Date: Sun, 27 Sep 2015 21:32:58 +0000 (UTC) From: Allan Jude <allanjude@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r47442 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails Message-ID: <201509272132.t8RLWwOu092790@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: allanjude Date: Sun Sep 27 21:32:57 2015 New Revision: 47442 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47442 Log: Fix grammar in the jails handbook section PR: 203350 Submitted by: Leonhard Campo <campol2@rpi.edu> Approved by: bcr (mentor) Sponsored by: ScaleEngine Inc. Sponsored by: EuroBSDCon DevSummit Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Sat Sep 26 16:57:40 2015 (r47441) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Sun Sep 27 21:32:57 2015 (r47442) @@ -89,9 +89,9 @@ allowed to perform operations to the system outside of the associated jail environment.</para> - <para>This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology are - how to use &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for system - administrators, but their basic usage can also be useful for + <para>This chapter provides an overview of the terminology and + commands for managing &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for both system + administrators, and advanced users.</para> <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
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