Date: Sat, 24 May 2014 15:24:58 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44935 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd Message-ID: <201405241524.s4OFOwHZ051567@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Sat May 24 15:24:58 2014 New Revision: 44935 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44935 Log: Remove redundant markup and words around filename tags. Sprinkle capitalizations over title tags to make igor happy. Whitespace fixes will follow next. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml Sat May 24 15:13:09 2014 (r44934) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/nanobsd/article.xml Sat May 24 15:24:58 2014 (r44935) @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ <title>NanoBSD Howto</title> <sect2 xml:id="design"> - <title>The design of NanoBSD</title> + <title>The Design of NanoBSD</title> <para>Once the image is present on the medium, it is possible to boot <application>NanoBSD</application>. The mass storage @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ are expected to persist after the system restarts.</para> <example> - <title>Making persistent changes to <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename></title> + <title>Making Persistent Changes to <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename></title> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>vi /etc/resolv.conf</userinput> [...] @@ -140,13 +140,13 @@ all times is not a good idea, especially if the <application>NanoBSD</application> system runs off a mass storage medium that may be adversely affected by a large number - of writes to the partition (i.e. when the filesystem syncer + of writes to the partition (like when the filesystem syncer flushes data to the system disks).</para> </note> </sect2> <sect2> - <title>Building a NanoBSD image</title> + <title>Building a NanoBSD Image</title> <para>A <application>NanoBSD</application> image is built using a simple <filename>nanobsd.sh</filename> shell script, which can @@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ </sect2> <sect2> - <title>Customizing a NanoBSD image</title> + <title>Customizing a NanoBSD Image</title> <para>This is probably the most important and most interesting feature of <application>NanoBSD</application>. This is also @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ <para>Invocation of the following command will force the <filename>nanobsd.sh</filename> to read its configuration from - the <filename>myconf.nano</filename> file located in the current + <filename>myconf.nano</filename> located in the current directory:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>sh nanobsd.sh -c myconf.nano</userinput></screen> @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ </itemizedlist> <sect3> - <title>Configuration options</title> + <title>Configuration Options</title> <para>With configuration settings, it is possible to configure options passed to both the <buildtarget>buildworld</buildtarget> @@ -264,14 +264,14 @@ <listitem> <para><literal>FlashDevice</literal> — Defines what type of - media to use. Check the <filename>FlashDevice.sub</filename> - file for more details.</para> + media to use. Check <filename>FlashDevice.sub</filename> + for more details.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> </sect3> <sect3> - <title>Custom functions</title> + <title>Custom Functions</title> <para>It is possible to fine-tune <application>NanoBSD</application> using shell functions in @@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ customize_cmd cust_etc_size</programlist </sect3> <sect3> - <title>Adding packages</title> + <title>Adding Packages</title> <para>Packages can be added to a <application>NanoBSD</application> image using a custom function. The following function will install @@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ customize_cmd install_packages</programl </sect3> <sect3> - <title>Configuration file example</title> + <title>Configuration File Example</title> <para>A complete example of a configuration file for building a custom <application>NanoBSD</application> image can be:</para> @@ -414,7 +414,7 @@ customize_cmd cust_nobeastie</programlis <para>The most important difference of this step from the initial <application>NanoBSD</application> installation is that - now instead of using the <filename>_.disk.full</filename> file + now instead of using <filename>_.disk.full</filename> (which contains an image of the entire disk), the <filename>_.disk.image</filename> image is installed (which contains an image of a single system partition).</para>
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