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On 08/26/10 20:34, Warren Block wrote:
> This is from a forums thread, where I posted a rewrite of that poor
> first sentence:
>
> http://forums.freebsd.org/showpost.php?p=99145&postcount=7

Sorry, Warren, I did not see your version :(


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