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Subject: www/77777: [patch] /projects/newbies.html cleaning
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>Number: 77777
>Category: www
>Synopsis: [patch] /projects/newbies.html cleaning
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: medium
>Responsible: freebsd-www
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 20 14:40:18 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: David Adam
>Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
University Computer Club, UWA
>Environment:
FreeBSD owl 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #7: Sun Feb 13 12:56:22 WST 2005 root@owl:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OWL i386
>Description:
The Resources for Newbies page contains:
- a link that involves two clicks to get to the actual target page (in User Groups)
- several minor grammar problems
>How-To-Repeat:
- Click the link provided for User Groups - then click the h2 entry returned to actually get to the user groups page
- Self-evident
>Fix:
Also available at http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/freebsd/newbies.sgml.diff
(Submitted as part of http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/archives/00000058.html)
--- newbies.sgml.orig Sun Feb 20 22:15:47 2005
+++ newbies.sgml Sun Feb 20 22:30:41 2005
@@ -214,8 +214,8 @@
managers, then return and read "The Basics". Then go back and compare
the different types that are available. (Bonus: there's another
beginners guide to UNIX there too.)
- Most if not all of these window managers are available to
- install from the FreeBSD ports collection.
+ Most, if not all, of these window managers are available to
+ install from the FreeBSD Ports Collection.
@@ -237,15 +237,15 @@
challenges. If you don't have many friends who use FreeBSD,
consider using your old FreeBSD CDs to create some more :-)
- User groups are
+
User groups are
good places to meet other FreeBSD users. If there's not one nearby,
- maybe you could start one.
+ you might consider starting one!
Before talking to real humans about your new skills, you might
want to check the Jargon File :-)
- On line we have the
+
Online, we have the
FreeBSD-Newbies
mailing list for non-technical discussions about matters of interest
to newbies. Another mailing list,
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted: