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Subject: svn commit: r42846 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs
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Author: eadler
Date: Sat Oct  5 06:01:01 2013
New Revision: 42846
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42846

Log:
  Fix grammar.
  
  Submitted by:	gjb

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml	Sat Oct  5 05:59:23 2013	(r42845)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml	Sat Oct  5 06:01:01 2013	(r42846)
@@ -17,7 +17,8 @@
 
 		      <p>FreeBSD is an operating system for a <a
 			href="&base;/platforms/">variety of
-			platforms</a> focussing on features, speed, and
+			platforms</a> which focuses on features,
+			speed, and
 			stability.  It is derived from BSD, the version of
 			&unix; developed at the
 			University of California, Berkeley.  It is developed