From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Sun Jan 17 02:27:57 2016 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 57817A6AC39; Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 28BAF1A84; Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id u0H2RuPL004908; Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:56 GMT (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from bjk@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id u0H2Ru3Z004907; Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:56 GMT (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201601170227.u0H2Ru3Z004907@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: bjk set sender to bjk@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Benjamin Kaduk Date: Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:56 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48037 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:57 -0000 Author: bjk Date: Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016 New Revision: 48037 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48037 Log: A couple grammar/style tweaks from koobs Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Sat Jan 16 18:29:11 2016 (r48036) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016 (r48037) @@ -2490,7 +2490,7 @@

The Security Team reorganisation, first proposed to Core during a meeting at BSDCan this year by Gleb Smirnoff — core - member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer — has now + member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer (SO) — has now been accomplished. In order to improve the project's responsiveness to security alerts, to maintain security on privileged information received in confidence before general @@ -2502,7 +2502,7 @@ security problems, and connecting them with appropriate individuals within the project with the technical expertise to address the identified concerns. The SO team was cut down to just - the Security Officer and his deputy, assisted by a secretary, and + the Security Officer and their deputy, assisted by a secretary, and with input and help in drafting security advisories from former and any potential future Security Officers plus liasons with Core, Cluster Administration and Release Engineering.