From owner-freebsd-doc Mon Jul 22 22: 0:15 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2B68937B400 for ; Mon, 22 Jul 2002 22:00:10 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E0FC743E42 for ; Mon, 22 Jul 2002 22:00:09 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.4/8.12.4) with ESMTP id g6N509JU068124 for ; Mon, 22 Jul 2002 22:00:09 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.4/8.12.4/Submit) id g6N509gL068123; Mon, 22 Jul 2002 22:00:09 -0700 (PDT) Date: Mon, 22 Jul 2002 22:00:09 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <200207230500.g6N509gL068123@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: From: parv@subdimension.com Subject: Re: docs/40911: [PATCH] Minor improvements for /usr/share/man/man8/usbd.8.gz Reply-To: parv@subdimension.com Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/40911; it has been noted by GNATS. From: parv@subdimension.com To: Chris Pepper Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/40911: [PATCH] Minor improvements for /usr/share/man/man8/usbd.8.gz Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 01:00:36 -0400 in message <20020723025338.50E5FA970@guest.reppep.com>, wrote Chris Pepper thusly... > > > >Number: 40911 > >Category: docs ... > It does two things. > Through opening the > .Pa /dev/usb0 , > .Pa /dev/usb1 , > -etc. devices, it enables the kernel to do handle change requests from > +etc., devices, it enables the kernel to handle change requests from > attached hubs. comma after "etc." is incorrect as "etc." is a part of the list containing usb[01] devices. to see this another way... apples, oranges, pears, etc. fruits were being sold at the fare. > Whenever a device is attached or > detached the list of actions read from > .Pa /etc/usbd.conf > -are searched for a matching entry. > +is searched for a matching entry. actions are being searched, already being read from the file, for a match. as the sentence stands (w/ or w/o patch), it is not the file that is being for a particular action. in any case, a comma after "...attached or detached" will be most appropriate to read... Whenever a device is attached or detached, the list of actions read from /etc/usbd.conf are searched for a matching entry. - parv -- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message