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>Number:         1448
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       bogons in porting.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-bugs
>State:          open
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Jul 31 03:30:00 PDT 1996
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     David E. O'Brien
>Organization:
University of California, Davis
>Release:        FreeBSD 2.1.5-RELEASE i386
>Environment:

	porting.sgml / handbook 18.2.5 "Porting an existing piece of free
	software" from web version of handbook of 30-July-96

>Description:

	porting.sgml still says ${NCFTP} is the fetch command

	    The default actions are done by the <tt>bsd.port.mk</tt>
	    targets `<tt>do-&lt;something&gt;</tt>'.  For example, the
	    commands to extract a port are in the target
	    `<tt>do-extract</tt>'.  If you are not happy with the
	    default target, and you cannot fix it by redefining the
	    `<tt>do-&lt;something&gt;</tt>' target in your Makefile.

	The language here "If you are not happy with the default target,
	and you cannot fix it by redefining the ``do-<something>'' target
	in your Makefile" does not make sense (and is not a complete
	sentance).
	

>How-To-Repeat:

	n/a

>Fix:

>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted: