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Date: Mon, 10 May 2004 17:57:17 -0400
From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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On Mon, 10 May 2004 23:53:09 +0200
Josef El-Rayes <josef@FreeBSD.org> wrote:

> Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> > Hey FreeBSD-doc,
> > 
> > I've written a new chapter for the handbook on implementing the
> > MAC features in 5.X.  It includes configuration, testing, module
> > description that augments the section we already have, and shows
> > examples of the policies.
> > 
> > I'm not worried about whitespace right now, only correctness in the
> > information presented, markup, and wording.
> 
> hi tom!
> 

Hi Josef!  Hows that donation?  :)

> i had a look at your work and found 4 very minor mistakes.
> i attach my patch.

Thank you very much for the quick review!

> 
> greets, josef
> 
> ps: looks very nice, both the framework and the documentation, looks
> like i have to test this soon :)

Thanks!  But I can only take credit for 'some' documenation and
not really any code.  :)

-- 
Tom Rhodes