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Date:      Tue, 14 Jul 2015 22:32:17 +0000
From:      Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Andrew Turner <andrew@fubar.geek.nz>
Cc:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r285563 - head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes
Message-ID:  <20150714223217.GP15828@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <20150714230134.017a4512@bender.Home>
References:  <201507142010.t6EKAAGD014980@repo.freebsd.org> <20150714230134.017a4512@bender.Home>

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On Tue, Jul 14, 2015 at 11:01:34PM +0100, Andrew Turner wrote:
> > Modified: head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
> > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
> > --- head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Tue
> > Jul 14 20:10:07 2015	(r285562) +++
> > head/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Tue Jul
> > 14 20:10:09 2015	(r285563) @@ -773,9 +773,6 @@ system.</para>
> >        </important>
> > =20
> > -      <para revision=3D"277962" arch=3D"powerpc">Support for booting
> > -	relocatable kernels has been added.</para>
> > -
> >        <para revision=3D"279189" contrib=3D"sponsor" sponsor=3D"&ff;"
> >  	arch=3D"powerpc">Kernel support for Vector-Scalar eXtension
> >  	(<acronym>VSX</acronym>) found on POWER7 and POWER8 hardware
> > @@ -786,6 +783,10 @@
> >  	&powerpc; processors has been overhaulded to improve
> >  	concurrency.</para>
> > =20
> > +      <para revision=3D"282727">Support for booting relocatable kernels
> > +	has been extended to non-<acronym>EFI</acronym>
> > +	systems.</para>
>=20
> r282727 is moving the relocation code for the loader to a common place.
> It has nothing to do with making the kernel relocatable, but as a prep
> for r282731.
>=20

Do you have a suggested rewording?  I can't think of another way to word
this, since 'Support for [...]' still seems relevant for the context.

Glen


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