Date: Thu, 2 Aug 2018 10:35:36 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r52072 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction Message-ID: <201808021035.w72AZaCF013933@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Thu Aug 2 10:35:36 2018 New Revision: 52072 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52072 Log: Introduction: use slightly more modern language Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Wed Aug 1 17:16:29 2018 (r52071) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Thu Aug 2 10:35:36 2018 (r52072) @@ -198,10 +198,7 @@ <itemizedlist> <listitem> - <para>World Wide Web servers<indexterm> - <primary>web servers</primary> - </indexterm> - (standard or secure [SSL])</para> + <para>Web servers</para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -233,7 +230,7 @@ <indexterm> <primary>email</primary> </indexterm> - Electronic Mail servers</para> + Email servers</para> </listitem> <listitem>
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