From nobody Sun Oct 30 07:36:41 2022 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4N0SlY4Qv4z4gB71 for ; Sun, 30 Oct 2022 07:36:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4N0SlY13pDz3Dsr for ; Sun, 30 Oct 2022 07:36:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4N0SlY01gXznvH for ; Sun, 30 Oct 2022 07:36:40 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 29U7aeIo025749 for ; Sun, 30 Oct 2022 07:36:40 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 29U7aet3025748 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sun, 30 Oct 2022 07:36:40 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 267428] FDP primer: Writing style: corrections to indents/levels et cetera Date: Sun, 30 Oct 2022 07:36:41 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: new X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: bug_id short_desc product version rep_platform op_sys bug_status bug_severity priority component assigned_to reporter Message-ID: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1667115401; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=l1MvvouxjBMlmjuGsnU/zUvjbUayqUD/RvNb3hByLiQ=; b=qvuP79iorX2hTj1fGmV/VZWVVAMlH+xesRD0z9MZ9Vgc1QYD0hZprBQieYRHvfbelNi2w+ xfbNZIqQSP/+D/rGlq37ObpI388Z8SUJidj7beMtshMxQqwb/ANXbw260WmDcV4hP7pHaW 2l5y6oJSBX8rTOWSBMjKwqIp1pl0b4zAWbJ5jcitFbMsXhiKhHLilmhOsSKmUDQmr8n/Bb ZTbHcpwCs01hx2/ksHIfaJhb6PU1WZL57CfEOzw2lFAcdTomIIF5zuS0O4b1ZMHECYcv0T D77mjYTyygn0uO/TZBEHQp0W612sLhFY8wip+Nlls9deX/4mcAE5pEYjPzY6YQ== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1667115401; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=W4Inst3H5OG30S04mNpQ3apZVBZkeW1it6Lx2QGySU75lUF+4crqNHjQzejIbrlanyI+wW KzdqE3XSyhKDHvl+gg/Hp0mqFNGKL+BIzzG76G4JqEDXUV78pR7ynWkJdMRtb+rRwHIuVa meXefap6OO4I33RfREeAu1yMYlTpLPgoaGuOlKhDmx3OrIhGXzoptLgwgTQI/2LMM+junE eYrZ8iBzN0rQBlioUkIfagPKgXe8FTOoYA5HLryZsaecp0CCbK7U7SzEwaDPCG7yNvbC3B Eigyfza//cLySaZXKiEVDlB3EDsghU+4DYxE8cUruEibYi3SU1zveyttdsOzdA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D267428 Bug ID: 267428 Summary: FDP primer: Writing style: corrections to indents/levels et cetera Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Some People Priority: --- Component: Books & Articles Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: grahamperrin@freebsd.org Spun off from bug 267425 comment 2.=20 At a glance:=20 * various indents have been lost * heading levels have gone awry =E2=80=93 'Acronyms' as a subsection of 'One sentence per line' is nonsensi= cal, and so on. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=