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From: Jason Helfman <jgh@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Thu, 17 Mar 2016 23:33:08 +0000 (UTC)
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Subject: svn commit: r48428 - user/jgh/committers-guide
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Author: jgh
Date: Thu Mar 17 23:33:08 2016
New Revision: 48428
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48428

Log:
  - wip

Modified:
  user/jgh/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: user/jgh/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- user/jgh/committers-guide/article.xml	Thu Mar 17 18:45:01 2016	(r48427)
+++ user/jgh/committers-guide/article.xml	Thu Mar 17 23:33:08 2016	(r48428)
@@ -3151,7 +3151,7 @@ Subscribers:<co xml:id="phabricator-subs
 	<step>
 	  <para>Go to <link
 	      xlink:href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/">
-		https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/</link></para>
+	    https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/</link></para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
@@ -3197,7 +3197,7 @@ Subscribers:<co xml:id="phabricator-subs
 	<step>
 	  <para>Go to <link
 	      xlink:href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/">
-		https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/</link></para>
+	    https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/</link></para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
@@ -3226,22 +3226,28 @@ Subscribers:<co xml:id="phabricator-subs
       <title>Address Revision Feedback</title>
 
       <para>If a reviewer does not accept the change and asks
-        for a modification to the, edit the files in the local
-        client accordingly.</para>
+	for a modification to the, edit the files in the local
+	client accordingly.</para>
 
       <para>While doing so, fill in replies to any line-specific
-        comments that a reviewer may have left.  Saving replies does
-        not cause them to be sent out.  You must click the
-        <emphasis>Submit</emphasis> button for these to be sent
-        out.</para>
-
-      <para>After addressing all comments, upload the patch.
-        path should included all paths that are part of the review,
-        even if their contents haven't changed as part of this
-        update.</para>
-
+	comments that a reviewer may have left.  Saving replies does
+	not cause them to be sent out.  You must click the
+	<emphasis>Submit</emphasis> button for these to be sent
+	out.</para>
+
+      <para>After addressing all comments, upload the patch.</para>
+
+      <example>
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>arc diff --update D<replaceable>XXX path</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+      </example>
+
+      <para>The <emphasis>path</emphasis> should included all paths
+	that are part of the review, even if their contents haven't
+	changed as part of this update.</para>
     </sect2>
-  </sect1>
+
+  </sect2>
+</sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="people">
     <title>Who's Who</title>