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Date:      Sun, 20 Feb 2005 14:37:39 GMT
From:      David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au>
To:        freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   www/77777: [patch] /projects/newbies.html cleaning
Message-ID:  <200502201437.j1KEbdet014496@www.freebsd.org>
Resent-Message-ID: <200502201440.j1KEeI7B040544@freefall.freebsd.org>

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>Number:         77777
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       [patch] /projects/newbies.html cleaning
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Feb 20 14:40:18 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     David Adam
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
University Computer Club, UWA
>Environment:
FreeBSD owl 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #7: Sun Feb 13 12:56:22 WST 2005     root@owl:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OWL  i386
>Description:
The Resources for Newbies page contains:
- a link that involves two clicks to get to the actual target page (in User Groups)
- several minor grammar problems
>How-To-Repeat:
- Click the link provided for User Groups - then click the h2 entry returned to actually get to the user groups page
- Self-evident
>Fix:
Also available at http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/freebsd/newbies.sgml.diff

(Submitted as part of http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/archives/00000058.html)

--- newbies.sgml.orig	Sun Feb 20 22:15:47 2005
+++ newbies.sgml	Sun Feb 20 22:30:41 2005
@@ -214,8 +214,8 @@
       managers, then return and read "The Basics". Then go back and compare
       the different types that are available. (Bonus: there's another
       beginners guide to UNIX there too.)
-      Most if not all of these window managers are available to
-      install from the FreeBSD ports collection.</p></li>
+      Most, if not all, of these window managers are available to
+      install from the FreeBSD Ports Collection.</p></li>
     </ul>
 
     <h2><a name="people">Helping other people</a></h2>
@@ -237,15 +237,15 @@
       challenges. If you don't have many friends who use FreeBSD,
       consider using your old FreeBSD CDs to create some more :-)</p>
 
-    <p><a href="../support.html#user">User groups</a> are
+    <p><a href="../usergroups.html">User groups</a> are
       good places to meet other FreeBSD users. If there's not one nearby,
-      maybe you could start one.</p>
+      you might consider starting one!</p>
     
     <p>Before talking to real humans about your new skills, you might
       want to check the <a
       href="http://catb.org/~esr/jargon/html/index.html">Jargon File</a> :-)</p>
 
-    <p>On line we have the
+    <p>Online, we have the
       <a href="http://www.welearn.com.au/freebsd/newbies/">FreeBSD-Newbies</a>;
       mailing list for non-technical discussions about matters of interest
       to newbies. Another mailing list,

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:



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