From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Oct 5 05:43:28 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 17474E00; Sat, 5 Oct 2013 05:43:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mail0.glenbarber.us (mail0.glenbarber.us [208.86.227.67]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id DFFBC2D72; Sat, 5 Oct 2013 05:43:27 +0000 (UTC) Received: from glenbarber.us (70.15.88.86.res-cmts.sewb.ptd.net [70.15.88.86]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) (Authenticated sender: gjb) by mail0.glenbarber.us (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 2F39D1355; Sat, 5 Oct 2013 05:43:26 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.8.3 mail0.glenbarber.us 2F39D1355 Authentication-Results: mail0.glenbarber.us; dkim=none reason="no signature"; dkim-adsp=none Date: Sat, 5 Oct 2013 01:43:24 -0400 From: Glen Barber To: Eitan Adler Subject: Re: svn commit: r42844 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs Message-ID: <20131005054324.GC3273@glenbarber.us> References: <201310050529.r955TjED049437@svn.freebsd.org> <20131005053825.GB3273@glenbarber.us> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20131005053825.GB3273@glenbarber.us> X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 10.0-ALPHA4 amd64 User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 05 Oct 2013 05:43:28 -0000 --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sat, Oct 05, 2013 at 01:38:25AM -0400, Glen Barber wrote: > On Sat, Oct 05, 2013 at 05:29:45AM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml > > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml Sat Oct 5 04:50:49 2013 (r42= 843) > > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml Sat Oct 5 05:29:45 2013 (r42= 844) > > @@ -15,19 +15,15 @@ > > =20 > >

What is FreeBSD?

> > =20 > > -

FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for x86 > > - compatible (including Pentium® and Athlon™), > > - amd64, x86-64 and x64 > > - compatible (including Opteron™, Athlon™64, > > - and EM64T), ARM, IA-64, PowerPC, PC-98 and UltraSPARC® > > - architectures. It is derived from BSD, the version of > > +

FreeBSD is an operating system for a > + href=3D"&base;/platforms/">variety of > > + platforms focussing on features, speed, and >=20 > ^^^^^^^^^ > Focusing? >=20 In fact, I'd remove the 'ing' entirely. "which focuses on[...]". Glen --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.21 (FreeBSD) iQIcBAEBCAAGBQJST6b8AAoJELls3eqvi17QB0YP/ArGdsAx6Wpols3i8ST0/ZfC gavpRbWoeBcQYpe0Kp8DxBXasnO43FWeJ1Bn4SqT5pc6vjbvfvjLuescGJ3+mMNa DkDDBJFeJ8JtAqkubb00iin1lH0XO1y4ielo1cmvwAu5Z0396i3FG3wukebJvNQU DUX9Y36mcVJsFT3Sr1OB1W3l7vMN3NXm6iYPySZ5XJHV7RVfaT9174d4txGWvPVo /nMyzb88Xd5Fk2wY3QDQ+CfiQQ7ZBFWchNjXU1e+SAcJuxYS/B/qjj/rkp0UCE7e fU/8QgeZYdJDgp1I3oRpwhtzDwUKAyFaLxZjd8Y5HiFNnqSAUDmbcku37aJkM8Jk wh4qsBIVQW1wRQTlInOChmJ8G53kj+ZnjhPFcCBXDaBX/zhY/2E0rem29iDK+15x lHvIcgg0u9ZimFj+6FOBBPgplSrwizysoNlrbXvNBPz9PmprJrR/Jt5QMNSCyPqn 2oi5dydHEJ8h9Mnn5G4HeKqn6ID1zA0LsCHa3DuOx6YN5DKHdPnhQxZ9SugGliBG yh3eDcMxTpTUGEtXiFlhCXhqipYQLNTI0TBgCdQHoD4lxIhNBtuUbazuzr84SEKA kD1rpoDkic1M48aYeGYdEXPIXrE2lmcfCjBPr7KwGA5/i2E5NCxzo4izk86JD1Fs oyO22IIRyAu6TtNWJEia =7LHX -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms--