From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jun 29 04:25:45 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4F39D16A469 for ; Fri, 29 Jun 2007 04:25:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from wr-out-0506.google.com (wr-out-0506.google.com [64.233.184.233]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F333F13C44B for ; Fri, 29 Jun 2007 04:25:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by wr-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id 70so630468wra for ; Thu, 28 Jun 2007 21:25:44 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition; b=Krv6bJXaL+o157FKPIkASNwdpW/a1PWhanMHoxNWJUyR0TAt5W1rTV7yI4XC/FMiOM4MtMsqX4TdhUhKFj69Zn+E7pJCub1dprBVYbU5W469A67qGfLQ3wqTNdJBcLmnNvXVoQss92ram4RsqHyyN4aBK6cX5TVpdqA8qvyrgu8= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition; b=DQQgE04RJamBrTDlBMjpqE7358DhnRZFoW2FPMQBedLS9lGiqa/uBzzF4seMoh8f2bkMCGolfJGjrxWWqDvWdKc4kcYutci64+/VNUt+nA5NgOO7Z6JEPBbtl4nJcO49Zxy2QlYri7OCZfEkrOfb5nJhw+D8hiGrDyTlPjO7BEY= Received: by 10.142.83.4 with SMTP id g4mr154928wfb.1183089667095; Thu, 28 Jun 2007 21:01:07 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.1.8 with HTTP; Thu, 28 Jun 2007 21:01:07 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0706282101k26619aa4r1f36d5e9da72e07c@mail.gmail.com> Date: Thu, 28 Jun 2007 23:01:07 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline Subject: minor update to handbook introduction chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 29 Jun 2007 04:25:45 -0000 Is this worth send-pr-ing? en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.orig 2007-06-28 22:50:50.000000000 -0500 +++ chapter.sgml 2007-06-28 22:57:53.000000000 -0500 @@ -91,8 +91,8 @@ TCP/IP networking Strong TCP/IP networking with - support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP, - and NIS. This means that your FreeBSD machine can + support for industry standards such as DHCP, NFS, NIS, PPP, + and SLIP. This means that your FreeBSD machine can interoperate easily with other systems as well as act as an enterprise server, providing vital functions such as NFS (remote file access) and email services or putting your @@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ CSRG group, with some enhancements from NetBSD, OpenBSD, 386BSD, and the Free Software Foundation. - Since our release of FreeBSD 2.0 in late 94, the performance, + Since our release of FreeBSD 2.0 in late 1994, the performance, feature set, and stability of FreeBSD has improved dramatically. The largest change is a revamped virtual memory system with a merged SLIP was modern in 4.3 BSD -- perhaps we no longer need to have it heading the list of industry standards we support? ``late 94'' is just bad grammar -- either use the full form 1994 (as above), or add an apostrophe. -Ben Kaduk