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Date:      Sun, 28 Jun 2020 09:00:36 +0900 (JST)
From:      Hiroki Sato <hrs@FreeBSD.org>
To:        carlavilla@FreeBSD.org, bcr@freebsd.org
Cc:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r54297 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server
Message-ID:  <20200628.090036.537615336548910026.hrs@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <202006271723.05RHNAUm086528@repo.freebsd.org>
References:  <202006271723.05RHNAUm086528@repo.freebsd.org>

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Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org> wrote
  in <202006271723.05RHNAUm086528@repo.freebsd.org>:

ca> Author: carlavilla
ca> Date: Sat Jun 27 17:23:09 2020
ca> New Revision: 54297
ca> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/54297
ca>
ca> Log:
ca>   Because of the conversion of the documentation to Hugo/AsciiDoctor the
ca>   screen was moved out of the callout.
ca>
ca>   Reviewed by:	bcr@
ca>   Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25485
ca>
ca> Modified:
ca>   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml
ca>
ca> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml
ca> ==============================================================================
ca> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml	Fri Jun 26 07:04:58 2020	(r54296)
ca> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml	Sat Jun 27 17:23:09 2020	(r54297)
ca> @@ -267,10 +267,9 @@ export EOL=1275289200<co xml:id="eol-id"/></programlis
ca>  	      <literal>EOL</literal> can be derived from the date
ca>  	      listed on the web site, using the &man.date.1; utility,
ca>  	      for example:</para>
ca> -
ca> -	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>date -j -f '%Y%m%d-%H%M%S' '20090401-000000' '+%s'</userinput></screen>
ca>  	  </callout>
ca>  	</calloutlist>
ca> +	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>date -j -f '%Y%m%d-%H%M%S' '20090401-000000' '+%s'</userinput></screen>
ca>        </step>
ca>      </procedure>
ca>    </sect1>

 Please revert this or explain why this is required.  The original
 structure was valid and the callout list after this change become
 wrong.  The <screen> element must be associated to the second
 <callout>.

-- Hiroki

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