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Log:
Fix grammar in the jails handbook section
PR: 203350
Submitted by: Leonhard Campo
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
Sponsored by: ScaleEngine Inc.
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allowed to perform operations to the system outside of the
associated jail environment.
- This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology are
- how to use &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for system
- administrators, but their basic usage can also be useful for
+ This chapter provides an overview of the terminology and
+ commands for managing &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for both system
+ administrators, and
advanced users.
After reading this chapter, you will know:
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Log:
Whitespace cleanup from previous commit
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@@ -90,9 +90,8 @@
associated jail environment.
This chapter provides an overview of the terminology and
- commands for managing &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for both system
- administrators, and
- advanced users.
+ commands for managing &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for
+ both system administrators, and advanced users.
After reading this chapter, you will know:
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Log:
Fix grammar mistake.
PR: 203343
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Sponsored by: EuroBSDCon DevSummit
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Systems and networks can be accessed without permission,
sometimes by accident, or by remote attackers, and in some
cases, via corporate espionage or former employees. As a user,
- it is important to prepare for and admit when a mistake has lead
+ it is important to prepare for and admit when a mistake has led
to a security breach and report possible issues to the security
team. As an administrator, it is important to know of the
threats and be prepared to mitigate them.
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Log:
Improve the instructions in the HAST section of the handbook
PR: 203340
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changes to the data. This problem must be corrected
manually by the system administrator.
- The administrator must decide which node has more
- important changes or merge them manually. Then, let
+ The administrator must either decide which node has more
+ important changes, or perform the merge manually. Then, let
HAST perform full synchronization of the
node which has the broken data. To do this, issue these
commands on the node which needs to be
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Log:
Fix a typo.
PR: 203344
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@@ -3223,7 +3223,7 @@ bridge0: flags=8843<UP,BROADCAST,RUNN
sticky
If a bridge member interface is marked as sticky,
- dynamically learned address entries are treated at
+ dynamically learned address entries are treated as
static entries in the forwarding cache. Sticky entries
are never aged out of the cache or replaced, even if the
address is seen on a different interface. This gives
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Log:
Fix grammar.
PR: 203359
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Sponsored by: EuroBSDcon DevSummit
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The &unix;
Basics chapter of the &os; Handbook covers the basic
commands and functionality of &os; operating system. Most
- of information provided in this document is also relevant for
+ of the information provided in this document is also relevant for
any other &unix;-like operating system.
There are many easy books, such as the "Dummies" guides, in any
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Log:
Update link to point to bsdinstall instead of sysinstall
PR: 203341
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latest mainstream release.
(See the Handbook for why you should not be tempted
by any of the other branches.) Before you begin, carefully read the
- installation instructions,
+ installation instructions,
as well as each one of the *.TXT files in the FTP directory
or on the installation CD. They are there because they contain information
that you will need. Also pick up the latest
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Date: Sun, 27 Sep 2015 22:49:58 +0000 (UTC)
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Date: Sun Sep 27 22:49:57 2015
New Revision: 47449
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47449
Log:
Whitespace fixes.
Sponsored by: EuroBSDcon DevSummit
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml Sun Sep 27 22:37:24 2015 (r47448)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml Sun Sep 27 22:49:57 2015 (r47449)
@@ -15,16 +15,17 @@
- The following resources are some of those which &os;
- newbies have found most helpful when learning to use &os;.
- Please send corrections and additions to
- FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org.
+ The following resources are some of those which &os; newbies
+ have found most helpful when learning to use &os;. Please send
+ corrections and additions to FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org.
@@ -32,84 +33,93 @@
- This web site is the main source of up to date information about
- &os;. Newbies have found the following pages particularly helpful:
-
-
- Search the Handbook and FAQ, the
- whole web site, or the &os; mailing list archives.
-
- The Documentation page has links to the
- Handbook and FAQ, tutorials, information about contributing to the
- Documentation Project, documents in languages other than English,
- online manual pages, and much more.
-
- The Support page contains a wealth of
- information about &os;, including mailing lists, user groups, web
- and FTP sites, release information, and links to some sources of
- &unix; information.
+ This web site is the main source of up to date information
+ about &os;. Newbies have found the following pages particularly
+ helpful:
+
+
+ Search the
+ Handbook and FAQ, the whole web site, or the &os; mailing list
+ archives.
+
+ The Documentation page has
+ links to the Handbook and FAQ, tutorials, information about
+ contributing to the Documentation Project, documents in
+ languages other than English, online manual pages, and much
+ more.
+
+ The Support page
+ contains a wealth of information about &os;, including mailing
+ lists, user groups, web and FTP sites, release information,
+ and links to some sources of &unix; information.
- You should most probably look for the
- latest mainstream release.
- (See the Handbook for why you should not be tempted
- by any of the other branches.) Before you begin, carefully read the
- installation instructions,
- as well as each one of the *.TXT files in the FTP directory
- or on the installation CD. They are there because they contain information
- that you will need. Also pick up the latest
- errata file
- from the web site, in case it has been updated.
-
- A number of short
- articles and tutorials are available. The short tutorial,
- For
- People New to Both &os; and Unix, is popular with absolute
- beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy
- this one.
-
- There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp.
- You might start with the PPP and SLIP
- chapter of the &os; Handbook and explore the
- ppp page
- for links to the other valuable information and the latest updates.
-
- The &os; Handbook and Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) are the
- main documents for &os;. Essential reading, they contain a lot of
- material for newbies as well as some pretty advanced stuff. Do not
- worry if you are unable to understand the advanced sections. The handbook
- contains the installation instructions and also provides lists of
- books and on-line resources, and the FAQ has a troubleshooting
- section.
-
- Join the &os;-Questions mailing list to see the questions you
- were too afraid to ask, and their answers. Subscribe by filling out
- the following form:
- http://lists.FreeBSD.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-questions.
- You can look up old questions and
- answers via the search
- page.
+ You should most probably look for the latest mainstream release. (See
+ the Handbook for why you should not be
+ tempted by any of the other branches.) Before you begin,
+ carefully read the installation
+ instructions, as well as each one of the *.TXT files in
+ the FTP directory or on the installation CD. They are there
+ because they contain information that you will need. Also pick
+ up the latest errata
+ file from the web site, in case it has been
+ updated.
+
+ A number of short articles and
+ tutorials are available. The short tutorial, For People New to
+ Both &os; and Unix, is popular with absolute beginners.
+ You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy this
+ one.
+
+ There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up
+ ppp. You might start with the PPP and
+ SLIP chapter of the &os; Handbook and explore the ppp page for
+ links to the other valuable information and the latest
+ updates.
+
+ The &os;
+ Handbook and Frequently Asked Questions
+ (FAQ) are the main documents for &os;. Essential reading,
+ they contain a lot of material for newbies as well as some
+ pretty advanced stuff. Do not worry if you are unable to
+ understand the advanced sections. The handbook contains the
+ installation instructions and also provides lists of books and
+ on-line resources, and the FAQ has a troubleshooting
+ section.
+
+ Join the &os;-Questions mailing list to see the questions
+ you were too afraid to ask, and their answers. Subscribe by
+ filling out the following form: http://lists.FreeBSD.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-questions.
+ You can look up old questions and answers via the search
+ page.
The main newsgroup for &os; is comp.unix.bsd.freebsd.misc.
- General UNIX questions are dealt with in the newsgroup comp.unix.questions and the
- associated FAQ
- from the RMIT FTP site. Newbies are likely to be most
- interested in sections 1 and 2 initially.
-
- Manual pages are good
- for reference but not always
- the best introduction for a novice. The more you work with man pages
- the more familiar they become. Some are very good for newbies, so
- always check them out. The ppp man page, for example, is more like a
- tutorial.
+ href="news:comp.unix.bsd.freebsd.misc">comp.unix.bsd.freebsd.misc.
+ General UNIX questions are dealt with in the newsgroup comp.unix.questions and
+ the associated FAQ
+ from the RMIT FTP site. Newbies are likely to be most
+ interested in sections 1 and 2 initially.
+
+ Manual pages are good for
+ reference but not always the best introduction for a novice.
+ The more you work with man pages the more familiar they
+ become. Some are very good for newbies, so always check them
+ out. The ppp man page, for example, is more like a
+ tutorial.
@@ -120,68 +130,69 @@
Apple's Mac OS
- X
- is based
- in part on &os; and includes a rich &unix; foundation in
- addition to the proprietary Apple user interface.
+ X is based
+ in part on &os; and includes a rich &unix; foundation in
+ addition to the proprietary Apple user interface.
- Many of the problems we have as newbies come from being unfamiliar
- with the UNIX commands, needed to fix our &os; problems.
- Without a UNIX background you will be faced with two things to learn
- at once. Fortunately a lot of resources are available to make this
- easier.
+ Many of the problems we have as newbies come from being
+ unfamiliar with the UNIX commands, needed to fix our &os;
+ problems. Without a UNIX background you will be faced with two
+ things to learn at once. Fortunately a lot of resources are
+ available to make this easier.
The &unix;
- Basics chapter of the &os; Handbook covers the basic
- commands and functionality of &os; operating system. Most
- of the information provided in this document is also relevant for
- any other &unix;-like operating system.
-
- There are many easy books, such as the "Dummies" guides, in any
- large book shop. If you want something really easy, take a look at
- what is available and pick one that seems to speak your language.
- Pretty soon you will want to move on to a book that gives more
- coverage.
-
- Another popular book is UNIX Power Tools by Jerry Peek,
- Tim O'Reilly and Mike Loukides, published by O'Reilly and
- Associates. It is organized as a series of short articles each of
- which solves a problem, and these articles are cross-referenced to
- other articles with related material. Though not specifically aimed
- at newbies, the design makes it ideal for a newbie with a burning
- question or the odd few minutes to browse. More elementary material
- is near the front of the book, but there are short easy articles
- throughout.
-
- -
-
A UNIX
- Introductory Course from Ohio State University is
- available online in HTML format.
+ Basics chapter of the &os; Handbook covers the basic
+ commands and functionality of &os; operating system. Most of
+ the information provided in this document is also relevant for
+ any other &unix;-like operating system.
+
+ There are many easy books, such as the "Dummies" guides,
+ in any large book shop. If you want something really easy,
+ take a look at what is available and pick one that seems to
+ speak your language. Pretty soon you will want to move on to
+ a book that gives more coverage.
+
+ Another popular book is UNIX Power Tools by
+ Jerry Peek, Tim O'Reilly and Mike Loukides, published by
+ O'Reilly and Associates. It is organized as a series of short
+ articles each of which solves a problem, and these articles
+ are cross-referenced to other articles with related material.
+ Though not specifically aimed at newbies, the design makes it
+ ideal for a newbie with a burning question or the odd few
+ minutes to browse. More elementary material is near the front
+ of the book, but there are short easy articles
+ throughout.
+
+ A UNIX
+ Introductory Course from Ohio State University is
+ available online in HTML format.
- -
-
A UNIX
- System Administration Course from Ohio State University
- is available online in HTML format.
+ A UNIX
+ System Administration Course from Ohio State University is
+ available online in HTML format.
UNIXhelp
- for Users is another introductory guide which is available in
- HTML at a mirror site near you, or can be installed on your own
- system.
-
- Many other web sites hold lists of UNIX tutorials and reference
- material. One of the best places to start looking is the
- little known search engine is another introductory guide which is available
+ in HTML at a mirror site near you, or can be installed on your
+ own system.
+
+ Many other web sites hold lists of UNIX tutorials and
+ reference material. One of the best places to start looking is
+ the little known search engine Google.
@@ -189,48 +200,47 @@
The X Window System is used with a number of operating systems,
- including &os;. The documentation for X can be found at the
- X.Org Foundation
- web site.
- Beware, much of this documentation is reference material which is
- more likely to be difficult for newcomers to digest.
-
-
- Before you can get X running exactly the way you like, you will need
- to choose a window manager.
- Visit the Window Managers for X
- page and follow the link to the introduction to find out about window
- managers, then return and read "The Basics". Then go back and compare
- the different types that are available. (Bonus: there is another
- beginners guide to UNIX there too.)
- Most, if not all, of these window managers are available to
- install from the &os; Ports Collection.
+ including &os;. The documentation for X can be found at the X.Org Foundation web site.
+ Beware, much of this documentation is reference material which
+ is more likely to be difficult for newcomers to digest.
+
+
+ Before you can get X running exactly the way you like, you
+ will need to choose a window manager. Visit the Window Managers for X page and
+ follow the link to the introduction to find out about window
+ managers, then return and read "The Basics". Then go back and
+ compare the different types that are available. (Bonus: there is
+ another beginners guide to UNIX there too.) Most, if not all, of
+ these window managers are available to install from the &os;
+ Ports Collection.
- Everyone has something to contribute to the &os; community, even
- newbies! Some are busy working with the new advocacy group and some have
- become involved with the
- Documentation Project as reviewers.
- Other &os; newbies might have particular skills and experiences to
- share, either computer related or not, or just want to meet new
- newbies and make them feel welcome. There are always people around
- who help others simply because they like to.
+ Everyone has something to contribute to the &os; community,
+ even newbies! Some are busy working with the new advocacy group
+ and some have become involved with the Documentation Project as
+ reviewers. Other &os; newbies might have particular skills and
+ experiences to share, either computer related or not, or just
+ want to meet new newbies and make them feel welcome. There are
+ always people around who help others simply because they like
+ to.
Friends who run &os; are a great resource. No book can replace
chatting on the phone or across a pizza with someone who has the
- same interests, enjoys similar accomplishments, and faces the same
- challenges. If you do not have many friends who use &os;,
+ same interests, enjoys similar accomplishments, and faces the
+ same challenges. If you do not have many friends who use &os;,
consider using your old &os; CDs to create some more.
- User groups are
- good places to meet other &os; users. If there is no one nearby,
- you might consider starting one!
+ User groups are good
+ places to meet other &os; users. If there is no one nearby, you
+ might consider starting one!
Before talking to real humans about your new skills, you might
- want to check the Jargon File.
-
+ want to check the Jargon
+ File.