From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon May 10 14:56:53 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5D72416A4CE; Mon, 10 May 2004 14:56:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: from pittgoth.com (14.zlnp1.xdsl.nauticom.net [209.195.149.111]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BFDA943D49; Mon, 10 May 2004 14:56:52 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from localhost (acs-24-154-235-189.zoominternet.net [24.154.235.189]) (authenticated bits=0) by pittgoth.com (8.12.11/8.12.11) with ESMTP id i4ALuotb063822 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Mon, 10 May 2004 17:56:51 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Mon, 10 May 2004 17:57:17 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes To: Josef El-Rayes Message-Id: <20040510175717.430d3658@localhost> In-Reply-To: <20040510215309.GA677@jenny.daemon.li> References: <20040510165153.37575e53@localhost> <20040510215309.GA677@jenny.daemon.li> X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 0.9.10claws (GTK+ 1.2.10; i386-portbld-freebsd5.2) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org cc: Robert Watson Subject: Re: [REVIEW REQUEST]: New chapter on MAC (draft) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 10 May 2004 21:56:53 -0000 On Mon, 10 May 2004 23:53:09 +0200 Josef El-Rayes wrote: > Tom Rhodes wrote: > > Hey FreeBSD-doc, > > > > I've written a new chapter for the handbook on implementing the > > MAC features in 5.X. It includes configuration, testing, module > > description that augments the section we already have, and shows > > examples of the policies. > > > > I'm not worried about whitespace right now, only correctness in the > > information presented, markup, and wording. > > hi tom! > Hi Josef! Hows that donation? :) > i had a look at your work and found 4 very minor mistakes. > i attach my patch. Thank you very much for the quick review! > > greets, josef > > ps: looks very nice, both the framework and the documentation, looks > like i have to test this soon :) Thanks! But I can only take credit for 'some' documenation and not really any code. :) -- Tom Rhodes