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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
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Subject: Re: [patch] PH tells crap about GMAKE (Was: Re: svn commit: r340018
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On Fri, 24 Jan 2014, Warren Block wrote:

> On Fri, 17 Jan 2014, Alexey Dokuchaev wrote:
>
>> Please consider attached patch.  It is not a polished gem, and most likely
>> would need a review and wordsmithing from doc@ guys.
>> 
>> While here I've also standardized the spelling of "okay", and fixed couple
>> of grammar nits.  These changes are not related to GMAKE ones, and probably
>> should be committed separately, but I'm not splitting the diff for personal
>> convenience, sorry. :)
>
> Attached is a quick editing pass.  I have not tested it for building yet, and 
> edited the diff directly, so it has some a new blank line.

I would like to be more specific in this part:

   Quite often, a specific implementation is required, like GNU make, or
   legacy FreeBSD make.

I think that should say:

   Quite often, a specific implementation is required, like GNU make
   (gmake), or legacy FreeBSD make (fmake).

Is that correct?

Thanks!