Date: Sun, 20 Feb 2005 14:37:39 GMT From: David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: www/77777: [patch] /projects/newbies.html cleaning Message-ID: <200502201437.j1KEbdet014496@www.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <200502201440.j1KEeI7B040544@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 77777 >Category: www >Synopsis: [patch] /projects/newbies.html cleaning >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 20 14:40:18 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: David Adam >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: University Computer Club, UWA >Environment: FreeBSD owl 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #7: Sun Feb 13 12:56:22 WST 2005 root@owl:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OWL i386 >Description: The Resources for Newbies page contains: - a link that involves two clicks to get to the actual target page (in User Groups) - several minor grammar problems >How-To-Repeat: - Click the link provided for User Groups - then click the h2 entry returned to actually get to the user groups page - Self-evident >Fix: Also available at http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/freebsd/newbies.sgml.diff (Submitted as part of http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/archives/00000058.html) --- newbies.sgml.orig Sun Feb 20 22:15:47 2005 +++ newbies.sgml Sun Feb 20 22:30:41 2005 @@ -214,8 +214,8 @@ managers, then return and read "The Basics". Then go back and compare the different types that are available. (Bonus: there's another beginners guide to UNIX there too.) - Most if not all of these window managers are available to - install from the FreeBSD ports collection.</p></li> + Most, if not all, of these window managers are available to + install from the FreeBSD Ports Collection.</p></li> </ul> <h2><a name="people">Helping other people</a></h2> @@ -237,15 +237,15 @@ challenges. If you don't have many friends who use FreeBSD, consider using your old FreeBSD CDs to create some more :-)</p> - <p><a href="../support.html#user">User groups</a> are + <p><a href="../usergroups.html">User groups</a> are good places to meet other FreeBSD users. If there's not one nearby, - maybe you could start one.</p> + you might consider starting one!</p> <p>Before talking to real humans about your new skills, you might want to check the <a href="http://catb.org/~esr/jargon/html/index.html">Jargon File</a> :-)</p> - <p>On line we have the + <p>Online, we have the <a href="http://www.welearn.com.au/freebsd/newbies/">FreeBSD-Newbies</a> mailing list for non-technical discussions about matters of interest to newbies. Another mailing list, >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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