapter covers organization of the
+    documentation build process
+    and how &man.make.1; is used to control
+    it.</para>
 
   <sect1 id="doc-build-toolset">
-    <title>The FreeBSD Documentation Build Toolset</title>
+    <title>The &os; Documentation Build Toolset</title>
 
-    <para>Here are your tools.  Use them every way you can.</para>
+    <para>These are the tools used to build and install the <acronym>FDP</acronym> documentation.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>The primary build tool you will need is
-	  <application>make</application>, but specifically
+	<para>The primary build tool is
+	  &man.make.1;, specifically
 	  <application>Berkeley Make</application>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Package building is handled by FreeBSD's
-	  <application>pkg_create</application>.  If you are not using
-	  FreeBSD, you will either have to live without packages, or
-	  compile the source yourself.</para>
+	<para>Package building is handled by &os;'s
+	  &man.pkg.create.1;.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><application>gzip</application> is needed to create
+	<para>&man.gzip.1; is used to create
 	  compressed versions of the document.
-	  <application>bzip2</application> compression and
-	  <application>zip</application> archives are also supported.
-	  <application>tar</application> is supported, but package
-	  building demands it.</para>
+	  &man.bzip2.1; archives are also supported.
+	  &man.tar.1; is used for package
+	  building.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><application>install</application> is the default method
-	  to install the documentation.  There are alternatives,
-	  however.</para>
+	<para>&man.install.1; is used
+	  to install the documentation.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
-    <note>
-      <para>It is unlikely you will have any trouble finding these
-	last two, they are mentioned for completeness only.</para>
-    </note>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="doc-build-makefiles">
@@ -111,7 +77,7 @@
       Documentation Tree</title>
 
     <para>There are three main types of <filename>Makefile</filename>s
-      in the FreeBSD Documentation Project tree.</para>
+      in the &os; Documentation Project tree.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -150,13 +116,13 @@ COMPAT_SYMLINK = en
 DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/..
 .include "${DOC_PREFIX}/share/mk/doc.project.mk"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>In quick summary, the first four non-empty lines define
-	the <application>make</application> variables,
+      <para>The first four non-empty lines define
+	the &man.make.1; variables
 	<makevar>SUBDIR</makevar>, <makevar>COMPAT_SYMLINK</makevar>,
 	and <makevar>DOC_PREFIX</makevar>.</para>
 
-      <para>The first <makevar>SUBDIR</makevar> statement, as well as
-	the <makevar>COMPAT_SYMLINK</makevar> statement, shows how to
+      <para>The <makevar>SUBDIR</makevar> statement and
+	<makevar>COMPAT_SYMLINK</makevar> statement show how to
 	assign a value to a variable, overriding any previous
 	value.</para>
 
@@ -172,7 +138,7 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/..
 	<filename>Makefile</filename> thinks it is - the user can
 	override this and provide the correct value.</para>
 
-      <para>Now what does it all mean?  <makevar>SUBDIR</makevar>
+      <para>What does it all mean?  <makevar>SUBDIR</makevar>
 	mentions which subdirectories below this one the build process
 	should pass any work on to.</para>
 
@@ -182,14 +148,14 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/..
 	point to <filename>en_US.ISO-8859-1</filename>).</para>
 
       <para><makevar>DOC_PREFIX</makevar> is the path to the root of
-	the FreeBSD Document Project tree.  This is not always that
+	the &os; Document Project tree.  This is not always that
 	easy to find, and is also easily overridden, to allow for
 	flexibility.  <makevar>.CURDIR</makevar> is a
-	<application>make</application> builtin variable with the path
+	&man.make.1; builtin variable with the path
 	to the current directory.</para>
 
-      <para>The final line includes the FreeBSD Documentation
-	Project's project-wide <application>make</application> system
+      <para>The final line includes the &os; Documentation
+	Project's project-wide &man.make.1; system
 	file <filename>doc.project.mk</filename> which is the glue
 	which converts these variables into build instructions.</para>
     </sect2>
@@ -197,8 +163,8 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/..
     <sect2 id="doc-make">
       <title>Documentation <filename>Makefile</filename>s</title>
 
-      <para>These <filename>Makefile</filename>s set a bunch of
-	<application>make</application> variables that describe how to
+      <para>These <filename>Makefile</filename>s set
+	&man.make.1; variables that describe how to
 	build the documentation contained in that directory.</para>
 
       <para>Here is an example:</para>
@@ -219,10 +185,10 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/../../..
 
 .include "$(DOC_PREFIX)/share/mk/docproj.docbook.mk"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>The <makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> variable is a very
-	important one.  This variable provides the ability to claim
-	ownership over a document in the FreeBSD Documentation
-	Project, whereby you gain the responsibility for maintaining
+      <para>The <makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> variable
+	allows committers to claim
+	ownership of a document in the &os; Documentation
+	Project, and take responsibility for maintaining
 	it.</para>
 
       <para><makevar>DOC</makevar> is the name (sans the
@@ -240,21 +206,16 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/../../..
 	default, should be non-empty if only compressed documents are
 	desired in the build.</para>
 
-      <note>
-	<para>We covered optional variable assignments in the
-	  <link linkend="sub-make">previous section</link>.</para>
-      </note>
-
       <para>The <makevar>DOC_PREFIX</makevar> and include statements
 	should be familiar already.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="make-includes">
-    <title>FreeBSD Documentation Project
+    <title>&os; Documentation Project
       <application>Make</application> Includes</title>
 
-    <para>This is best explained by inspection of the code.  Here are
+    <para>&man.make.1; includes are best explained by inspection of the code.  Here are
       the system include files:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -321,10 +282,10 @@ PRI_LANG?=	en_US.ISO8859-1
 	  default.</para>
 
 	<note>
-	  <para><makevar>PRI_LANG</makevar> in no way affects what
+	  <para><makevar>PRI_LANG</makevar> does not affect which
 	    documents can, or even will, be built.  Its main use is
 	    creating links to commonly referenced documents into the
-	    FreeBSD documentation install root.</para>
+	    &os; documentation install root.</para>
 	</note>
       </sect3>
 
@@ -332,7 +293,7 @@ PRI_LANG?=	en_US.ISO8859-1
 	<title>Conditionals</title>
 
 	<para>The <literal>.if defined(DOC)</literal> line is an
-	  example of a <application>make</application> conditional
+	  example of a &man.make.1; conditional
 	  which, like in other programs, defines behavior if some
 	  condition is true or if it is false.
 	  <literal>defined</literal> is a function which returns
@@ -351,9 +312,8 @@ PRI_LANG?=	en_US.ISO8859-1
     <sect2>
       <title><filename>doc.subdir.mk</filename></title>
 
-      <para>This is too long to explain by inspection, you should be
-	able to work it out with the knowledge gained from the
-	previous chapters, and a little help given here.</para>
+      <para>This file is too long to explain in detail.  These
+	notes describe the most important features.</para>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Variables</title>
@@ -389,8 +349,8 @@ PRI_LANG?=	en_US.ISO8859-1
 	  <literal><replaceable>target</replaceable>:
 	      <replaceable>dependency1 dependency2
 	      ...</replaceable></literal> tuples, where to build
-	  <literal>target</literal>, you need to build the given
-	  dependencies first.</para>
+	  <literal>target</literal>, the given
+	  dependencies must be built first.</para>
 
 	<para>After that descriptive tuple, instructions on how to
 	  build the target may be given, if the conversion process

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Author: wblock
Date: Sat Jul 20 01:28:57 2013
New Revision: 42329
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42329

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
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+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml	Sat Jul 20 01:28:57 2013	(r42329)
@@ -34,20 +34,18 @@
 <chapter id="doc-build">
   <title>The Documentation Build Process</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter covers organization of the
-    documentation build process
-    and how &man.make.1; is used to control
-    it.</para>
+  <para>This chapter covers organization of the documentation build
+    process and how &man.make.1; is used to control it.</para>
 
   <sect1 id="doc-build-toolset">
     <title>The &os; Documentation Build Toolset</title>
 
-    <para>These are the tools used to build and install the <acronym>FDP</acronym> documentation.</para>
+    <para>These are the tools used to build and install the
+      <acronym>FDP</acronym> documentation.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>The primary build tool is
-	  &man.make.1;, specifically
+	<para>The primary build tool is &man.make.1;, specifically
 	  <application>Berkeley Make</application>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -57,16 +55,14 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>&man.gzip.1; is used to create
-	  compressed versions of the document.
-	  &man.bzip2.1; archives are also supported.
-	  &man.tar.1; is used for package
-	  building.</para>
+	<para>&man.gzip.1; is used to create compressed versions of
+	  the document.  &man.bzip2.1; archives are also supported.
+	  &man.tar.1; is used for package building.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>&man.install.1; is used
-	  to install the documentation.</para>
+	<para>&man.install.1; is used to install the
+	  documentation.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect1>
@@ -116,10 +112,10 @@ COMPAT_SYMLINK = en
 DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/..
 .include "${DOC_PREFIX}/share/mk/doc.project.mk"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>The first four non-empty lines define
-	the &man.make.1; variables
-	<makevar>SUBDIR</makevar>, <makevar>COMPAT_SYMLINK</makevar>,
-	and <makevar>DOC_PREFIX</makevar>.</para>
+      <para>The first four non-empty lines define the &man.make.1;
+	variables <makevar>SUBDIR</makevar>,
+	<makevar>COMPAT_SYMLINK</makevar>, and
+	<makevar>DOC_PREFIX</makevar>.</para>
 
       <para>The <makevar>SUBDIR</makevar> statement and
 	<makevar>COMPAT_SYMLINK</makevar> statement show how to
@@ -148,24 +144,24 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/..
 	point to <filename>en_US.ISO-8859-1</filename>).</para>
 
       <para><makevar>DOC_PREFIX</makevar> is the path to the root of
-	the &os; Document Project tree.  This is not always that
-	easy to find, and is also easily overridden, to allow for
-	flexibility.  <makevar>.CURDIR</makevar> is a
-	&man.make.1; builtin variable with the path
-	to the current directory.</para>
-
-      <para>The final line includes the &os; Documentation
-	Project's project-wide &man.make.1; system
-	file <filename>doc.project.mk</filename> which is the glue
-	which converts these variables into build instructions.</para>
+	the &os; Document Project tree.  This is not always that easy
+	to find, and is also easily overridden, to allow for
+	flexibility.  <makevar>.CURDIR</makevar> is a &man.make.1;
+	builtin variable with the path to the current
+	directory.</para>
+
+      <para>The final line includes the &os; Documentation Project's
+	project-wide &man.make.1; system file
+	<filename>doc.project.mk</filename> which is the glue which
+	converts these variables into build instructions.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="doc-make">
       <title>Documentation <filename>Makefile</filename>s</title>
 
-      <para>These <filename>Makefile</filename>s set
-	&man.make.1; variables that describe how to
-	build the documentation contained in that directory.</para>
+      <para>These <filename>Makefile</filename>s set &man.make.1;
+	variables that describe how to build the documentation
+	contained in that directory.</para>
 
       <para>Here is an example:</para>
 
@@ -185,10 +181,9 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/../../..
 
 .include "$(DOC_PREFIX)/share/mk/docproj.docbook.mk"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>The <makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> variable
-	allows committers to claim
-	ownership of a document in the &os; Documentation
-	Project, and take responsibility for maintaining
+      <para>The <makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> variable allows
+	committers to claim ownership of a document in the &os;
+	Documentation Project, and take responsibility for maintaining
 	it.</para>
 
       <para><makevar>DOC</makevar> is the name (sans the
@@ -215,8 +210,8 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/../../..
     <title>&os; Documentation Project
       <application>Make</application> Includes</title>
 
-    <para>&man.make.1; includes are best explained by inspection of the code.  Here are
-      the system include files:</para>
+    <para>&man.make.1; includes are best explained by inspection of
+      the code.  Here are the system include files:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -293,11 +288,10 @@ PRI_LANG?=	en_US.ISO8859-1
 	<title>Conditionals</title>
 
 	<para>The <literal>.if defined(DOC)</literal> line is an
-	  example of a &man.make.1; conditional
-	  which, like in other programs, defines behavior if some
-	  condition is true or if it is false.
-	  <literal>defined</literal> is a function which returns
-	  whether the variable given is defined or not.</para>
+	  example of a &man.make.1; conditional which, like in other
+	  programs, defines behavior if some condition is true or if
+	  it is false.  <literal>defined</literal> is a function which
+	  returns whether the variable given is defined or not.</para>
 
 	<para><literal>.if ${DOCFORMAT} == "docbook"</literal>, next,
 	  tests whether the <makevar>DOCFORMAT</makevar> variable is
@@ -312,8 +306,8 @@ PRI_LANG?=	en_US.ISO8859-1
     <sect2>
       <title><filename>doc.subdir.mk</filename></title>
 
-      <para>This file is too long to explain in detail.  These
-	notes describe the most important features.</para>
+      <para>This file is too long to explain in detail.  These notes
+	describe the most important features.</para>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Variables</title>

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Author: gavin
Date: Sat Jul 20 14:57:10 2013
New Revision: 42330
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42330

Log:
  Drop rsync references for:
   - ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org
   - ftp.sk.FreeBSD.org
   - ftp5.us.FreeBSD.org
   - ftp.tr.FreeBSD.org
  as they no longer offer either rsync, or FreeBSD-over-rsync.
  
  Fix rsync paths for ftp5.se.FreeBSD.org and ftp2.uk.FreeBSD.org.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Sat Jul 20 01:28:57 2013	(r42329)
+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Sat Jul 20 14:57:10 2013	(r42330)
@@ -504,7 +504,6 @@
       <name>ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp4.de.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -970,8 +969,6 @@
       <url proto="ftpv6">ftp://ftp.sk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp.sk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="httpv6">http://ftp.sk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
-      <url proto="rsyncv6"></url>
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -1122,7 +1119,7 @@
       <name>ftp5.se.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp5.se.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp5.se.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
+      <url proto="rsync">rsync://ftp5.se.FreeBSD.org/freebsd/</url>
     </host>
     
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -1318,13 +1315,6 @@
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.tr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="http">http://ftp.tr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp2.tr.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.tr.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="rsync"></url>
@@ -1375,7 +1365,7 @@
       <name>ftp2.uk.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.uk.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp2.uk.FreeBSD.org/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
+      <url proto="rsync">rsync://ftp2.uk.FreeBSD.org/ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">
@@ -1431,7 +1421,6 @@
     <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp5.us.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp5.us.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="rsync"></url>
     </host>
 
     <host type="ftp">

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Author: gavin
Date: Sat Jul 20 15:24:54 2013
New Revision: 42331
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42331

Log:
  Neither ftp.br or ftp5.br.freebsd.org have responded in the last week.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/mirrors.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/mirrors.xml
==============================================================================
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+++ head/share/xml/mirrors.xml	Sat Jul 20 15:24:54 2013	(r42331)
@@ -227,12 +227,6 @@
   <entry id="mirrors-br">
     <country>Brazil</country>
     <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-      <url proto="http">http://ftp.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
-    <host type="ftp">
       <name>ftp2.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp2.br.FreeBSD.org/FreeBSD/</url>
       <url proto="http">http://ftp2.br.FreeBSD.org/</url>
@@ -249,11 +243,6 @@
       <url proto="ftp">ftp://ftp4.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
     </host>
 
-    <host type="ftp">
-      <name>ftp5.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
-      <url proto="http">http://ftp5.br.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/</url>
-    </host>
-
     <host type="cvsup">
       <name>cvsup2.br.FreeBSD.org</name>
     </host>

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Author: wblock
Date: Sat Jul 20 20:46:28 2013
New Revision: 42332
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42332

Log:
  Add some tables showing common FreeBSD entities and their usage.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml	Sat Jul 20 15:24:54 2013	(r42331)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml	Sat Jul 20 20:46:28 2013	(r42332)
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
       not answer to the &a.doc;.</para>
 
     <para>DocBook was originally developed by HaL Computer Systems and
-      O'Reilly &amp; Associates to be a <acronym>DTD</acronym> for
+      O'Reilly &amp; Associates to be a Document Type Definition (<acronym>DTD</acronym>) for
       writing technical documentation <footnote><para>A short history
 	  can be found under <ulink
 	    url="http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/intro.shtml#d0e41">
@@ -92,31 +92,233 @@
     <title>&os; Extensions</title>
 
     <para>The &os; Documentation Project has extended the
-      DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym> by adding some new elements.
-      These elements serve to make some of the markup more
+      DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym> with additional elements and entities.
+      These additions serve to make some of the markup easier or more
       precise.</para>
 
-    <para>Where a &os;-specific element is listed below, it is
-      clearly marked.</para>
-
     <para>Throughout the rest of this document, the term
       <quote>DocBook</quote> is used to mean the &os;-extended
       DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym>.</para>
 
     <note>
-      <para>There is nothing about these extensions that is &os;
-	specific, it was just felt that they were useful
+      <para>Most of these extensions are not unique to &os;,
+	it was just felt that they were useful
 	enhancements for this particular project.  Should anyone
 	from any of the other *nix camps (NetBSD, OpenBSD, Linux,
 	&hellip;) be interested in collaborating on a standard
-	DocBook extension set, please get in touch with
+	DocBook extension set, please contact
 	&a.doceng;.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>The &os; extensions are not (currently) in the
-      Ports Collection.  They are stored in the &os; Subversion
-      tree, as <ulink
-	url="http://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd">head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd</ulink>.</para>
+    <sect2 id="docbook-markup-freebsd-extensions-elements">
+      <title>&os; Elements</title>
+
+      <para>The additional &os; elements are not (currently) in the
+	Ports Collection.  They are stored in the &os; Subversion
+	tree, as <ulink
+	  url="http://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd">head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd</ulink>.</para>
+
+      <para>&os;-specific elements used in the examples below are
+	clearly marked.</para>
+    </sect2>
+
+    <sect2 id="docbook-markup-freebsd-extensions-entities">
+      <title>&os; Entities</title>
+
+      <table frame="none">
+	<title>&os; Name Entities</title>
+
+	<tgroup cols="2">
+	  <thead>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry>Name</entry>
+	      <entry>Expands To</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </thead>
+
+	  <tbody>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;os;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&os;</literal></entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;os.stable;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&os.stable;</literal></entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;os.current;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&os.current;</literal></entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </tbody>
+	</tgroup>
+      </table>
+
+      <table frame="none">
+	<title>&os; Mailing List Entities</title>
+
+	<tgroup cols="3">
+	  <thead>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry>Name</entry>
+	      <entry>Expands To</entry>
+	      <entry>Notes</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </thead>
+
+	  <tbody>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;a.doc;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&a.doc;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>
+		<programlisting>Usage: A link to the &amp;a.doc;.</programlisting></entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;a.questions;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&a.questions;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>
+		<programlisting>Usage: A link to the &amp;a.questions;.</programlisting></entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;a.<replaceable>listname</replaceable>;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><emphasis>link to
+		<replaceable>listname</replaceable></emphasis></entry>
+	      <entry>Entities are defined for all the <ulink
+		  url="&url.books.handbook;/eresources.html#eresources-mail">&os; mailing
+		  lists</ulink>.</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </tbody>
+	</tgroup>
+      </table>
+
+      <table frame="none">
+	<title>&os; Document Links</title>
+
+	<tgroup cols="3">
+	  <thead>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry>Name</entry>
+	      <entry>Expands To</entry>
+	      <entry>Notes</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </thead>
+
+	  <tbody>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;url.books.handbook;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&url.books.handbook;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>
+		<programlisting>Usage: A link to the <sgmltag class="starttag">ulink url="&amp;url.books.handbook;/advanced-networking.html"</sgmltag>Advanced
+  Networking<sgmltag class="endtag">ulink</sgmltag> chapter of the Handbook.</programlisting></entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;url.books.<replaceable>bookname</replaceable>;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><emphasis>relative path to
+		  <replaceable>bookname</replaceable></emphasis></entry>
+	      <entry>Entities are defined for all the <ulink
+		  url="&url.doc.langbase;/books/">&os;
+		  books</ulink>.</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;url.articles.committers-guide;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&url.articles.committers-guide;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>
+		<programlisting>Usage: A link to the <sgmltag class="starttag">ulink url="&amp;url.articles.committers-guide;"</sgmltag>Committer's Guide<sgmltag class="endtag">ulink</sgmltag> article.</programlisting></entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;url.articles.<replaceable>articlename</replaceable>;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><emphasis>relative path to
+		<replaceable>articlename</replaceable></emphasis></entry>
+	      <entry>Entities are defined for all the <ulink
+		  url="&url.doc.langbase;/articles/">&os; articles</ulink>.</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </tbody>
+	</tgroup>
+      </table>
+
+      <table frame="none">
+	<title>Other Operating System Name Entities</title>
+
+	<tgroup cols="3">
+	  <thead>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry>Name</entry>
+	      <entry>Expands To</entry>
+	      <entry>Notes</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </thead>
+
+	  <tbody>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;linux;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>&linux;</entry>
+	      <entry>The &linux; operating system.</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;unix;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>&unix;</entry>
+	      <entry>The &unix;	operating system.</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;windows;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>&windows;</entry>
+	      <entry>The &windows; operating system.</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </tbody>
+	</tgroup>
+      </table>
+
+      <table frame="none">
+	<title>Miscellaneous Entities</title>
+
+	<tgroup cols="3">
+	  <thead>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry>Name</entry>
+	      <entry>Expands To</entry>
+	      <entry>Notes</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </thead>
+
+	  <tbody>
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;prompt.root;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&prompt.root;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>The <username>root</username> user
+		prompt.</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;prompt.user;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry><literal>&prompt.user;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>A prompt for an unprivileged user.</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;postscript;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>&postscript;</entry>
+	      <entry>The trademarked term to refer to the
+		&postscript; programming language.</entry>
+	    </row>
+
+	    <row>
+	      <entry><literal>&amp;xorg;</literal></entry>
+	      <entry>&xorg;</entry>
+	      <entry>The term to refer to the &xorg; open source X
+		Window System.</entry>
+	    </row>
+	  </tbody>
+	</tgroup>
+      </table>
+    </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
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 	exported by a <filename>Makefile</filename> that can be
 	given as a parameter to <command>make</command>.
 	<sgmltag>makevar</sgmltag> identifies a variable that can be
-	set (in the environment, on the <command>make</command>
-	command line, or within the <filename>Makefile</filename>)
+	set (in the environment, on the command line with <command>make</command>,
+	or within the <filename>Makefile</filename>)
 	to influence the process.</para>
 
       <example>